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I have had my eye on OoT for a while and now finally got to it. It one HELL of a vibe and I am loving it.

-Story Anon: 

Are you planning to keep the playable combat in? I felt like i was playing something like Final Fantasy with it. So much fun!! Could use some fine tuning,  more explanations, better descriptions on the abilities but in the end it was super fun! I really hope to see more of it. I havn't has that much actual fun in a VN for a long time. 

-On the point of better explanations:

How the fuck do you beat Cro? I didn't understand what I needed to do. The explanation given was a little TOO vague. Personally I would have liked to see a Combat Encounter in the city with the big white thing. Maybe a Combat with Kieran vs Small White things would have been fun. Just saying, you have a grand idea with your combat idea. Its really cool and fun. Please keep it up.

This story is amazing! 

At first I thought it was going to be just another isekai story then it turned into a cultivation story, I've seen enough of those that I was prepared for something else entirely. I am very impressed with the direction you are taking it but please, go easier on our poor hearts. My soul was NOT prepared for the end. 

Please keep up the awesome story.

Use the gear icon to the right of the Launch button. Then select manage games. Choose the season 2 folder and "Look for update"

Early chapters are pretty rough to look at but the story is absolutely incredible.

Just want to give praise where praise is due and what is now only 1 Critique:

Praise:

Simply your dark moments are wonderfully dark and your light funny moments are really fun.

Even for how little we see Lillith had me feeling like I, myself, wanted to leave that situation. She was written so... menacingly, I loved it.

The slapstick and sit comedy are top tier. The girls getting stuck before the swimming competition had me laughing way too hard. Peak!

So far every character has been enjoyable. The heavy moments are written really well and the mc has a wonderfully relatable attitude. 

How he handles Neeta is amazing and you even had the option to ask her about her quirkiness without prejudice. Perfect.

I really appreciated how his relationship with Cadence got brought up at the party. I was hoping for that to happen at some point. I was wondering when or even if this was going to happen and it made me really happy that it was handled perfectly. 

Critique time:

The "Substance" use by the boys at the party was not what i would personally consider comedy. Them going to sleep at the party was a good use of situational comedy but there are better ways for them to wake up that would have been significantly more classy and comical. Such as having Miya scolding them or promising to sweet talk a woman of their choosing at the party only to not do so later, since they fell asleep. Doing lines... not really funny and HIGHLY out of place for the scene.

On the flip side if you really want to keep that their wake up method then have a room in the mansion where people WERE doing lines and they quickly ran there to do some to wake up. That would have been more appropriate for the venue that they are in. During a party like THAT I can't see anyone overlooking that kind of drug use. Had this scene taken place during a frat party this wouldn't feel so out of place.

All your other comedy felt like it was appropriate for the place and made sense for scenes they were in.

Conclusion:

I really like the story you have going. Your use of Sit-com and Slapstick are PEAK. Your use of word play is really top notch. The "Developer" moments are handled really well. I really enjoyed what you have so far as a whole. My critique is my ONLY real critique of what you have made. Keep up the good work.

Awww... i was hoping to see Nael raise hell soon and help Amy. Oh well. Keep up the amazing work! This is one of the better Power Fantasies i have ever experienced.

So itch 11.5 release should be any day now, since the pat release was 22 days ago?

How long does it usually take between patreon and itch releases for this?

Personally I find the action scenes don't translate well with still images...

There, my one and ONLY gripe with this game. Everything else is amazing.

yeah, convo in the pub right? I was just wondering if there was an option before that... ao she wouldn't be so pissed.

Ps. CT is one of my most favorite rpg's ever too.

Sure seems SOMEONE enjoys Chrono Trigger. Lol.

Seriously though, this is really good. I love the familiar characters and music. The main cast is great, however, is there an option i missed to talk to Natasha about sex with the others?

I too have issues with some of these sex scene placements. Like the mood is all "I am in a rush and can't be distracted" and then next thing you know there is a sex scene before you are done. WHAT?! No, sex can wait, this thing needs to be done now!

Yeah these black screens are really bad. There is a good story telling rule that IS NOT being followed with them:

"Show. Don't tell."

Show us what is happening instead of telling us.

I was disappointed with what happens to Amy. She was my favorite side character. I was hoping she would become a Companion.

Is there a way to stop this White Noise? Its been constant since the beginning and i cant hear anything else to the point that i have to turn down the sound volume.

i did this and thought it would fix things but it seems that this happens even when the memory usage has 30% left.

Awe I cant wait to see what happens next. It ends on such a cliffhanger!!

Alright, I am wanting to add "Random Encounters" to my world but I just can't figure out how. Has someone already done this? If so how did you do it?

Quick question:

Is ch 27 the last chapter for Rae right now or do i have to wait? I ask due to no more "pink" appearing in my journal.

I am actually interested in this as well. Rae and Lyriel would be my go to girls.

So this is NOT for the downloaded versions?

"System Prompt Addition is best used on rules/info that need to always be active. (As for the overload thing, it just means that AI loaded the world as if it was a blank slate)"

Thats why i am trying to put things like how to treat pain and pleasure in the dictionary.

Edit: You say "key word" is that the title of the dictionary entry? Or do i have to put that into the definition? Do i have to use an asterisk or quotation marks when using world rules or prompts to ensure its a keyword?

so i need some examples in the scale at each number for the system to reference. Then when a character does something that is supposed to be painful the system can call to the scale and acurately describe it.

Am i correct?

so then for me, i have an entry called "Pain Scale" that defines how much pain a character feels on a scale from 1 - 10 and defines what actions cause pain. I would then have to define these actions in the dictionary as well and have them call to the "Pain Scale" entry to use it every time those actions are taken?

After 13 user prompts my AI "forgets" everything that happened and gets stuck in an "enter world" loop. How do i stop this? Last time it happened was during some very serious character development.

What if the world rules refer to the dictionary? Will the AI know what to do with the information?

where did you find it? I tried looking for it but cant find it anywhere.

Also in the first sticky topic there is a lot of mentioning of this "dictionary" and how to use it. Might want to look there. After answering my question first, of course.

Trying to add stats with a max threshold of 100 and certain events can increase or decrease these stats. This part works fine, however, for some reason the max threshold keeps increasing. Is there a way to prevent the max threshold from increasing? I used the AI I downloaded to give me scales for the game to use with these stats, but would rather human insight this time.

where can i find this aforementioned "Dictionary"? It could be what i am missing to make my game run the way i want it to.

EDIT: nvm. didnt realize i downloaded the old version accidently.

thats what ive been doing and its been working great. Mileage may vary.

This is EXACTLY the reason iam looking through the disscusion thread! Thankyou!