For the icon makers' constructive critique needs

Hello! Welcome to iconcrit . This community is for any icon maker who wants to have their icon(s) analysed. Maybe you're not satisfied with an icon and can't put your finger on the problem? Show us your icon. Come and ask here for tips, ideas and more from the viewer's perspective. Please, read the rules and guidelines under the cut before posting in the community.

( Rules & guidelines )

You can use this format in the textbox below for providing feedback:
<br /><br /><b>First Impression:</b><br /><b>Composition/Cropping/Lighting/Colouring/Aspect ratio etc.:</b><br /><b>Text work (if used):</b><br /><b>Suggestions:</b><br /><b>Additional thoughts:</b><br /><br />