Enzo Stephens: MEA

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MEA

Enzo Stephens

Mirabella, Now

Mirabella – Bella for short – gingerly placed a cup of scalding chamomile-chai tea on an intricately scrolled end table. She stood before that table, studying minute variations in the flow of the cherry woodgrain; at once, rich, dark, flowing into a subtle brightness that never failed to impress her with its infinite, simplistic yet somewhat chaotic beauty.

Yeah, she admonished herself. It’s a wood table. Convenient. Sturdy. Clean. A matched set, its companion coffee-table strategically placed before an overstuffed sofa with a vague, floral print. Comfy stuff. But she still wished it was crammed with Memory Foam instead of whatever the heck was in there.

Bella glanced at her favorite chair in her small house, performed a deft, military-style about-face, and sank into its surprising depths, permitting a small ‘ahhh’ to escape her thin lips.

Her tea was still hot, ethereal wisps of steam rising, delicate in their dissipation. Too hot, she mused, so she leaned to her right and hoisted a worn six-string acoustic from its stand, resting its bulky box on her right thigh. It felt good. Right. One of the true Loves-of-Her-Life (and there weren’t very many of those, no siree).

She eschewed a flimsy, triangle-shaped pick, allowing the fingers of her right hand to drift downward in a loose strum, smiling as the tones resonated within her.

The instrument was well-tuned.

The instrument brought her joy.

It was steady, reliable; a friend that comforted her soul, helping her to push her past mistakes into the rear-view mirror, where they belonged. She let the fingers of her left hand slide over frets idly, no particular tune or song in mind as the fingers of her right hand caressed steel strings.

This went on for a while. Her mind roamed as it often did when she strummed like this. That her tea had likely cooled enough to drink was an idle thought, fleeting in its mundanity. 

Time was like that to Bella anymore. She’d become a true octogenarian a couple of weeks ago, and time seemed to lose its significance in her life. After all, what did she have to keep a schedule for? Doctor appointments? Bella grimaced. “Bah!”

She did not like the medical system in the least bit. Inconsistent, expensive and unreasonably demanding that she keep their schedules that they set for her (without her damned consent, mind you).

Yeah, enough of that insipid negativity. She took a sip of her tea and replaced it on the end table, just as a small sigh escaped her. Bella closed her eyes and let her fingers charm the cozy space where she lulled. Floating, her mind awash with resonant harmonies.

The rustle of a key penetrating the deadbolt on her front door rousted her. Unconsciously, she sat up a bit straighter as her fingers ceased caressing her six-string.

The rustling stopped, followed by a click as the deadbolt snapped open; a sudden twist of the doorknob, a small gust of chilled, autumn breeze, and in stepped a man made of iron. Brock. Her son. A tall, clean-shaven ramrod of a man with close-cropped hair and impeccably clean shoes. First impression would scream United States Marine Corp! Not for the first time did she wonder just how in the hell he came to be that way.

He extracted his key from the lock, swung the door closed, and turned to face Bella from across the small, cozy room. “Mother.”

Bella smiled at him, lowered her guitar to its stand beside her. “Brock.”

Her only child strode into the room, aiming for the fireplace; purposeful, economical in his movements. Tucked in the crook of his left arm was a rectangular box, about the size of a box one would use to package a small, kitchen counter-top appliance, such as a small coffee pot or a water-boiler. He placed it on the mantle as Bella noted the plainness of the carton.

No labels, no colorful displays of happy people sipping steaming brews. Just a simple, tan box with a string of numbers along one side, toward the bottom.

Still facing the mantle, he removed a small, clear, plastic Ziploc baggie from his jacket and rested it beside the box. “What did you bring me today, Brock? Doesn’t look like a box of chocolates.”

His reply was stone-silence. He crouched down on fifty-year-old, fluid knees and began poking at the charred debris in the fireplace. “It’s chilly in here.” He poked at the fireplace flue, clanking it open, then snatched a page of newsprint from the kindling pail, twisted it, and shoved an end of it beneath thick, scorched logs. He dropped a couple of snapped twigs atop the paper, still silent. A long match flared, then was tossed onto the pile.

“I don’t feel it. The chill …” Which wasn’t entirely true, she’d simply forgotten about the cold; lost in her strumming.

He stood, moved to the thermostat mounted on the central wall in the house, and leaned in close to read the barely illuminated numbers. “Mother, it’s 65 in here. We need to get it up to 70.”

