I’ve always nurtured a desire to understand the writing process. While my own writing is moving at its (cough) natural pace (cough), I diverted my time over the past few weeks to indulge in a more academic purpose.
Today you’re going to read about my script breakdown of a Hindi TV show.
That’s right – those primetime dailies that feed on the tears of every husband who has surrendered his power over the remote control.
This self-study began as an experiment to acquaint myself with the grammar of our Hindi dailies. There ought to be something to learn when millions (literally, MILLIONS) of viewers across the country are committing themselves so religiously. So in a move that impressed no-one in my house, I dived in and got my hands dirty.
I sat down and tracked the most watched show on Hindi TV for an entire month!
**sound of crickets break the awkward silence**
Don’t judge me, man. You’ll realise the kind of service I’m doing here for science, ok? FOR SCIENCE!
Diya Aur Baati Hum (We are the Light & the Lamp)

Diya Aur Baati Hum (Can you hear Shubha Mudgal already?)
Airs on Star Plus at 9 PM from Monday to Saturday. Official site
This is as soap-operatic as TV soaps can get. One of the definitive prime-time shows that is at the core of Hindi TV drama. Since Aug’11, the show has become a staple of the Star Plus weekly schedule. A wildly popular serial that has been dubbed/remade for Telugu, Tamil, Malayalam, Kannada, Bengali, Urdu, Sri Lankan and (no kidding) Romanian audiences across the world.
What’s the show about?
It’s a story of an ambitious and educated girl Sandhya (Deepika Singh) who aspires to become an IAS officer. Through a series of odd circumstances, she is married into a traditional household at around the same time when she loses her parents in a tragic accident. She must now rely on her caring, introvert husband Suraj (Anas Rashid) to guide her through an oppressive environment to achieve that grand dream.
In a nutshell, every week millions of middle aged women tune in to see their beloved Sandhya cope through a domestic crisis with the sole support of her husband Suraj – “I will achieve success in the face the biggest challenges because my spouse supports me”
Through the prism of this Rajasthani family, the show’s producers (Two’s Company) bring out stories of scheming in-laws, inter-caste relationships, wedding processions and the entire shebang of small-town India. The extended cast in this show broadly includes:
- Suraj’s parents
- Suraj’s two brothers AND their wives
- Suraj’s sister AND her husband AND the husband’s parents
- … and a woman who was engaged to Suraj in the past.
Each week the writers ensured I lose track by packing in as many twists and turns in each episode. Thankfully, the background score would cue in on time to tell me which one’s are the evil characters!
Framework
The major part of the study required me to gather the raw data. This was the framework of story breakdown derived from watching 28 episodes spread across a month.

“World domination begins with an Excel spreadsheet” – Anon
The purpose of this grid was to capture the core aspects of each episodic story
- Day and Date of telecast
- Theme – the main or overarching idea(s) central to the episode’s story
- Plot Device – mostly one or more things/events/tasks that keeps the characters busy
- Acts – the three acts of each story line (Context/Conflict/Resolution) in each episode
- A, B, C & D Stories – Stories were divided on the basis of the stakes involved
Stories were distinguished based on the stakes involved
Every episode consisted of more than one storyline making it necessary to clearly define them. In this study, stories were categorized based on the stakes they carried and NOT on characters. If Sooraj’s Mother was central to the B Story today, then the next episode’s B Story may feature Sooraj’s sister & her husband.
It was also observed that the D Story would comprise certain plots that may be relatively unimportant in one episode but subsequently feature as the A/B story in later episodes. For instance, Mohit not giving more money to buy new cosmetic products for Emily’s parlour was a minor plot in one episode (D Story: 29th Mar) but later the shop is seized by officials for using expired products (B Story: 8th Apr)
Is it possible to plot stories on a line graph?
This is the part that’s going to drive the writers up the wall. The last thing any creative professional would like to see is their work being technically analysed. But this visual schema lends itself to understand 22-min daily episodes taken together. Between all those index cards, corkboards & mind maps, I tried my hand giving a shot at plotting stories using a simple line.
Disclaimer: This is completely experimental and I’ve not even trademarked it yet (hyuck!). Feel free to let me know if there’s a better form of visual representation.
This is an example of a B story (TX date – 21st Mar ’14)

A single episode story on a line graph
A simple story of Suraj making jalebis can be identified with a line moving from Context to Conflict to Resolution while traversing Positive & Negative outcomes.

The same graph without the screengrabs
Here’s another example with two stories spread across multiple episodes.
The A Story (Sky-diving challenge):
22nd Mar, Saturday: Cadets Sandhya & Zakir volunteer for the sky-diving task as part of their IPS training
24th Mar, Monday: Zakir is under false impression that he has won competition since he is sure Sandhya would chicken out. But he is informed by his trainer that she has chosen a higher altitude than him to skydive. Will she succeed?
25th Mar, Tuesday: Sandhya completes the skydiving mission at a higher altitude than her competitor.
The B Story (Spouse’s permission):
22nd Mar, Saturday: To take part in the challenge, Sandhya must take the signed approval of her husband and family members
24th Mar, Monday: Sandhya calls up Sooraj to request his permission for the skydiving mission. Sooraj not only grants her permission but gives Sandhya a strong pep-talk to achieve her dreams; he tells her to find courage within herself while he handles the family matters
Both these stories on a single line graph would look like this.

Two stories represented on the same graph
After removing those screengrabs, that line graph looks easier to comprehend.

The cleaner version without anyone’s faces
Must be noted that not every scene/story must adhere to this structure since they may be used for purpose of exposition or to illuminate character. Such scenes were omitted from the study.
Now for the Real Deal
I did this exact same exercise for a bunch of episodes. And this is what I got. Presenting in three separate parts.
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