As well as how the winner will be picked!

If you want to go down Blood & Ink Memory Lane, here are all the posts.

Day 1 – a truly wild day!
Day 2
Day 3
Day 4

And I’ve got good news.

I’ve finally decided when the deadline will be and how the best script will be determined.

The deadline for the Blood & Ink Contest is Easter, April 5th. So, if you are one of the participants, here’s what I need from you!

I need: Your Blood & Ink screenplay
When: April 5th
E-mail me at: [email protected]
Include: Title, Genre, Logline, and a PDF of the screenplay
Subject Line Should Read: Blood & Ink Final Entry

Once all the screenplays are in, I will read the first act of all of them. If your first act is bad, I will not continue. If it’s neutral, I will. But I’m not reading on if the first act sucks.

Then, starting Monday, May 4th, and going through Friday, May 15th, I will review the 10 best screenplays on the site. Each day of the week (Monday – Friday) I’ll do a full script review. The script will be posted so you guys can read them too. And then I’m going to decide, after reviewing all 10 of the best scripts, which one is the winner.

I don’t want to put pressure on you but I can’t see how at least five of these scripts aren’t better than anything on the Black List. So, let’s bring it, guys. You’ve got almost 3 months of writing left to put it all the page. Give me your best shot. Cause I want to find something great. The potential for both of us if that happens is enormous.

There’s not anything else left to be said.

GET WRITING!

The other day I came across a tweet that said something to the effect of: “It’s crazy that a new Star Wars movie comes out in four months and nobody knows about it.” One of the first replies to that tweet was: “I’m a rabid Star Wars fan and I have no idea what movie you’re talking about.”

And the thing was, I didn’t know what movie he was talking about either! I knew they wrapped that Ryan Gosling Star Wars movie but I didn’t know it was coming out this early! I did a quick google search and realized he wasn’t tweeting about that movie. He was tweeting about The Mandalorian and Grogu. Indeed, I’d completely forgotten about that film. And I guess it’s coming out this summer!

That’s pretty insane. Because I’m a hardcore Star Wars fan and I didn’t know that. Imagine what that means for the casual Star Wars fan. Or just movie fans. There’s no way they know about this movie. And that is the biggest indictment on the Kathleen Kennedy era of Star Wars. That nobody looks forward to Star Wars movies anymore. Kathleen Kennedy did what was once thought impossible: She created Star Wars apathy.

But now she’s gone.

And she’s being replaced by Dave Filoni.

How do I feel about this?

A change was needed, for sure.

Is Filoni my ideal choice? No.

But the more I meditate on this new development, the more I realize there is no good choice. Think about it for a second. Who could actually lead Star Wars back to prominence? Back to relevance? Back to being the best franchise in the world?

There’s literally no one. Come up with a name if you think I’m wrong. Maybe Favreau. His stuff is good but it definitely has a ceiling.

The only person who has any chance of reviving the franchise would be Lucas himself. But he’s too old. He wouldn’t have the energy to turn this giant Mon Calamari Star Cruiser around.

But the reason I bring him up is that the big thing we learned during the Disney Star Wars experiment was that George Lucas’s warped mind is the only thing that can create a Star Wars movie that actually feels like a Star Wars movie. Every other one of these movies and shows ended up feeling like Star Wars cosplay — some rando with a pen superimposing his lesser Star Wars-y mind on top of the Star Wars blueprint. And it never quite felt right.

This brings us to why Filoni got the job. He got the job because everybody says his mind is the closest to George Lucas of anyone. And I think that’s accurate. Which is a good thing. But Filoni also didn’t come up in this business as a filmmaker. He came up as this Star Wars historian – basically a giant Star Wars nerd. And he moved up in Lucasfilm specifically because George Lucas liked him. Arguably because Filoni was a big champion of the prequels at a time when the prequels were getting hammered. In school, we used to call these people brownnosers.

So, I don’t think Filoni has enough imagination to head Star Wars. He just knows it really well. But I also don’t know if that matters. This promotion implies he won’t be directing any of the films. But what if he does? If Dave Filoni makes a Star Wars movie, it’s going to be received as the worst Star Wars movie ever made. Not in a Rian Johnson controversial way. It will just be perceived as boring and poorly made. So I’m hoping he’ll have nothing to do with the filmmaking.