Bella folded her hands in her lap. “Whatever, Brock. Set it where you like.”

“I will, but you’re just going to drop it down again, so what’s the point?”

“You’re a surly little crapper today.”

“Maybe. But we have to talk.”

“Go fix yourself a tea, then come join me. Do me a solid and heat mine up as well.”

He snared her cup and marched into the tiny kitchen. Too small for Brock’s tastes, but just fine for Bella’s. He wasn’t a fan, and he wasn’t shy about sharing his feelings with her.

The sound of tap water landing in the bowels of a mug; the microwave door popping open; ceramic sliding against a tempered glass surface; the microwave door clunking closed, followed by digital beeps, and then the hum of mechanically excited electrons reached Bella as she gazed at what Brock had placed on the mantle.

Curious, but patient. Brock would get to it in his own good time. Bella considered a return to her guitar but opted instead to wait for Brock. After all, according to him, they Had To Talk. When Brock spoke like that, well, let’s just say he is a man of few words.

He strode back into the room, placed her cup on the end table, then perched on the edge of the sofa, facing his mom. He sipped, slowly, cautiously, his eyes fixed on Bella, then set the tea on the coffee table.

“What did you want to talk about?” Best not to waste time with unnecessary banter with him; that’s not how he was built at all.

Wordless, he stood, strode to the mantle, snared the box and the Ziploc, and returned to his seat, perched like his mother, back ramrod straight. He placed the box on the floor between his feet and dangled the Ziploc out before him, and Bella saw what was in it. She allowed herself a small frown.

Brock yanked the seal open and slid a small device out, then held it up so that it dangled from a bright, blue-ribbon lanyard. “You know what this?”

Bella’s gaze grew flinty. “I’m not dragging that thing around with me, Brock. How many times do we have to have this argument?”

He sighed, looked down, shaking his head. Then, “Until you’re dead.”

A part of Bella marveled at his abruptness, terse to the point of downright rudeness. “Mind your tongue, boy.”

“Enough!” His voice was a deep, threatening rumble; a pit-bull warning something away from its food. “I am not having another argument with you over this.”

“Then get rid of it. I’m not interested.”

He turned, placed it on the table, then faced Bella again. “Here’s the way this is going to go, Mother.”

And with that, a small, ebon switchblade flicked open with a piercing snick. Brock drove the point into the top of the box, slicing the tape apart. The knife disappeared, and he opened the flaps of the box. He slowly extracted the contents of the box, which was sheathed in a white sheet of packing foam.

Brock peeled the packing foam away, revealing an obsidian urn. Ornately curved handles spanned the height of it on either side, and it reflected the morning’s light with a chilling effect on Bella. Her hand went to her mouth; her eyes widened. “Is that what I think it is?”

He sat the offensive thing on the thick carpet. “If you think it’s a cremation urn, then yes, it is.”

“Brock!” She pushed herself back in her chair, trying to get away from it. She glared at Brock.

His eyes seemed to soften; she read sorrow and compassion there, which surprised her more than the unboxing. “Mother—”

“–Get that damned thing out of my house!”

~~~

Summer of ’50, Wichita Kansas

“Mirabella Marie Franzetti! Get in here, pronto!”

Bella was seated at the kitchen table, forcing herself to focus on the unbelievably dry geography textbook opened to the section on ‘Continents of the World,” when her Papa barked that command.

Her head jerked up, eyes wide, even though mere moments ago she was struggling mightily to keep those eyelids open.

A dish clattered in the sink. “Well, at least I didn’t break it.” Becca Franzetti turned at the sudden masculine command that seemed to echo throughout their small two-story home. “Bella? What did you do now?”

“Ha ha ha ha ha! You’re in for it now, Binkie.” Of course, her older brother, Frankie, just had to chime in. He seemed to be obsessed with his little sister getting into trouble, though he once confessed to Bella that was so Ma and Papa would ignore him.

Fat chance. He was a booger, through and through.

Becca turned to face Bella. “Well? Don’t sit on your laurels, young lady. Get in there and see what your Papa wants”

“Yes Ma,” and she was out of her chair in a flash, all gangly arms and legs and wild ebon tresses flying all over the place as she darted from the kitchen, down a short hall, and then a sharp right turn, and then a quick stop, with a little bare-sock slide that put her right in front of her Papa. “Yes, Papa?”

Ma once told Bella that Papa was a very smart Engineer over at the Cessna plant, which was a golly-gee big deal. She’d informed Bella and Frankie of this because Mister Nunzio Franzetti was always puttering around the house with neat ideas and weird little gadgets that served some purpose, of which only he knew. Her way of explaining Papa.

“I ask you, my Little Swan, are you hot?”

Bella was indeed hot; it was sweltering in the mid-summer Kansas heat and humidity. The whirring electric fans strategically positioned around the house just pushed the hot air around and around. She brushed a trickle of sweat from the tip of her nose. (Ma always called her nose a ‘schnozz’, which sounded funny). “I guess so.”

“You don’t know?”

“I do, Papa.” She began shifting weight from foot to foot as her Papa stared at her with his unblinking coal-dark eyes. “Yes, I am hot.”

He smiled, and it lit his swarthy complexion. “Then, my Swan, we will go tomorrow to my work, and we will get things for my new project. Would you want to know what it is?”

Her fingers on both hands danced and thrummed against her blue jeans. Nervous energy. Her Ma said she was ‘twitchy’, because she fidgeted all the time, just as she was doing right then.

