Катя
Senior Member
Russian
Hi,
In A the proportion of hemicelluloses initially was X% and after the treatment it decreased to Y% of the total of components.
I have doubts about "decreased to" - shouldn't it be in the passive voice?
Like "it was decreased" for example.
Same doubts I have about "stabilized":
..and the moisture content become stabilized.
And also "of the total of components" sounds a bit weird to me, like there is something missing.
Thanks!
In A the proportion of hemicelluloses initially was X% and after the treatment it decreased to Y% of the total of components.
I have doubts about "decreased to" - shouldn't it be in the passive voice?
Like "it was decreased" for example.
Same doubts I have about "stabilized":
..and the moisture content become stabilized.
And also "of the total of components" sounds a bit weird to me, like there is something missing.
Thanks!