whitish: (avec abandon)



Here's the post to respond to if you have any thoughts on how I play Odette from the ballet, Swan Lake. Do you have objections to my portrayal of her? Praise? I'd love to hear anything you might have to say in regards to my gameplay, ranging from voice to consistency of characterisation. Therefore anon is enabled, IP logging is off and all comments are screened. Thank you.


whitish: (pas d'action)



rothbart encircles her with a whirlwind of white leaves and snowflakes. thus, she whirls with it – again and again circling, with herself at the centre. her feet barely touching the ground. as she twirls on the very tip of her toes, everything is a blur of subdued colour and fast movement.

around and around, until she knows nothing beyond her long legs and deeper than deepest love for siegfried.



whitish: (bras croisé)



(25 Drabbles)
#01 - Strength #02 - Music #03 - Cold #04 - Lies #05 - Talent
#06 - Heart #07 - Fire #08 - Nervous #09 - Blue #10 - Friendship
#11 - Forever #12 - Late #13 - Moment #14 - Forget #15 - Scream
#16 - Passion #17 - Alone #18 - Fear #19 - Courage #20 - Wait
#21 - Alternate #22 - DEUX #23 - TROIS #24 - QUATRE #25 - CINQ



whitish: (introduction)



Odette | Swan Lake | Prompt Table
001desire 002hope 003in the water 004invisibility 005lace
006obedience 007perfume 008whisper 009woman in white 010yellow



whitish: (tendu)



[Title:] Alternate
[Characters:] Odette & Odile
[Prompt:] Writer's Choice | Alternate


Odile sought her out – after the ball, after having claimed Siegfried’s flowers and vows and what else (Odette could barely imagine) as her own, when they were indeed Odette’s first. Waited for her at the lakeside, where the waters would eat into the sand, where Odette’s naked feet would sink into the mud and become exactly as tainted as her soul felt, forever now bound to the shape of the swan.

“Love, you will stay,” Odile said. It was no request. And rather than going, than drowning, than dying, Odette did. Stay. In place. As if trapped.

For she were.


whitish: (changement)



[Title:] Forward
[Characters:] Odette
[Prompt:] Forever


Should your love betray you, Rothbart had said when cursing her with wings and beak, you will forever be bound to this bird’s shape – every day to exist as a swan, every night to remember being a woman. To such a life has she been damned. A half-life. If a life at all…

For she is running, now. On human feet, bare and vulnerable to the sticks and stones lying on the shore. Towards the waters, she is running, her maidens calling for her, but she heeds not their pleas. Siegfried betrayed her and there is only one way.

Forward.


whitish: (jete)



I walk to the borders on my own
To fall in the water just like a stone
Chilled to the marrow in them bones
Why do I go here all alone?

- Agnes Obel, Riverside

The stars, the moon, they have all been blown out
You left me in the dark
No dawn, no day, I'm always in this twilight
In the shadow of your heart

- Florence and the Machine, Cosmic Love

Oh father, oh daddy, here swims a swan
With a hey ho and a bonny o
It's very like a gentle woman
The swans swim so bonny o

- Loreena Mckennitt, The Bonny Swans

Open-hearted as a heart can be
'Cause we're all a ruin like broken leaves
I give you me in an ocean of tears up to my knees
Stitched together like pants and sleeves
I carry this carapace worn thin by he and she
Danced to dust and dusk and
Strung along the highway
I found my way, belligerent
Following the stars of your eyes

Promise me you'll cherish
This tarnished offering

- CocoRosie, Promise

Take this waltz, take this waltz
With its, I'll never forget you, you know

...

And I'll dance with you in Vienna
I'll be wearing a river's disguise
The hyacinth wild on my shoulder

- Leonard Cohen, Take This Waltz

Tell me now of the very souls that look alike, look alike
Do you know the stranglehold covering their eyes?
If I call on every soul in the land on the move
Tell me if I'll ever know a blessing in disguise

- Agnes Obel, The Curse

Time it took us
To where the water was
That's what the water gave me
And time goes quicker
Between the two of us
Oh, my love, don't forsake me
Take what the water gave me

- Florence and the Machine, What the Water Gave Me

You disappear with the dawn
You only see what you want

When you are out with the birds of prey
When you are out with the birds of prey
They watch and they feed, they take what they need
They bite as you bleed, the birds of prey

- Christina Aguilera, Birds of Prey

No regrets or promises
The past is gone
But you can still be free
If time will set you free
Time now to spread your wings
To take to flight
The life endeavour
Aim for the burning sun
You're trapped inside
But you can still be free
If time will set you free
But it's a long long way to go