~~~

The Following Morning

Frankie Franzetti was playing stickball with his friends in the middle of the street. The Franzetti house was at the very end of the block of modest, white frame houses, with open fields to the west, leaving a whole lot of street to play and not fret about breaking windows.

Becca Franzetti stood on the front porch, a dish towel draped over her forearm. Silent, her eyes sparkling blue in the brilliant Kansas sun.

Nunzio backed the Ford station wagon over the gravel drive and literally bounced out of the car before the engine quit knocking. Bella was a bit slower than her dad and more than a little bewildered, not really grasping why her Papa was so excited.

Ma once said that Nunzio is ‘old country’. “What does that mean, Ma?”

“Old country?” Bella nodded. “Yes or no, young lady. I can’t hear your head rattle.”

“Yes, Ma.”

She nodded. “Old country’ means that your Papa was born in Italy, just south of Rome, in fact. You can look that up in your geography book. Those people tend to be… excitable.”

Indeed, Nunzio was excited, hauling large boxes from the back of the car. Bella met her Ma’s gaze and shrugged, as if to say, ‘No idea, Ma.’ Becca spun on her heel and disappeared into the house, her voice calling out, “Lunch will be ready in 15 minutes, so you two better have your hands washed and seated at the table.

Becca was in a mood because it was so ungodly hot.

Lunch was served: cucumber sandwiches, potato chips, and lemonade, which Nunzio wolfed down at high speed. Talking while his cheek bulged with half-eaten food. “I want to tell you about my project, but—” chew, chew, chew, gulp; “It will be so much the better for us. You wait, you see.”

Becca nodded, smiled, and patted Nunzio’s hirsute hand, while Bella resigned herself to munching as many potato chips as she could filch without her parents seeing her.

Becca saw her, and her smile for Bella was real and warm.

The big Project turned out to be a roof fan.

Several weeks working mornings, nights, and weekends, Papa Nunzio would excuse himself after a peck on Ma’s cheek and disappear upstairs where he would bang, saw, solder, weld, and handyman away, accompanied by a steady stream of cursing both in English and Italian.

The Project is Finished!

Then came a fresh Saturday morning. Not a cloud in the sky. A slight, swirling breeze flicked the wispy curtains in the house as Bella came downstairs with a yawn and shuffling feet, her eyes not yet fully open and functional. “Whass for breakfast?”

Papa was up and moving like a dervish. “Sit, sit, little Swan. It is a beeg day today!”

Ma stepped into the kitchen, and Papa repeated his performance for her, and last, of course, came 12-year-old Frankie, preceded by a loud fart. Ma glared at him. “What do you say, swine?”

Frankie plopped into a kitchen chair. “Sorry. ‘Scuse me.”

“I swear, boy, I will beat manners into your rump if I have to. Stop using your head for something besides a hatrack!”

“Enough, mi familia! It is time.” Papa strode to the wall on the other side of the kitchen and flipped a switch, grinning ear-to-ear.

A low hum filled the air as Papa joined his family at the table. The kids looked at him. “Nunzio? What is this?” The hum grew louder, deeper, and Bella felt her tangled mane start to ruffle.

A breeze kicked up, and to Bella it was absolutely wonderful after a night of full-on sweat. Nunzio reached for Bella’s hand, then Ma’s, and Frankie reluctantly joined them, and the breeze grew in intensity.