What I do like about Filoni taking over is that it creates a clear reset at Lucasfilm. Kathleen Kennedy’s biggest issue was she’d driven all of the best properties within Star Wars (the legacy trilogies, Solo, Obi-Wan, Boba Fett) into the ground. There was nowhere left to go with them and so she just stopped making movies. The ONLY reason she made these recent movies (Starfighter and Mandalorian) was because Disney brass said she had to make something. But if they hadn’t mandated that, she would’ve chickened out on making anything because everything she was making was bombing.

By Filoni taking over, it allows for this new slate of movies to begin. Maybe we even get Episodes 10, 11, and 12, which was always part of Lucas’s plan. That’s something Kennedy never would’ve gotten away with. And if that sounds like a dreadful idea to you, keep in mind that Filoni is still very close to Lucas. And so we would get more of a Lucas version of 10, 11, and 12, than a Kennedy version. I’m not saying it’ll be good, guys. I’m past hoping for good. Moving forward, I just want interesting. I want unexpected. And Lucas still has some weird Star Wars ideas that he was never able to implement. It might be wild to see those ideas.

Indeed, Star Wars needs to take more risk if it wants to become relevant again. The thing is, Kennedy would argue that they did take risks. The one-off Rogue One that didn’t have any Jedi and all the heroes died in the end was a risk. I agree with that.

But where the real risk was supposed to happen was in the TV shows. That’s where they planned to experiment with different Star Wars formats. And yet, none of it felt experimental at all. It all felt pretty cookie-cutter. And that era of Star Wars was unfortunately plagued with a Hollywood that lost its mind for five years and decided that every lead had to be a woman and that diversity was more important than storytelling. Those were the things that were sold as “risky” instead of where the risk really should’ve been: which was in the storytelling itself. You cannot write something good without taking some risk.

And I don’t claim that writing Star Wars stories is easy. I actually think it’s one of the most difficult writing assignments in Hollywood. But that’s why you don’t want to limit the storytelling by enforcing pointless handicaps that don’t need to be there. Let writers do what they do best – write. Let them cook. And you’re going to get a lot better stuff than you got during that awful Disney + era.

I wish I knew what Filoni was thinking for his slate. Filoni is a guy who’s known for one thing besides his Lucas friendship: His love for the prequels. He wrote and directed all those prequel cartoons. His one Disney Star Wars show – Ashoka – is a prequel show. Whenever he directed Mandalorian episodes, his big contribution was fitting in old prequel easter eggs, like a Naboo Starfighter, into the story. I don’t know how much he understands Star Wars outside of the prequels.

And this guy is in charge of the creative future of Star Wars storytelling?

DEEEEEEEEP BREATH – EXHAAAAAAAAAALE

I think for sure we’re going to get a new trilogy announcement. I don’t know if it will be 10, 11, and 12 or a whole separate trilogy.

If I were Filoni, my first order of business would be to find a new next level villain. If I had to go deep into Star Wars future and have generations pass to find that character, that’s what I would do. Because Star Wars isn’t Star Wars until the galaxy is in fear. And the big mistake the new trilogy made was that it never established that fear. If we don’t fear that the galaxy is in danger, then we’re not worried for any of the people in it.

What do you think comes next for Star Wars?

Genre: Thriller/ Serial Killer
Premise: When her sister goes missing, Minnow, a seemingly troubled woman, goes to extreme lengths to hunt down the mysterious man who took her. The disturbing truth goes beyond just one missing girl, and nothing–including Minnow–is as it seems.
About: Today’s writing team secured the fifth most votes on 2025’s Black List, a list of the best screenplays in Hollywood.
Writers: Zach Strauss & Christopher Silber
Details: 91 pages

Maisie for Minnow?

Is anything real anymore? I just learned about this Stranger Things debate that’s raging due to the poorly received final episodes in the series. Apparently, there was a promotional picture taken on set where the Duffer Brothers had a naughty tab open on their laptop – CHAT GPT!

