robins watching me — watching the cat watching me watching the robins Published by J. D. Nelson J. D. Nelson's poems have appeared in many small press publications. He lives in Colorado. Visit his website for more information: www.MadVerse.com. View all posts by J. D. Nelson
kujitm, always an absolute pleasure to read your comments. what is albania’s national dish? the albanian restaurants here serve alot of greek food. well it all comes down to this… cheese ablaze the albanian cook shouts OPA! Reply
I give up!! I tried my level best to figure out who was watching whom !!! Please Nelson – give me the answer before I go insane! -kala Reply
robins watching me — watching the cat watching me watching the robins —J. D. Nelson I’m still not sure if I like this poem but it seems to be growing on me though! (-; This won’t help you, Kala Ramesh, but one from me: in the river reflection he watches himself watch the sunset J.D.’s poem is certainly worth reading all over again, but a word of caution, watch it! (-; Reply
crisp may day
out on the proverbial limb–
half a pale-white egg shell
Fascinating haiku, very nice indeed.
oh, spring!
the trees are growing its fruits
the girls undressing their thights,,,
Kujtim
home from iraq
my son’s right arm
left behind
STAND UP AGAINST THE WAR!
Very nice image producing an appreciative smile
kujitm,
always an absolute pleasure to read
your comments. what is albania’s national
dish? the albanian restaurants here serve
alot of greek food. well it all comes down
to this…
cheese ablaze
the albanian cook shouts
OPA!
I give up!!
I tried my level best to figure out who was watching whom !!!
Please Nelson – give me the answer before I go insane!
-kala
robins watching me —
watching the cat watching me
watching the robins
—J. D. Nelson
I’m still not sure if I like this poem but it seems to be growing on me though! (-;
This won’t help you, Kala Ramesh, but one from me:
in the river reflection
he watches himself
watch the sunset
J.D.’s poem is certainly worth reading all over again, but a word of caution, watch it! (-;
Thanks a ton, Alan.
You said – Watch it!!!
I am sort of getting it now?!
-kala
this work is one of the best pieces i have ever read! thank you!
the aged dancer, yet
this spring of 2009–
even in bed