No mechanism to measure
The velocity of human mind
A fire-wing rocket of fancy
Propels into the colossal
Parameter of Milky Way
Meander in the scarlet world
Dance in the ring of Saturn
Oar the ferry Moon in
Cerulean sea of Heavens
Glitter in constellation
An explorer of alien terrain
Psyche is a satellite of no orbit
Blasts off in Utopian trajectory
No coaster brake to control
Till the cycle of life blows out


All this ferocity is caused by our velocity,
We live with false intensity, a life of feathered density,
Arrive for the departure of the legendary archer –
A drowning generation in an ocean of sensation.
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Poetic comment… Thanks
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Wow~
Nice.
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Thanks
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Very very nice – such a large poem, straddles so much space.
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I have traveled the Milky Way of my mind.
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Very interesting, loving the photo, so beautiful!
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nice composition.. 🙂
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That’s one great poem, Vigil. You have done a great job! Thank you for sharing, many blessings and much love to you. 🙂
Subhan Zein
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yes, very very nice !
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both image and words equally beautiful, poetry times 2…
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“psyche is a satellite with no orbit..”…my fav line. 🙂
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the velocity of illusion? easy…
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Very nice
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Outstanding poem.Thank you for visiting my side.Wishing you a wonderful day.Jalal
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A master piece! Typical of the mind! Lovely words; well crafted and put together. Beautifully done! 🙂
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Enjoyed this rocketing poem very much; thank you for subscribing 🙂
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Reblogged this on VigilKumar.
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Enjoyed as much the second time around as the first. I think that’s one of the tests of a good poem. Bravo, Virgil. Poem on …
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Thank you for liking my Rain Story and Bereft, and supporting my writing. I am honored you would take the time with one who hasn’t written as much poetry as you. I am enjoying your work. I kike your confidence with the language. Cheerleading your continued success. Diana
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Nice composition. I like your words..”Till the cycle of life blows out”
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