Did Chat GPT write the final episode of Stranger Things???

I’m akin to saying it’s more likely that Millie Bobby Brown’s lip filler wrote the final episode.

Not that I care. I’ve got bigger scores to settle.

Scriptshadow Nation? We are down to our last hope.

I made a proclamation that if none of the top 5 scripts on the 2025 Black List rated higher than a “wasn’t for me,” then the Black List was officially no longer relevant.

To be clear, that doesn’t mean that out of the 75 scripts that routinely make the list each year, all of them are bad. Of course there will be some good ones. But if the way you tally votes results in none of the top 5 scripts being any good, then something is broken here. And the Black List needs to overhaul its process.

Well, we’re down to our last potato. This is it, people. The fifth and final script in the top 5.

The good news? It’s a serial killer script — a good genre to work with if you want to write something entertaining. But I’m nervous! I don’t want to be the person who officially announces that the Black List is dead.

So let us pray one final time to the Script Gods. William. Billy. Paddy. Robert. And, oh hell, let’s throw a living God in there as well. Quentin? Lead us through this screenplay, that it may be gloriously good, and raise us up unto celebration before all. So help me, slug line.

In giving you a plot summary here, a gentle warning that this is a very twisty and turny script. So if you don’t want to know what happens via my review, go read the script first!

When we meet 20-something Minnow, she’s a tatted up drug-addict sleeping in her car. The girl’s clearly hit rock bottom, and seems to only be interested in finding her next score. Gotta find a mark. Gotta steal dough. Gotta buy drugs. Or so we think!

A day after we meet her, Minnow is in a bar being propositioned by a creepy dude. She’s pissed and tells him to screw off. The kind bartender apologizes for the crappiness of the clientele and offers her a drink. But Minnow is already skipping this lame joint. Unfortunately, she doesn’t make it far. Once outside, she feels woozy, stumbles, and blacks out.

When she wakes up, she’s in the “cab” section of a giant semi truck. This is the little bedroom behind the front seat where truckers can sleep on long routes. But this isn’t a normal cab room. It’s a prison. There’s no way to break out of this thing.

Minnow fights and fights to get out but it’s hopeless. The Trucker, ignoring her, just keeps on driving across the country. But where is he taking her?! During this time, through little snippets of dreams and dialogue, we learn that Minnow used to be a Marine. And her sister was kidnapped!

Cut back in time (spoilers follow) and a fresher non-addict version of Minnow meets an odd obsessive man named Buck. Buck’s daughter went missing and Buck’s theory is that a trucker took her. Realizing they’re looking for the same guy, they profile the type of man this trucker is and design a version of Minnow that would fit the ideal look that this trucker is looking for. That’s right – they’re designing Minnow to be bait!

We then cut back to the present where we now realize that Minnow had planned to get caught by this dude the whole time so she could find out what happened to her sis. Minnow calls upon her Marine skills, escapes the cab, and turns the tables on the trucker, putting him in the cab! The trucker then tells her something shocking – “I’m just the delivery guy.”

Once a trailing Buck catches up to them, they argue about what to do next. In doing so, they lose focus and the trucker escapes into the local mountains! So Minnow goes after him! Except that Minnow gets tricked and walks right into a trap he set! He’s about to kill her when… he gets shot! It’s a state trooper we met earlier who was tracking Minnow.

The police consider this serial killer case closed but Minnow tries to explain to them what the trucker told her. That he’s the delivery guy. The real killer is still out there! Naw, the head trooper says. We’re good. This forces Minnow to go off on her own in search of the final boss. But maybe, for this leg of the mission, she’s finally in over her head.

There was a famous screenwriting book written a few decades ago called, “I Liked it, Didn’t Love It.” It was a genius premise for a book about screenwriting because it got to the heart of what separates WHAT HOLLYWOOD PULLS THE TRIGGER ON versus WHAT HOLLYWOOD PASSES ON.

You see, the mistake so many writers make in their assumptions about the industry is that only the bad scripts get passed over. But that’s not the case at all. There are actually a lot of decent scripts out there that don’t deserve to be movies. They don’t have that extra gear, that extra fang, that extra wild card that makes them stand out.