- Savage Garden, You Can Still Be Free

Can the heavens hear me? Or don’t they care
When you ask what you’re supposed to do
Facing these old crossroads?
This is where we must learn to unite
What we want with what we dare
And this is where we part ways with those
Who left, never to return
And if I were a bird, I would fly into the sky high above
Yes, if I were a bird, I would fly into the sky high above
Then I would keep my eyes on you
And never know that everything comes to an end

- Laura Mo, Flyvefjer

What you can use a beam for, when life is endless
And the night is so silent and heavy, can hardly be expressed in words
What you can use the self for, when hope is eternal
But life is so dark and heavy, is a riddle to me, one without clues
Because you came and took my dance shoes, in a dream about you
You held on to me so tightly - with your words, your claws and your smile
But then you went on your way and left me behind, without hope for us and confidence in myself
And now there are no more steps left to dance

- Laura Mo, Dansesko




whitish: (cédez)



Player's Name: S.
Are you over 16? Yes. I’m 26.
Characters Played Here:
Enomoto Shiori | [personal profile] secretsymphony
Marcel | [personal profile] futuristical

Character: Odette
Series/Canon: Swan Lake
From When? Right after Odile has revealed her true identity to Siegfried at the feast, before he can reach Odette by the lake.

History:
Zurich Ballet’s 2009 production synopsis, partial and Odette-focused.
Wikipedia’s synopsis of the full ballet, general.

Not much is known (or shown) about Odette’s life before she encountered Rothbart and fell under his spell. What we do know is that she was a princess, child of the king and queen of her country and that she lived a joyful, untroubled life in a peaceful environment. However, one day while she was out walking, Rothbart approached her – having targeted her already, chosen her to become the jewel of his collection and casting on her the same curse that he had already cast on a whole flock of other young women, though none of as noble birth as Odette. Their curse was the same, however – destined to be swans during the day, changing back to their human form only at night and staying trapped in this cycle until a man would devote himself to them fully and wholly, promising and proving his love eternal. Himself, Rothbart was half owl, half man and in flight, he brought the transformed Odette back to his lair. Odette would later tell Siegfried that the large lake that had grown gradually into existence in front of Rothbart’s hide-out consisted of her grieving mother’s tears, tears cried over the child that she had lost to the sorcerer’s evil magic.

Because one day, Odette would indeed meet a man who was prepared to promise her everlasting loyalty and love. Their first meeting was chaotic, Siegfried was out hunting with his friends and had targeted a swan that he had spotted on the lake by which they found themselves. Nevertheless, as he was about to fire his crossbow, dusk fell and brought with it night – Odette, for it was she whom he was about to slay, turning into her human form once more. Falling in love instantly with her beauty, her gentleness and serenity, he followed her even as she fled from him in fear, attempting to sway her. To assure her that he posed no threat. Finally, she stopped running, turning to him instead and told him her story – that she was royalty, but had been turned into a swan by Rothbart, reigning now amongst the other swan maidens as their queen. Siegfried declared his love for her and in return, she asked that neither he nor his companions would shoot another swan, since they could not know whether it be her or one of her maidens. He swore, in the same breath promising to always be faithful and never betray her – so that she might once again be free of her curse and live her life as a human queen. By his side.

Hearing these words, Rothbart appeared and with his magic, he forced the maidens and Odette along with them to transform back into swans, Siegfried left behind on the shore to watch them disappear across the expanses of the lake’s wide waters. Returning to the palace, he found that his mother, the queen, had arranged for a party at which he were to choose his bride amongst various princesses presented to him. Siegfried, though, could only think of Odette and dismissed every other girl until, late at night, Odette finally appeared. Clad in all black, she danced with him in the most seductive manner and had he been in his right mind, he would have recognized that this was not the woman whom he had met at the lakeside. This was not the beautiful, the gentle, the serene Odette, this was a seductress. Someone else entirely. But in the end, he fell to his knees before her, kissed her hand and chose her for wife – at which moment, the glamour faded and Odile, Rothbart’s daughter, took her original shape, escaping the castle with a mocking laughter. Siegfried knew it and Odette felt it, his promises had been broken and her curse was destined to last forever. Forever, she would be a swan. In her mind, it left her with no choice. Until then, she had known hope, but now hope had been taken from her and a hopeless existence… She could not bear. Would not. Refused to.