Wispy drapes fluttered in the wind, because that’s what the breeze had grown into. Wind. Nunzio jumped up. “Come!” And they did, bolting up the creaking stairs, staring up at the ceiling where this amazing appliance took up over half the hall ceiling. The thrum of it, that close, felt peaceful to Bella. She imagined how delicious it would be to sleep with this thing running, sucking all the hot air out of the house.

“This is wonderful, Nunzio!”

Nunzio Franzetti was judicious in operating the roof fan, only running it for 15 minutes every hour, and constantly reminding the family, as follows:

1. To Ma: “You must always run this like I am now.”

2. To Frankie: “You don’t touch nothing, Frankie, you hear!”

3. To Bella: “You don’t touch nothing, my Swan, you hear!”

Nunzio was the first to die in the fire, although some think that Frankie might have been the first. The condition of the bodies made it hard to tell.

But Becca was on the move as the electrical fire chewed hungrily at the frame house, literally chasing her out of the bedroom as she raced to get Frankie first and then Bella. She couldn’t find Nunzio through the billowing smoke that was searing her lungs.

She shouldered open the door to Frankie’s room on the run and was immediately blown backward by a blast of heat and blinding smoke.

She screamed for Frankie, Nunzio, anyone, but she had no idea if she was even making a sound. She felt a tug on the back of her nightgown. Whirling, she saw Bella, then snatched her up and crashed down the stairs, instinctively protecting Bella from the impact of the fall with her body.

Becca struggled to her feet, Bella crying, wheezing, clinging onto Becca as she slammed into the front door. Glass shattered, and everywhere Bella looked it was ablaze. Becca screamed, tugging frantically at the doorknob, then yanking the door open to a rush of hot, humid air that was nowhere near as hot as the roaring blaze in the house. Bella saw a chunk of her mother’s skin smoking on the glowing doorknob.

Becca threw Bella outside, stumbling backward, and Bella stared in shock and horror as her mother was incinerated right in front of her before the blistering heat hammered her off the porch onto the hard gravel driveway.

Bella cringed in shock at the ferocity of the fire, sitting on the driveway, arms wrapped around her drawn-in knees, eyes wide, leaking tears, and coughing endlessly.

Strong hands grabbed her from behind, then cradled her in powerful arms as a myriad of voices swirled around her. Cool air washed over her skin, and she closed her eyes and burrowed into the thick warmth of the man who carried her.

The house collapsed in on itself with shattering thunder, then the blaze resumed its ravenous feeding frenzy. There was nothing left, the fire rabidly consumed everything it touched; wood, fabrics, bodies, reducing everything to ash.

Bella watched her mother get cremated alive, the sound of her teeth popping like popcorn embedded in her brain forever..

~~~

Now

“No, Mother. We’re going to discuss this like adults.” Brock leaned back on the couch and crossed his legs.

A spark of anger flared in Bella. “Mind your tone, boy.”

He sipped his tea, meeting Bella’s glare evenly while formulating his words. “See, that’s the problem?”

“What is? I didn’t know we even had a problem.”

“You talk to me as if I’m a twelve-year-old that doesn’t know his butt from a hole in the ground.”

“Then stop acting like it.”

“How is asking you to wear this MEA device acting like a kid?”

Bella opened her mouth, but before she could retort, she realized the truth of his words, not to mention the absurdity of her stubbornness. “I…. Her response felt weak. Feeble. And she hated it. “I don’t know Brock.” She sighed deeply, shoulders slumping. “We always argue….”

Brock smiled. He was a comely man to begin with, but when he flashed that smile, well, Brock would rival … other, much more vain men. “–No, Mother, not always. Mostly when we discuss this stuff. This MEA, or any other medical alerting device….”

“Because I don’t want to be monitored like some infant living in a crib!”

Brock placed his cup on the coffee table. “Is that what you think?”

“Not just think, Brock. Think, and feel. Don’t you think I know I’m getting old?”

Brock leaned forward. “It’s not that you know it, Mom. It’s that you don’t accept it. Or have an awareness of how your age impacts your day-to-day living. Folks usually don’t realize their diminished capacity until they understand that they can’t do some of the things they did in the past, even if the past is literally yesterday.

They don’t realize it until something bad happens, and then it hits like a sledgehammer.”

Bella sagged, flopping back into her chair. She was a little stunned that he actually called her ‘Mom’, but aside from that, his words punched her on several levels; tears slipped down her lined cheeks. She raised her gaze to Brock and was even more surprised to see him in tears as well.

He stood abruptly and rushed over to her, engulfing her in a hug, lifting her from the chair, and they held each other. He leaned down and whispered, “Remember what happened to Father?”