This was the premise in that book. These development executives would read a ton of screenplays that they mildly enjoyed. But there was nothing special about them and, therefore, there was no reason to recommend them to their boss to get produced.

And, by the way, I’m not talking about amateur screenplays here. These development execs were mainly reading scripts sent out by legitimate agents. These were repped writers. Which is a reminder that there are levels to this world.

Minnow is a “Liked it didn’t love it” screenplay. I might even go a step lower. It’s a “liked it in places but didn’t like it overall” screenplay. It does have some good moments. When we jump back in time to a perfectly fine Minnow and go through a series of steps that catch us up to the reality of the situation – Minnow created a persona to deliberately get caught by this serial killer – that was a legit good moment.

But no sooner had that moment settled in than the trucker escaped and headed up this mountain. All of a sudden, I’m now reading a survivalist movie about a woman tracking a killer in the mountains?? We’ve strayed too far from the original premise.

I call these screenplay moments “reboots.” They require the writer to reboot the story for this new setting that doesn’t look anything like the original story that was set up. It can work in rare circumstances. But that moment was the official moment I gave up on the script. Which is too bad. Cause that twist was good.

This is another thing that separates the big paid screenwriters from the struggling ones, is inconsistency. You create a great moment. Then you follow it up with a questionable one. The good writers consistently make strong creative choices.

Of the top five scripts on the Black List, I would put this in a tie with yesterday’s “Untouchable.” It’s completely different from that screenplay but I like that it plays with the execution. This script is definitely better than had it gone about its story linearly. Because by doing it this way, it creates a shocking moment out of nothing.

And Minnow is a mostly cool character. I wouldn’t say she’s great. I thought the Marine background felt questionable. But she’s super active and super active characters do wonders for your plot. They always push things forward because they’re always ACTIVELY looking for the next clue, the next lead, the next opportunity to make something happen.

Sadly, the inconsistency of the narrative towards the end derailed this for me. This is not a bad script. But, unfortunately, it’s not something I would recommend to anyone.

[ ] What the hell did I just read?
[x] wasn’t for me
[ ] worth the read
[ ] impressive
[ ] genius

What I learned: At a time when Hollywood needs better scripts than ever, the Black List has become unreliable. So, let me remind you that it is very rare I read a script where I feel that the writer gave me everything they had. That doesn’t mean the script has to be perfect. But I feel like they gave me all their best choices. They gave me the best versions of every scene they wrote. They gave me their best versions of the characters they could put into that story. If I said to any of these writers, “Is that opening scene the best you could do?” They would say, without flinching, “Yes.” “Can you make this character any better?” “No.” I mainly run into scripts where the writers get everything to about a 70-75% level and call it a day. Which is exactly why their scripts get the “liked it didn’t love it” response. Cause “good enough” ironically isn’t good enough. You have to leave it all on the page and I just don’t think writers are doing that – in an age, mind you – where the immense proliferation of content across all media platforms has made the margin for error in storytelling microscopic. If you want to stand out from the pack, give us everything. Literally EVERYTHING you have. You can’t afford not to.

Genre: Historical/Serial Killer
Premise: The true exploits of Eliot Ness during his hunt for the “Torso Murderer,” a serial killer whose bloody reign terrorized 1930s Cleveland.
About: This script finished number 4 on the latest Black List, an annual list of the best scripts in Hollywood. I have read the top 3 scripts already, all of which were not good. That’s never happened before in the history of me reading this list. That led to a new goal – find at least one good script in the top 5. That journey has taken me to today’s script. Both writers Reiss Clauson-Wolf and Julian Silver were staff writers on the TV show, “SEAL Team.”
Writers: Julian Silver & Reiss Clauson-Wolf
Details: 114 pages

Butler for Ness?

I am happy to announce that we’ve found two Black List writers who know how to write! I know we’ve put up many a flyer across Los Angeles since December 12th, when the 2025 Black List was released. MISSING: GOOD WRITERS ON THE BLACK LIST. Finally, we have our first lead.

