There’s Always That Damned Haunted Room – Part 5

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« – Yeah? Said Jack in a very low voice.

  • Mister, it’s the hotel clerk.
  • Did… what do you want?
  • Is everything all right for you?
  • Yeah… why?
  • Just heard some… noise. You know…
  • Well… what kind of noise?
  • Like someone… like you weren’t alone…
  • Ha… no. As far as I know, I am alone.
  • It’s okay… if there someone with you… you know, one those ladies of the night…
  • No! God no! No I promise you, I’m all alone here.
  • You wouldn’t be the first customer doing that y’know.
  • No! No! I don’t have prostitutes in my room.
  • I know who you are. Would not be a surprise y’know. Fame and money get you some puss…
  • I said no God damn it!
  • Won’t you shut the hell up here!
  • Sorry madame! I’m just checking out with a client.
  • Well it’s the fucking middle of the night ! Damn! You guys gonna have some bad rating on internet!
  • Oh! Well, we’re used to it here, so go on.
  • Jesus! I will get you fired!
  • Ok boomer, whatever.
  • Little asshole!
  • What a distinguished vocabulary you have here!
  • Don’t mess with me boy!
  • It’s okay!
  • No it’s not!
  • Holy shit!
  • Boy, you think you can fuck with me?
  • Sorry madame!
  • It’s America asshole! We carry guns for a reason!
  • Yes, right, I’m sorry!
  • Jack! I told you I will find you! »

Gunshots erupt, door bust open. Jack’s ex-wife enters the room.

« – His this a fucking dream?

  • You shit! It’s probably more of a nightmare!
  • Shit! What the fuck is going on!
  • I haven’t forgotten Jacky boy! »

The woman shoots right at the writer.

Jack woke up. In sweat, once again.

The pack of cigarettes is still here, untouched.

« – Is this a fucking nightmare once again?! »

He tens up, waiting for something to happen. A couple of minutes passe without something happening excepted a dull silent.

Jack look at the ceiling, the smoke stain look like a rabbit, like the first time he entered the room.

« – That’s… the fucking sign! »

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There’s Always That Damn Hotel Room – Part 3

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The need for a smoke came back stronger than ever. He literally needed to blow off some steam.

Once again, he had to face this inner demons of temptation. After all, just one, to cool off. But this is the cliché excuse to get back to smoking.

He took a glass of water instead, risking drinking it from the sink, with those terrible drought that had been hitting California recently, their was a significant health risk of drinking water from the tap. But, this was better to drink a potentially cancerous glass of liquid than to definitely inhaling cancer right into his body.

He laid back in the bed, looking at the spot on the celling. He couldn’t see anymore animals nor anything close to what he had saw earlier on it. This was proof that his brain was tired.

Dosing off once again, he felt into a dream, a nightmare in fact.

He was back in the fancy hallway of the Monclar Hotel. Alone. He could hear a scream, a women scream, along with terrifying scritching noise.

The hallway was well lit by a big crystal chandelier hanging from the roof to a few inches of the floor. Jack T. was almost blinded by the flashing crystal light marking his sight with those purple spots on the retina.

He tried to yell his wife name, Clara, but the only sound coming out off his mouth was an animal like groaning. The more he tried to yell, the more the groaning was loud. When he decided to put his hand in front of his eyes to stop the light from burning them, he realised that his hands had become those of a beast.

Long thin finger, with long and thick black nails, and his skin was covered in dense black fur.

By reflex, he took a glance at his lower body part but nothing had changed.

He tried to move around, going up the right set of stairs, the one that leaded to his room. He moved pretty fast. Too fast even. He could control his pace. When he finally managed to reach the top of the set of stairs he took the direction of the corridor leading to his and his wife room. He ran so fast that he blew past the long corridor, pulverising the window at the end of the hallway and ended up in the snow, outside of the hotel that suddenly exploded.

Jack woke up in sweat. Maybe because of the dream, but also because the TV was on fire. He got up from the bed, coughing from the poisonous fumes filling the room and ran to the door. Of course, it was locked. He remembered, for once, where he had put the hotel room key, on the TV stand. The television and the stand where devoured by thick black and red flames. The key was definitely lost. He prompted himself to the window, but he could not understand the mechanism for opening it. Why do hotel room all have those complicated windows opening mechanism along with those complicated showers fonction?