~~~

52 Months Ago

The house reeked of… illness!

A cloying haze of mentholated rub, steam, and a variety of other pseudo-noxious inhalants hung in a visible layer in the second-floor master bedroom, hovering over a nest of blankets on a king-size bed, where Carl’s wife of 54 years was barely visible.

“Bella?” Carl eased his lean, 78-year-old frame into the doorway to the room. A spike of alarm urged him forward when Bella didn’t answer. He bolted to the bedside. “Bella!” He rested the back of his hand against her forehead, quickly registering that she was with fever.

“Ummm.” Her eyes were closed, her gray-blond hair plastered against the pillow in sweaty clumps.

“Cold.”

Carl’s mind raced. What could he do to help her? He was afraid for her; no, not just afraid. Terrified.

Was this it?

He lifted the afghan and the duvet and the damp sheet and burrowed under the covers, pressing his body against hers. Bella shivered. “It’s okay, My Bell. I’m here.”

She turned her head, prying her eyes open to gaze at him, offering a weak smile, unaware that her breath could defeat an entire tin of Altoids. “I know you are, Jarhead.”

“Hush. Close those beautiful windows, Bell. Rest. I’ll warm you.” And he pulled her in closer. She was fast asleep in moments, breathing shallow, but regular.

He rested his fingers on the inside of her wrist and measured her pulse. Fast, but strong.

Phew!

He lay there with her, watching the moon track across the sky, which usually induced sleep in him, but not tonight. No, his thoughts churned, with one prevailing drumbeat; neither of you have much time left in this world. Tonight was a wake-up call.

They’d started one of those Make-A-Will-Yourself kits a while ago but never finished it. Well, now is as good a time as any. Deciding who should be the Power of Attorney (in case they both passed away) – Brock (who else?). Medical Power of Attorney? Duh. Brock. Who gets what? Brock gets everything. On so on it went, Carl’s crisp mind flitting over so many details: all their investment accounts, their trust (which owned their house and investments), banking details, passwords, web links, contacts. Why didn’t we finish this? This was so last-minute, and that really rankled Carl, because that’s not how Carl rolled.

Carl, buttoned up, neat, everything in its place, the entire house, his entire life up to USMC standard.

Ooorah!

Except for Bella. The chaotic love of his life. Literally dripping with creativity, arts and crafts supplies, and half-completed projects in every room of the house. It absolutely made Carl nuts. But, over time, as the years flowed seamlessly, Carl simply grew to accept Bella for Bella, an amazingly beautiful, humble, gracious, maddeningly-creative woman who chose to spend her life with a shlep like him.

Hours slipped past. A neighbor’s dog yapped, which was abruptly cut off, but it served to snap Carl out of his churning thoughts. He checked Bella; out like a light. Then he gingerly slid his arm from beneath her neck, flipped the covers on his side off, and rolled out of bed. He tucked the covers around her lightly snoring body, then padded into their bathroom.

He’d changed the bedding earlier that morning, and it lay heaped in a corner against the far side of the shower. Seeking something mundane to take his mind off all the morbidity, he grabbed the bundle, backed out of the bathroom and trundled down the short hallway to the stairs, using his chin to clear his line of sight.

The laundry was in the basement, and again, Carl wished that he’d just done what Bella had asked of him years ago: to move the laundry to the main floor. A dim thought flitted through his mind; you’re getting too old for this.

A few unsteady minutes and 14 steps later Carl was on the main floor and turning to the basement steps. The door was slightly ajar; he nudged it further open with his toe, then eased his foot to the lip ofthe top step, hitting the light switch toggle with his elbow. Okay, easy does it…

The sun blazed incandescence into the master bedroom, rousing Bella. Groggy, weak, eyes felt like they were glued shut, she croaked, “Carl?” That seemed to suck her energy and she flopped back on her moist pillow.

She tried again. “Carl?”

Nothing.

She reached over to her nightstand, aching agony lancing every muscle fiber, and snagged her mobile phone. Maybe he was asleep downstairs or in another bedroom. She sent him a one-word text then dropped the phone on the duvet, just as she heard a ping from across the room.