But being a good writer does not guarantee that you will write a good script. There are too many potholes on the construction path to writing something people enjoy. So take a journey with me on the 4th highest voted Black List script to see if it’s any good.

It’s 1934 in Cleveland, Ohio. Eliot Ness, who has become famous throughout the United States for leading “The Untouchables” in pursuit of Al Capone, has taken this new job of Public Safety Director here.

He’s done so well at his job that they’re throwing parties for him! Until one unfortunate evening when someone discovers a bunch of headless torsos in a grimy lake in the bad part of town.

You have to keep in mind that serial killers aren’t a thing yet. The only thing anybody on the planet knows about someone killing multiple people is Jack the Ripper. But that’s all the way over in England!

Ness finds purpose in this new threat and immediately puts together a task force, with detective Paul Marlow helping him, a haunted cop who hides his secret homosexuality. And if you’re rolling your eyes right now, just know that you’re not alone.

The two start looking into the Torso Killer but there’s very little evidence to go on. And, remember, they don’t have the FBI serial killer playbook yet. That’s something that will come about decades later. This means that they’re running around with their heads cut off, no pun intended.

Eventually, the killings cease and Ness and Marlow have nothing to do. So Ness retreats into his troubled marriage, which has his wife emotionally cheating with another man and Ness physically cheating with another woman. Meanwhile, Marlow is getting his freak on at the local men’s club.

When new bodies are found, Ness finds his investigation thwarted by the local Sheriff, who Ness fired a year ago due to incompetance. Because of this, the Sheriff refuses to share information with Ness and Marlow. Not to mention, the Sheriff is close pals with the local mob boss, Big Paulie. This whole situation is starting to stink.

To make matters worse, Marlow thinks Ness is the Kim Kardashian of his era, desperate for adulation. So he quits. When Ness finally thinks he’s found the killer, we’re shocked to learn that it’s someone closer to him than we could’ve possibly imagined. With Ness being on his own now, it’ll be up to him to get the confession he so desperately covets.

Quinto for Marlow?

Let’s begin with the first scene, which follows a party that the mayor is throwing to celebrate Elliot Ness’s successful attack on local crime.

I pay a ton of attention to party scenes in scripts because if a writer knows how to write a party scene, they usually know how to write a script. That’s because a party scene is one of the most difficult scenes to write in screenwriting. It covers a lot of time. It covers a lot of characters. And that creates a really bumpy canvas to work with.

What I always tell writers is that you want to think of your party scenes as mini-movies. You need a hero (or key character) with a goal. You need that goal to have stakes. And you need there to be an urgency in achieving that goal.

That’s the simplified version. There are many other things you can do to create an entertaining party scene. But that baseline gives you your best shot at succeeding.

Now, here’s the interesting thing about “Untouchable.” It doesn’t have the goal, the stakes, or the urgency. It actually approaches the scene in the wrong way. Clearly, it’s a scene created to set up many of the main characters, and that’s a mistake. It’s just not entertaining. As a writer, you’re basically saying, “I know you’re bored. But memorize this boring part and I promise I’ll start the good stuff afterwards.”

I don’t agree with that writing philosophy at all.

However, I felt that Clauson-Wolf and Silver made it out of the party scene unscathed. They definitely didn’t win any awards with it. But they didn’t tank the scene either. How did they make it out? One little trick that did a lot of the work for them. They made Ness not want to be there. Ness was the guest of honor. He’s the most important person at the party. And he doesn’t want to be there.

Why is this important?

Because a character at odds with himself is a character in conflict. And conflict is the lifeblood of drama. I’ve said it here dozens of times. If all else fails and you can’t shape a compelling story into your scene, at the VERY LEAST, add conflict. And that can get you through.

Every interaction Ness has here contains a tinge of conflict because he doesn’t want to be talking to these people. They all want something from me but he doesn’t want to give it to them. He just wants to go home and rest and then do what he does best tomorrow: his job.

That choice gave me enough confidence in the script that I knew it would be better than the top 3 entries. And the next 20 pages seemed to bolster that belief. I liked the buildup of Ness and Marlow getting ready to look for the killer.