This is when Eli approaches Odette and she accepts his offer, perhaps not gratefully, but in recognition of its opportunities.

Personality:
The most accurate description of Odette is gentle. In the ballet, Odile and Odette function as one another’s opposites, each other’s mirror images – and where Odile is seductive and aggressive, Odette is gentle and serene. Having lived in the shape of a swan for many years, she has grown timid of humans and human interaction as seen by how she flees from Siegfried upon first meeting him. A fear that she only slowly overcomes as she gradually falls in love with the prince. Nevertheless, being royalty herself, she still possesses a certain sense of assertiveness as well, enough to demand of Siegfried that he and his friends no longer aim their weapons at swans, due to the risk of them being Odette or her maidens in disguise. This is the balance, the discord within Odette – that while she nurtures the softest of attitudes, she is also the Swan Queen. Reigning over the swan maidens who share her sad fate. And as one such, a queen of swans, she must remain strong and spirited in the face of Rothbart’s presence, always soaring upon the waters of her mother’s lake.

Beneath, or perhaps beyond her strength and spirit, however, lies a darker streak. A sadness that has become inherent to her character in response to the great tragedy that she has suffered. It would not be correct to assume that Odette is depressed as such, but at the point in her timeline from where I take her – her circumstances are against her and her reaction to their development is wholly human, despite how she has lived as a bird for so long. She wishes to flee, to escape. In her own reality, there is only one way, for Siegfried has affixed her curse – she must drown herself in the lake that was cried into existence by her mother upon Odette’s disappearance. Unless she wish to remain Swan Queen only, eternally.

In her relations, Odette demonstrates the same traits that define her otherwise. She is soft-spoken and gentle, carrying behind her mask of graceful sadness an understated determination. Her swan maidens are loyal to her and bid her every command, although she makes only few of them, preferring instead to live amongst them as an equal – as merely another waterfowl by day, woman by night. They are the ones to have chosen Odette for queen, Odette has merely accepted the position. I expect it is the same attitude with which she will meet the citizens of New Dodge, so that she will regard herself as just another newcomer who is seeking a new start. No different from any of the others. Except, of course, for the wings and the beak that haunt her underneath the rays of the sun.

As such, Odette is a victim of her surroundings. Constantly. First a victim of Rothbart’s curse, then a victim of Siegfried’s broken promises, next a victim of Odile’s mockery and lastly, a victim of her own desires to die. Yet, however much a victim that Odette is, she is not helpless and she makes her own decisions, takes action so as to uphold her own dignity. Because she may be the Swan Queen, but queen she has become. Still.

Why do you think your character would work in this setting?
Odette has reached the point of no return. She, quite literally, has nothing to lose. Were she to stay in her own world, she would be trapped in the cycle of her curse forever, shifting between being swan and human. The man she loved has betrayed her trust and there is no way for her to overcome on her own the powers that are toying with her. New Dodge offers freedom and she is desperate for it. Her own storyline offers her only one means of escape, that is: death. Eli offers her an escape and life simultaneously, thus the choice is not a difficult one for her to make.

In the beginning, she probably won’t interact a lot with people in person, since she’s still trapped as a swan during the day, but she will be using the TC a lot and pointedly disregard her own royal blood, truly considering the town her fresh start at life, talking freely with people from all walks of life.

Longer-term, I hope to find some magic wielders in New Dodge that will be willing to try and work out a counter-curse, so that she may eventually escape the spell that Rothbart’s has put her under.

What will your character do for work?
If she could be allowed to work night shifts only, being general staff at the Horizons Recreation Center would make a good fit, since there’s a lake and forest there which will remind Odette of home.

Inventory:
Nothing beyond the gown she’s wearing.



Samples:


Third-Person Sample:
She discovers the lake at the Recreation Center quickly. As if drawn to its waters, the cursed waters in her human shape as well as in the shape of a swan. No, cursed it is not, for it is not made of tears – is not salty on her tongue, but fresh and clear. Showing her the reflection of a woman, caught in between stages. Not quite human, not quite bird. She is Odette, yet she knows not what she is. Who she is. Of what material she is made. Once she was a princess, but Rothbart made a queen of her. A queen of swans. Even a queen, however, she is not. Here. What, then? Who, then?