He left his phone. He never leaves his phone. A pang of worry spiked. She reached for her phone again.

‘Brock, pls come, I’m sick, and your father isn’t answering.’

The blackness of sleep washed over her, and she collapsed, out cold.

Lights. Voices. Jostling. Blankets whipped off, then shivering, and Bella became annoyed. “What—”

“Ma’am, can you hear me?”

Her throat felt like she’d eaten glass. “Y-yes.”

A woman, in a blue button-down shirt, with ‘EMT’ on her sleeve. She shined a light in Bella’s eyes, making them sting. “Ma’am, we’re taking you to the ER.”

A swarthy man appeared on her other side, wrapping a blood-pressure cuff around her arm. “You’re getting an ambulance ride. Ever had one?”

“N—”

“You’re running a serious fever. Do you know how long you’ve been sick?” The woman again.

It was all too fast. “Sick? No.”

“Mother, we’ve got to get you in because you’re dangerously dehydrated.” A familiar voice. Brock.

Then, “One, two, three!” and she felt her body lifted, then settled onto a crinkly bed, then was wrapped in a thin, soft blanket, and a mask was placed over her face, and she was flooded with cool, terribly dry air.

“Brock? Where is Car—your father?” Her voice sounded muffled, but she saw him as she was being hustled out the door, and he was crying.

~~~

Now

“No, Brock, I didn’t see him until the funeral, when he was lying in the casket.” She pushed away from Brock.

They both sat down again, Brock right beside Bella. “I did, Mom.”

A quiet sob slipped from her. “I know, son. I never wanted you to see such a thing.”

Brock sniffled, blew his nose with an almost genteel honk. “He shattered his skull; snapped his neck—”

“–Brock, please—”

“—But he didn’t die. Not right away. He dragged himself across—”

“—STOP!”

”—The concrete basement floor, trying to get to the phone!”

“Oh, my God.” Bella covered her face with shaking hands, tears spilling down her forearms.

“The laundry was scattered on the floor.” Brock’s tone softened, and he wrapped his strong arm around her shaking shoulders. “Right up until the very end, Mom, all he wanted to do was to take care of you.”

She lowered her hands, reached for a tissue from the end table, and dabbed her eyes and nose. “I know son, and that’s exactly what I wanted with Carl. Carl, was my … home.”

“I know, Mom. I could see that between you. That kind of love was. … is a model that my Janet and I live by, and, as you know, it’s how we raised your grandchildren. And, guess what?”

“Tell me.”

“You’re going to be a great grandma.”

“Brock!”

Brock sat back. “Now, don’t you wish Father were here to share in that news with you? Think about how he’d react to that little bombshell, huh?”

Bella’s voice was soft, small. “I know.”

“Well, the newsflash, as if that wasn’t enough, was that I had been trying to get him to wear a MEA for over a year before his fall. Know what he kept telling me?”

“No.”

“Guess.”

“That I wouldn’t like it.”

“Bingo.

“So, Mom, we want you to see your great-granddaughter, almost as much as you want to see her. And yes, before you ask, it’s a girl. Her name will be Bella.” And Brock rested the MEA device, still attached to its lanyard, on the coffee table.

“Please.”

Bella offered him a weak smile. “I’ve been a stubborn old bat, haven’t I?”

“I wouldn’t go that far, Mom.”

“Well, your father raised an upright man, and I know what’s in your heart, so yes, Brock, I will wear it.”

He pulled her into an embrace, holding her close. “Mom, Mom, we will always be there for you.

Always.”

As he pulled away, Bella whispered, “But …”

“But? But, what?”

“Figure out how to put it on something I can wear on my wrist. It needs to look good.”

They laughed together, mother and son. Brock collected the offending urn and the box it came in, blew her a kiss, and strode out the door, closing it gently.

Bella brushed her cheek, grabbed the MEA, took it into the kitchen, and dropped it into her junk drawer. She took her seat, leaned over, and picked up her six-string.

Everything in its place.

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Hana Rubinstejnova: Peaceful Watermill

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MIDDAY POETRY – ‘Peaceful Watermill’

Hana Rubinstejnova


the weathered mill
water churning through
the wooden blades

in times when
resources were plentiful
meadows lush green

the creek sheltering
an elusive creature
the enigmatic platypus

when peace was
too common to notice
undervalued and plentiful

once it disappeared
people tend to
appreciate it again

the old mill
roof still intact
its wheel turning

standing strong through
all seasons upheaval
explosions and wars

the comforting place
where human work