Unfortunately, a combination of three things sink this script. Let me be fair here though and say that a spoiler would ruin this analysis. So I’ll just confirm that the spoiler softens one of the mistakes here. But it doesn’t get rid of that mistake.

The first problem is that the writers tell us, before the story even starts, that the Butcher was never found. So we already know that they’re going to fail.

There are dramatic reasons to tell the writer what’s coming ahead of time. That’s one of the ways you create dramatic irony and anticipation. It’s a legitimate storytelling tool. But I don’t know what advantage you gain by telling the reader: “By the way, the two main characters fail.” I mean, why are we still reading then??

The next problem is that the story lacks urgency. The killings happen. It creates a lot of excitement. Ness and Marlow are on the case. And then…… months go by without any killings. Or any new leads. And then there’s another killing! So, more investigating! But then the assumption is the butcher fled the state and a year goes by without any killings. And then there are another two killings! Etc.

Look at the unenviable way these two things work together. A year can go by in this story without any progress. That alone is boring. But you’ve also told us that they don’t find this guy! So we know that enduring these endless periods of inactivity aren’t going to lead to any satisfying conclusions.

Finally, the script has no real stakes. Yes, people are dying, but the victims are homeless men with no social weight. In true crime, audience engagement follows a clear hierarchy: the more socially valued and the more innocent the victim, the higher the emotional investment. By choosing victims at the very bottom of that hierarchy, the reader could give two shits about them. The deaths don’t move the needle because the audience isn’t given any one of any real value to care about.

Here’s the good news: this is the best of the top four scripts on the Black List. The bad news is that, despite some really well-written prose, a worthy protagonist, a strong command of craft, and a confident writing style, the story doesn’t have a solid enough foundation to carry the reader all the way to the finish line. It gets to about page 40 before the slow-grinding gears catch hold of the pages and, from that point on, we’re mostly bored. Can’t recommend this one.

[ ] What the hell did I just read?
[x] wasn’t for me
[ ] worth the read
[ ] impressive
[ ] genius

What I learned: Adding more of a thing that’s not working does not make it work. If your thought process is: “one dead homeless man may not be enough to make the audience care. But if there are ten dead homeless men, then they’ll care.” No. Sorry, that’s not how it works. If we didn’t care about the one, we’re not going to care about the many.

And my thoughts on Golden Globes Best Screenplay Winner, One Battle After Another

I don’t put much stock in the Golden Globes. I’m not sure anyone does. But I did notice that One Battle After Another won the screenwriting award, which raises the obvious question: should it have?
Let’s look at the other nominated scripts. There were:

Sinners
Marty Supreme
It Was Just an Accident
Sentimental Value
Hamnet.

Start with Sinners. Was it a good screenplay? I’d say no. Not a brutal no, but clear enough that if it were a UFO in the sky, you’d be able to take a picture and start disclosure. The story took far too long to get going. There was an overload of setup and exposition, and that’s one of the most important tools a screenwriter has. It’s also one of the easiest things for studios to point to when justifying why they hire a writer. Someone who can handle that part of the script is incredibly valuable.

Movies need to move. And the opening, which carries the heaviest informational load, is where non-screenwriting development types need the most help. No amount of AI assistance can guide viewers through an information-dense opening the way a great screenwriter can. Here, the setup just kept going and going. It was clumsy sauce with a splash of lazy lemon.

Once the story finally hit its stride, it was pretty solid. But let’s be honest: it ultimately boiled down to: vampires are trying to kill us, ahhhhhh!  For that reason alone, it makes sense that Sinners didn’t take the award.

Next up is Hamnet. I don’t know much about Hamnet other than that Chloe Zhao directed it and was a co-writer. Hey, it looks emotionally affecting. I suppose the screenplay might be good. But Chloe Zhao is not about narrative. She’s about vibes. You don’t win screenplay awards on vibes alone. There has to be serious technical skill at work. The great screenwriters are the most rigorous below the page and the most invisible above it. That’s not how Zhao writes, so Hamnet losing isn’t surprising.

