Thanks Anthony,
_This… is a warm reminder of my daughter and and her first, bungling tries at building snowmen_!
_Please, excuse this inane word game:
“cosmetic snow-gery?”
_M
Hi,
Thanks for the sweet, humane action in your haiku. There is a need for mending and healing our relationships in this world. Despite the unusally warm weather tin CA – our mountains and mt home has had some snow which we have both enjoyed and froze in.
Maybe there will be one more snowstorm to make that snow gal or guy….
How do I post some of my own poems?
Janis
I like the implied humane connotations in this. I envisioned the observer mending (the eyes) of the snowman. I think it can add another layer to this beautiful haiku.
I like ‘broken snowball’ and mending a snowman’s cheek.
Thanks Anthony,
_This… is a warm reminder of my daughter and and her first, bungling tries at building snowmen_!
_Please, excuse this inane word game:
“cosmetic snow-gery?”
_M
I really like the idea that something broken can still mend something else. :-)
I like this one. :)
Hi,
Thanks for the sweet, humane action in your haiku. There is a need for mending and healing our relationships in this world. Despite the unusally warm weather tin CA – our mountains and mt home has had some snow which we have both enjoyed and froze in.
Maybe there will be one more snowstorm to make that snow gal or guy….
How do I post some of my own poems?
Janis
march winds
splintering the gnarled mango branch
cherry-red blossoms
This is such a warm and tender moment…
beautiful work!
thanks to all for positive feedback..especially to alan and patricia for helping make this a stronger haiku
I like the implied humane connotations in this. I envisioned the observer mending (the eyes) of the snowman. I think it can add another layer to this beautiful haiku.
Best, Rita