with nature coexist
peacefully
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Tanja Cillia: The Mill

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The Mill

Tanja Cillia

The old man’s hands were maps of callouses and scars, each ridge telling a story of grain sacks hauled, millstones adjusted, and flour-dusted afternoons spent squinting at the creek’s water level.

Thomas Mabry had worked the mill for fifty-three years. Long enough to see the tourists dwindle, the roof sag, and the county forget the place existed entirely. Now he sat on his porch, shelling pecans into a chipped bowl, watching the couple next door [in a manner of speaking] lug grocery bags up their uneven driveway.

You kids, he called out, voice raspy as the hinge on the mill’s side door, Come here, both of you. Got something’ for you.

Olivia and Stephen exchanged glances; the kind shared by people who’d learned Thomas’s ‘somethings’ ranged from jars of suspicious preserves and bootleg alcohol, to advice about their leaky gutters. “What’s up?” Stephen asked.

Thomas pushed the pecans aside, and handed Olivia a thick, battered manila envelope. She opened it. Inside was a deed, the paper crisp but yellowed at the edges. “Mill’s yours now,” he said, like he’d just offered them a spare set of keys.

Olivia’s looked up. “Thomas, you can’t just…”

“Already did.” He cracked another pecan with a practiced twist of his thumbs. “County recorder’s office got me the papers last Tuesday. Legal Deeds. Thought you’d like a place where the floors tilt honest…”

Stephen snorted, flipping through the documents. “Honest’s one word for it. The upstairs beam looks like a crossbow.”

“That’s the spirit,” Thomas said. “You’ll need it.”

The envelope sat on the kitchen table of the couple for three days, warping slightly from the humidity of Olivia’s cooking. Stephen kept flipping through the deed like it might reveal hidden clauses… obligation to repair ancient waterwheel, must answer to ghosts of disgruntled millers past, etc.

On the fourth morning, their neighbour Marjorie leaned over the fence while they were untangling their tomato plants. “Heard you two won the lottery,” she said, nodding toward the mill’s sagging silhouette down the hill. “That place’s got more dry rot than a factory of fungi. Sell it to some developer, before it falls on your heads. I know someone who’d buy it…”

Olivia stood up and wiped her hands on her jeans, leaving streaks of potting soil. “We’re thinking of fixing it up.”

Marjorie’s mocking laugh sounded like a screen door slamming. “Whatever next? Tell me; are you rereading The Mill on the Floss for fun?”

Stephen’s shovel hit something solid with a clang that echoed across the millpond. He wiped sweat from his forehead with the back of his wrist, leaving a streak of rust-coloured dirt. “Either we just found Thomas’s secret moonshine stash,” he called over his shoulder, “or this waterwheel’s more salvageable than Marjorie’s agenda…”

Olivia crouched beside him, prying at the rotted wooden slats with a crowbar. Beneath the layers of algae and decades of neglect, the iron mechanism was dull, but intact. “It’s like archaeology,” she said, grinning as a gear shifted under her fingers. “If archaeologists got blisters and swore at splinters…”

The mill exhaled dust when they pried open the stuck side door the next morning; a sneeze of mouldy, almost-century-old flour, and damp oak. Sunlight cut through the cracked windows, illuminating floating motes that could have been, Olivia noted, the ghosts of disgruntled millers. Stephen thumped the main support beam with his fist. A spider the size of a watch face rappelled down in protest. “See? In China, spiders descending on a strand of gossamer are seen as ‘happiness from heaven.’

By the week’s end, they’d patched the worst of the roof with corrugated tin from the Buy Nothing Facebook Group. Olivia insisted it was ‘recycling rustic charm’. They scrubbed the grinding stones until their granite veins showed. Thomas brought over a jar of something he called chortleberry jam, and watched them work from the lawn chair, offering commentary like a sportscaster. “Y’all ever held a saw before? That’s not how… Give it here…”

The chortleberry jam turned out to be edible, albeit aggressively tart, which Thomas claimed was good for their constitution. Olivia spread it on crackers while Stephen wrestled with the mill’s original ledger, its pages brittle as dried leaves. According to this, he said, squinting at faded ink, they ground twelve barrels of rye flour in 1898, and traded half to a blacksmith for a set of iron brackets. He tapped the page. “Which, coincidentally, are the same brackets holding up that beam you’re leaning against.”