Moving on, we’ve got It Was Just An Accident. You can’t give an award to a movie nobody’s ever seen. Word on the street is there was exactly one screening of this movie, in the town of Minab near the southern border of Iran, and every single person in the audience was a cousin of the director. Putting this on the list is just silly. It feels like someone said, “We’ve got one slot left. What do we do?” and another person went, “Well, it’s got a 98% on Rotten Tomatoes from the 72 most pretentious film critics on Earth. Nobody will question it.” And that’s how it ended up here. This is catnip for snooty publications that love movies nobody actually wants to sit through. So yeah, I completely understand Accident not winning the award.

On to Sentimental Value. This movie is basically anti-screenwriting. It’s the kind of film where, if the production showed up one morning and realized they’d left the script at home, it wouldn’t have mattered. They still would’ve rolled cameras and nobody would’ve noticed. The story doesn’t move with any urgency. It’s perfectly happy to hang out, wander off, follow random threads, then drift back whenever it feels like it. You could invent an entire sequence on the spot, shoot it that afternoon, and it would slide right into the movie without causing a ripple. I’m sorry, but that’s not screenwriting. So yeah, I completely understand Sentimental Value not winning the award.

No script? Shoot a beach scene with no dialogue at golden hour!

Finally, we’ve got Marty Supreme. Of the six nominated films, this one had the best chance at stealing the screenplay award from Battle. If your main criteria for good screenwriting is memorable characters — and that is one of the hardest things to do in screenwriting, is create memorable characters — then Marty Supreme probably should’ve edged out Battle. But the narrative was such a goddamn mess. And so was Battle’s. But Marty Supreme felt a little sloppier. As I’ve said a million times, you gotta use that urgency, baby. That urgency gives your narrative focus. By spreading that movie over a year’s time, it disintegrated any focus that might’ve pulled this mess together.

So the voters were kind of stuck. There isn’t great screenwriting on display here. But Paul Thomas Anderson is one of the last holdovers from that ’90s wave when all those distinct voices broke through and voters remember that. They’re not voting for Battle, which is clumsy and unsatisfying. They’re voting for Boogie Nights. They’re voting for There Will Be Blood. The brand tells them, “This is the safest, most reasonable choice.”

I just hope no aspiring screenwriters are watching these Golden Globes and thinking they should use Battle as a template for how to write movies. Cause if they are, the future of cinema is in a lot of trouble!

Let’s move on to some real screenwriting, shall we?

The Housemaid!

The Housemaid is turning into a crazy slow-boil hit. The kind of hit that we used to see in Hollywood half a dozen times a year. Now, it only happens once a year. And The Housemaid has snagged this year’s title. It started off with a solid but less than exciting 19 million dollar opening weekend. But it fell only 19.5% in its second weekend, 1% in its third weekend, and 25% this weekend. It’s currently at 94 million dollars domestic and is probably going to play strongly for another month.

I told Sydney the last time we chatted, which was on this site that she most certainly reads daily, that she can’t make these vanity projects like Christy anymore. Play to your base. She listened, signing onto this movie, and the rest is history.

Now, the movie may have “officially” started off as a book. But it essentially started off as a spec script. What I mean by that is, these quick-read thriller novels are spec scripts in disguise. They’re short like scripts.  They’re always contained in some way (here, both in location and timespan), which translates beautifully to movies. Like any good thriller, it includes “talked about moments” — in this case a couple of fun twists. And they have that easy marketing hook that, just as I was talking about Thursday, can be captured in a poster that gets people excited to see the movie.

These romantic thrillers or “danger” thrillers or horror thrillers, or any combination of these subgenres, are script sale gold. It’s like you’ve found this secret cave full of spec scripts that sell effortlessly. And make no mistake, the success of this film is going to mean that at least for the next year, studios are going to be desperate for these types of scripts. Not just because they’re easy to market and they’re hot. But because they don’t cost a lot of money.

I love a good thriller script. I love this stuff! Fatal Attraction and Single White Female and Basic Instinct are seared into my screenwriting blood. So if you guys are into this genre at all, throw it my way at some point. Because I would love to make one of these movies.

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