Sitting by the lakeside, Odette looks at herself, as if contemplating a mirror. She looks at herself, touches her fingers to her face, runs them through her hair and sees only Odile’s mask that may have been thin, but was thick enough to fool Siegfried. Her Siegfried. Has she become but a mere shadow of herself? Has she faded into nothing but Odile’s scornful smile, leaving for the castle, clad in Odette’s appearances? Let it not be so! Let her be free, finally! Of the prince’s broken promises and the black swan’s deceit…

For the lake in New Dodge is not a swan lake, it is not a salt lake, it is not a lake of entrapment. Akin to everything in this, her new world, it is fresh. Representing a fresh beginning. A new start. The days may still be lost to her, for the curse has not lifted and most likely, it never shall – but the nights are her own and so long as she breathes down human lungs and can meet her own eyes in the lake’s still surface, neither she nor the water is cursed. Anymore.

First-Person Sample:

1ST FEATHER | video




[Judging by the moonlight falling across her face and shoulders, it's night when she turns on the TC and addresses the New Dodge community. No one has seen even a glimpse of this woman during the day, for she is as nocturnal as a vampire and equally cursed. Such is the very reason that she now speaks, in a soft (yet assertive) voice - princess as she was, queen as she has become.]

I must beg of the hunters here, that they no longer aim their weapons at even a single swan. [She raises her chin.] Please understand, I feel an affinity with these birds and wish not to see them harmed for their feathers, neither for their flesh.

[Her expression doesn't change, but her eyes darken - whether from anger or sadness is difficult to tell. Her white gown hugs her every curve like - yes, like a plumage and the midnight air adds movement to her waving hair.]

I dare make such a demand, for I was royalty once. Though, I understand that this place offers me no crown and I count instead amongst the ordinary women, if no longer amongst the innocent maidens. It is a role that I gladly embrace, preferable to the reality from which I herald and a blessing in comparison to the reality which faced me.

[Odette pauses. Pushes aside the memories, of the sorcerer and his wicked daughter, of the unfaithful prince, of all his promises and all that she lost...]

Yes, here I shall stay. Now that I possess nothing of significance, beyond this new opportunity that I surely shan’t waste. Everything I believed to be mine has been -- taken by the unruly winds. Yes, here is my home, here is all to which I might return. There is water here as well, but it is fresh and it will not overwhelm me.

[A long silence follows. One might think the feed is over when finally, Odette continues.]

Who can truly claim that death by drowning is not the most tragic of fates?


whitish: (coda)



[Title:] Finality
[Characters:] Odette & Siegfried
[Word Count:] 215
[Prompt:] in the water


Alas, there is nothing to forgive and even if there were, she would not have it in her to do so. Not anymore. )


whitish: (encore)



[Title:] Like Thin Lace
[Characters:] Odette, Odile & Siegfried
[Word Count:] 281
[Prompt:] lace


O, could she not have worn silk tonight, instead of lace? )


whitish: (valse)



Zurich Ballet, 2009 - from the DVD booklet



LAKESIDE IN THE MOONLIGHT

Siegfried follows the swans to the lake. Rothbart appears. Suddenly a swan approaches and Siegfried watches as it turns into a maiden - it is Princess Odette. She and her friends have been turned into swans by Rothbart; only at night do they take human form again. The spell cast on Odette can only be broken if someone who has never loved her before swears undying love and promises to marry her. Odette warns Siegfried: If he breaks his viw, then she must remain a swan forever. As dawn begins to break, Prince Siegfried pledges his love and swears to be faithful. Odette's friends return to the lake and become swans again.



BALLROOM IN THE CASTLE

Prince Siegfried is to choose his bride from a number of princesses. Each one dances for him, but Siegfried refuses to make a choice. Rothbart is also present; he is accompanied by his daughter, Odile, whom he has transformed to look like Odette. The prince is beguiled by the striking resemblance. While Odile and the prince dance, a vision of Odette appears and implores Siegfried to remember his pledge, but the Prince is under Odile's spell - infatuated, he asks for her hand in marriage. Rothbart compels him to pledge his love. When Siegfried does his bidding, Odette appears again - but it is too late, the prince has given his word to another. The prince goes off to find his beloved and ask her forgiveness.



THE LAKESIDE

Desperate and on the verge of madness, Odette returns to the swan maidens. She is determined to throw herself into the lake. Rothbart conjures up a storm in a vain attempt to prevent Siegfried from finding Odette. Rothbart wants to separate the lovers. Siegfried begs Odette for forgiveness. With heavy heart, she pardons him - but, she says, nothing can alter the fact that he has broken his vow. Odette and Siegfried cannot live without one another . and now they plan to die together. Rothbart is left behind as Odette and Siegfried make their exit together...


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