As he was thinking about this, he felt like writing it down on his notebook. He didn’t really cared about his wallet and laptops nor his trousers. He didn’t wanted to have his precious notebook burned, with all these wisdom thought and ideas, going up in flames and destroyed forever, never to be recovered. Jack never trusted his memory capacity, writers had a tendency to forget things pretty fast because they often think about the thousands of things they could write about. Their brains are often on maximum overdrive, keeping them up at night, pushing them to daydream, or nightdream.

Even more interesting stuff that he had to write about on the pages of his beloved notebook that was just standing on the bedside table.

He quickly leaped next to the bed to pick it up. But the notebook was stuck, impossible to grab off the table, like it was glued to the wood.

The writer tried his best to lift it up, planting his nails on the woods, bleeding. The effort made him suffocate even more. He wouldn’t give up, nails were coming off his fingers, shards penetrating deeply in his fingertips.

He felt a hand on his shoulder yanking him.

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Just Another Haunted Hotel Room Story – Part 1

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FYI: I am not fluent in English, I’m trying to be at least. Sorry for the potentials mistakes. Feel free to correct me in the comment section.

Jack T. had landed in Los Angeles, California, at 3 AM from a red-eye flight from Seattle.

After renting a car, he drove south, toward San Diego, where he had a book signing session on the afternoon for his last work, « Travel With A King ». Not his proudest nor his masterpiece. It was a book with no soul, just for the money.

Since this incident in this fancy hotel in Colorado a couple of years ago, he didn’t felt that the writing mojo he used to have was still there. It disappeared in the fire, along with his favorite typewriter, that good old Adler, his loyal comrade since the beginning of his writing career had disappeared. He also lost his wife and little boy. They aren’t dead, they just don’t want to see him ever again since that dreadful day.

On the interstate 5, driving while Jim Morrison sang lyrics that matched the present moment about driving down a freeway after midnight, Jack felt the heavy weight of sleep affecting his eyelid, therefore his driving. He decided to not taunt the devil, and to stop at the first motel with available vacancy to catch a shower and sleep.

After passing the camp Peddleton, he arrived at Carlsbad where a motel with a view on the Pacific Ocean was available.

He parked his car and took a quick look at the hotel. It was a reflex of his job, he used to think, to take time to watch how things looked and made him feel.

This hotel had nothing really noticeable. It was a regular motel, on three level. The picture perfect of an American west coast hotel. No balcony, doors aligned on three levels directly accessible from the outside. You could stay and watch every tenant going in or out of their room.

At the desk, a young man raised his head from his phone as Jack approached.

« – Welcome to the Mo’Hotel. In need of room? He said in a atone voice.

  • Well… yes. It’s say on your billboard that their’s vacancy available. That’s why I’m here.
  • Yeah… so?
  • I’ll take a room buddy.
  • Alright. Sea side view?
  • Yeah, why not.
  • It coast more with a view on the sea.
  • Yeah, give me a room. I just want a good night of sleep.
  • Room 313, the third floor. Here’s the key.
  • Thanks.
  • It’s 35$.
  • Yeah, alright.
  • Also, it’s a weird room.
  • Sorry what?
  • It’s a room with… things.
  • What are you on about?
  • Previous clients complained of noise, knocking on the door. They found their clothes and stuff in a mess, things displaced and weird things like that.
  • Well, that’s sound fun. Do you have some creepy weirdos as client lately?
  • You want my opinion?
  • Yeah…
  • It’s a ghost! It’s been going on for a bit now. Every time I have to go in this room, I do a little prayer even thought I don’t believe in God.
  • Jesus! You surely know how to ease a client!
  • There’s a weird feeling to that room. You’ll probably feel it.
  • Alright. I just want to sleep, maybe a few hours of sleep will not disturb anything that linger here.
  • Well, I hope for you. I’ve seen your face somewhere but I can’t remember where I saw it. Are you famous or something?
  • No. I just write on papers for a living. Anyway, good night buddy.
  • Yeah, good luck… night mister.
  • Thanks! »

Jack started to think that hotels weren’t his things. Everytime, something weird happened when he rented a room, one time, it coasted him his mariage.

As he climbs the series of stairs, a feeling of dread took over his body. Every cells in his body was telling him to leave.

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