Young Writers Society

Hmm... I guess I try this S'more reviewing method today for fun. Graham Cracker: So, what is the father's name? Daniel? Kind of hard to tell... Anyway, it seems to ...

self reflection

Really short. Gay ship basically. Inspired by The song of Achillies by Madison Miller

Ooooh, okay. So, first off respect for creating your own OC and adding some flair to the original storyline. I also think that you portrayed their hesitation perfectly, it really ...

First off, I love that this was inspired by TV girl. Second of all this poem's short but realistic. I love that you've written about SH because honestly it needs ...

Okay. I like it, it's an actual novel and although I haven't read the previous chapters (although trust that I will be doubling down reading with a cup of tea) ...

yay :D

this is a really touching poem. the way you used the pun in the title (i confirmed it from a reply of yours but thats what i initially interpreted as ...

Sebastian (from my song/poem “🃏❤️‍🩹 Parental regrets ❤️‍🩹🃏”):

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the jinxed S’more? Top Graham Cracker - Mikey gets help from a guy named Arthur ...

as i read this poem, i more and more felt like the one 'sacrificing'. this poem makes me think of what inhumane things people do with worshipping a divine entity ...

Hello hello ^^ Awesome poetry again! Let's check it part by part (aka my new favourite way to review poems lol) "I saw your smile. Not a normal one. A ...

Solid choices for taking care of someone in the throws of cramps in the first stanza :3 I like how the second stanza flows, how the words match and rhyme ...

HAI HAI FELLOW NEW YWS MEMBER !!!!!!! :3!!! I am actually transfixed by this poem! There is something so haunting and quiet about the way you’ve turned a simple adverb ...

Maybe the truth would heal. Maybe the truth would kneel. before the suffering appears.

HAI HAI YWS MEMBER!!!!!!! I am actually transfixed by this entire chapter! :O! Looking at all these parts together makes the whole story feel so much more intense... it is ...