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I feel so lucky! I came across your blog on tumblr and immediately jumped to read, this was so good. I think its fun when you get to play an MC with some powers and I really like the whole witness protection angle and the fact that it'll explore heavier themes.

Other thoughts MC is fun and likeable forget i said anything if that's not how you intended them to be.   Scarlett was sus I let her touch my MCs face for some reason idk because my MC is too nice  I actually think a little internal monologue from MC could benefit that part like humor or why did i agree to this >:(

Leah was sus too honestly everyone was lmao (can you even be too paranoid though?)

There was one small mistake i played with a male Viorel 

"Try to explain to her warmly that he needs to stay silent and come with me."

Other than that I'm excited for the next chapter!

Let my mc go all the way with Bastion

On another note I can count on my hands how many times I've played dbd didn't stick to me but this game I am in deep I actually started to look up the characters and learn the lore lmao I can't wait for more

A for me! 

Thank you both honestly i got my scenes! I really loved this update too!

I finally got it im so dumb its not my fault Lane had a grip on me lmao thank you!

No TT Im not sure if it's one choice to make or multiple in shift one I've been trying to mix it up mix but I can't get it

pls save me is the scene to ride on his bike in this update i cannot get it im on the verge of tears over here lmao

Just the IF I'm looking for lmao I really like silverbound too so I'm glad you're working on them both can't wait to read more. 

Sonnet another incredible chapter that was well worth the wait. Seeing how Flea and the detective's relationship has evolved in this chapter is so sweet. Their dynamic is probably one of my favorites when it comes to the IFs I've read.  I also really enjoyed Ted in this chapter that poor man is so stressed I hope MC gets the chance to talk it out over dinner with the in laws (wink wink) I'm also very happy about the chance to have Flea in his true form thank you!!!!! Last thing I swear but the ART FOR THIS CHAPTER!!!!! He looks so good I could cry lmao special shoutout to your artist.

Fleaaaa I missed you!!! This chapter was so sweet and comforting I'm so attached to Flea and my detective however I'm just a little worried for chapter 7. Also, the art for this chapter was so hot he looks so good!

Please consider an option to toggle no avatar to be used or if that's too difficult a blank one with just a background color added to the other three with no sprite. I think it sucks more since they say you look just like Daonna in game and the current options are a bit too androgynous/young looking for me personally which ruins immersion. I really love how inclusive this game is but the sprites for Daonna made me not really enjoy the updated demo once I played it unfortunately. I hope a compromise like myself and others suggested could be made. 

FLEA I MISSED YOU!!!!! This chapter was fantastic sonnet, I don't know why I'm shocked you outdo yourself every time. I liked solving the mystery with the job as well. Also, the picture of flea jesus my eyes have been truly blessed. 〒▽〒

I really enjoy the UI, I think the story is intriguing and has me interested in figuring it all out. All of the LIs are captivating I also really like the personality quiz and how you can tailor your MCs personality how you like. On the subject of the mc I really enjoy how they interact with the LIs they aren't too passive or too abrasive which I feel like a lot of MCs can skew too far towards one or the other which is a nice change of pace. I also really like MCs power. The music is also really nice as well and fits the theme I get ghibli vibes from it which is a huge compliment.

A con for me though is I share the sentiment of another person that commented why is there such a disparity between the character art in the banner and the actual sprites in the game. It feels I don't know that dishonest is the word but misleading maybe? To be drawn in by the banner and then seeing the in-game sprites catches me off guard. The background is rich and detailed, but the character sprites don't have the same feeling to them and they're all suffering from same face syndrome I believe.  I am glad I decided to play it despite being confused about the difference, but I also wonder how many people didn't try because of the discrepancy.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Overall, I'm excited to see how the story ends and learn more about the LIs and see how the routes end.

Me and soma when >:) The story was fun and i liked the escape room setting except for the tile that was my least favorite part lol overall this was fun 

So I got the bad end and the game over and the one where you just go back home is that all? I'm confused and have already played 5 times trying to get another ending preferably me and soma walking into the sunset jk unless   〒▽〒 someone help pls

I think implementing an option for no sprite for Daonna would be nice for those of us who would prefer it, especially since the characters in the game say MC looks just like them. Other than that I'm so excited for the routes to come out!

This was such a great demo it makes me really excited for the full release. Amon has my whole heart and Gael too he's so sweet ahhh. I do hope there will be more options to make choices in the full game and select the kind of banter we want or how to respond to the characters questions etc. Other than that, I love what I've seen so far I'm so excited to support the  kickstarter too! 〒▽〒

Wahhh sonnet don't do this to me ಥ_ಥ This chapter was so good but please tell me there will be a 4.5 I need to know Fleas thoughts after this. I'm anxiously awaiting chapter 5! Also idk if its been asked will there be a xxx scene with Flea in his normal form ^^  I would very much like it lmao

eeeee I loved this Ive got my eyes set on Bryson and Stone although Connor in some sort of maid outfit could sway me 〒▽〒

 ahh Crow I need him bad I wanna know more about him and see his route. I really hope the story continues I'm already thoroughly invested!

on my knees begging you to give an ending of mc and mychael living forever in his lil cottage (happily and safe) in case that wasn't implied 🙏

down bad for Damon absolutely in the trenches for Delivery Guy

RAGHHHHHHH Noel!!!!!! pick me choose me love me ಥ_ಥ Besides my raging love for Noel the demo really has me wanting to know more about the story and all the characters!

Sebastian pls im asking for a chance!!!!! but also Robin could've gotten it too if he was able to be romanced 〒▽〒 anyway enough pouting im excited for the full release

Thank you for the delicious food 〒▽〒!!!! I stumbled onto this and I'm so glad i checked it out. I love Hades so much but that ending.. my heart. I'm really excited to see the rest of the LI's routes. Also when Poseidon was talking about the baby had me laughing so hard. Can't wait to see more! And I really love how everyone is drawn especially the MC 

I want Kenji to #### my ##### and then I can #### his #### and I want to hold him tightly pls🙏 phew that dude is hot, but I also really really like Vik he's so cuteeee i love the boss/employee thing 🤭 and Arthur ugh I'm already obsessed when he said dove. I feel like Henry is gonna sneak up the list though he's so cocky I love it, can't wait to see the rest of their routes.

Hi just want to say how much I love this game. The customization options for mc are amazing and the xx scenes are so good. I was also wondering if there will ever be a chance for Ren to look like his "redacted" self later on? I saw the pic on twitter, and damn he is so handsome with dark hair (^///^)  I like them both either way though and I can't wait for more updates!

Pretty sure they said in another comment that they don't plan to finish the game, I just wanted to smooch the Rat King 〒▽〒

This might be my favorite chapter so far I love how sweet Flea and MCs interactions were.

I am here after binging; your writing is truly amazing from aloners to wilder and now this. I'm just absolutely enamored with everything you write. You really deserve nothing but the best, now I'm going to go out and touch grass while I wait for chapter 3 ಥ_ಥ PS thank you for making Flea an older adult and having the option for mc to be older it's a really nice change of pace from what is usually made by people.