Olivia froze mid-bite. “You’ve got to be joking.”

“Nope.” Stephen flipped the ledger shut with a puff of dust. “Thomas’s family ran this place like a frontier eBay.” Thomas cackled from his lawn chair throne, peeling another pecan. “Barter’s honest. Money’s just shiny barter with delusions of grandeur.”

The waterwheel groaned to life on the third Saturday, its iron joints protesting like an arthritic old man rising from a nap. Olivia had spent the morning ankle-deep in the creek, clearing decades of silt and broken branches from the sluice gate, while Stephen oiled the gears with a grease gun Thomas produced from his garage. “Still works,” he’d said, though the can was rusted shut and had to be pried open with a screwdriver.

When the first rush of creek water hit the paddles, the whole structure shuddered, then began to turn with a rhythmic thunk-thunk-thunk that sent a pair of startled ducks flapping from the reeds.

Thomas squinted at the wobbling rotation. He lobbed a pecan at the wheel, which bounced off with a satisfying ping. “Needs alignment. And about six more gallons of grease. But it’s moving.”

Olivia whooped, grabbing Stephen’s muddy wrist to spin him in a clumsy jig. Their boots left overlapping prints in the wet clay, a temporary record of joy. By noon, a handful of cars had pulled over on the parkway overlook; tourists drawn by the novelty of a working mill, in an era of microwave dinners. A woman in a sunhat asked whether they sold flour. “Not yet,” Olivia admitted, “but we’ve got chortleberry jam.” She gestured to Thomas’s jars lined up on the mill’s windowsill, labels peeling. The woman bought three.

That night, they ate dinner on the mill’s newly stabilised porch. Thomas’s contribution had been a five-gallon bucket of porch glue (a dubious mix of wood filler and roofing tar). Stephen flipped through a library book on 19th-century milling techniques, occasionally reading passages aloud between bites of delicious fried chicken. “Says here the original Mabrys used to let the millstones ‘sleep’ by propping them apart with leather wedges when not in use. Prevents ‘unnatural compression of the granite.’” He snorted. “Sounds like millstone therapy.”

“Yes. True, that. I did it myself, when I milled.”

Thomas’s porch glue held through the first thunderstorm, though Olivia swore she heard the mill’s timbers groan in protest. By dawn, the creek had risen just enough to give the waterwheel an enthusiastic shove, sending it into a lopsided gallop that scattered droplets across the newly swept grinding floor. Stephen stood in the doorway, coffee steaming in his chipped Millwright mug (a gift from Thomas), watching the wheel’s erratic progress. “It’s like watching a sleep-walker try to waltz,” he muttered.

Olivia appeared beside him, still rubbing sleep from her eyes. “At least it’s moving. That’s more than we could say last month.” She reached into her jacket pocket and produced a handful of wheat kernels. “Think it’ll grind these, or just spit them back at us?”

They found out fifteen minutes later, after Stephen had jury-rigged a belt from an old bicycle chain, and Olivia had coaxed the millstones into something resembling alignment. The first handful of wheat disappeared into the chute with a hollow sound like marbles ricochetting down a drainpipe. For three agonizing seconds, nothing happened. Then, with a cough and a shudder, the stones produced a thin trickle of flour so fresh it still smelled like sunlight.

Olivia caught some in her palm and held it out to Stephen. “Behold,” she announced, “the world’s most expensive pancake ingredient.” The flour was coarser than store-bought, flecked with bits of bran that caught in the whorls of her fingerprints. Stephen leaned in to sniff it, then sneezed violently, sending a tiny mushroom cloud of flour into the air.

The flour cloud hung in the air like an ethereal encore. Olivia burst out laughing.  

Thomas’s voice carried from the doorway, where he stood holding a grease-stained paper bag. “If y’all are done summoning the demon of gluten intolerance, I brought lunch. Ham and chortleberry sandwiches. For strength.” He walked over the freshly swept grinding floor… a gesture that would have given any historical preservationist a heart attack. Stephen peeled back the wax paper cautiously. The jam had bled purple into the bread, giving the ham a vaguely bruised appearance. This is either going to taste amazing, he said, or give us food poisoning with bells on.

The chortleberry jam was sharp and sweet in equal measure, cutting through the salt of the ham. They ate perched on the mill’s ancient oak counter, their legs swinging, like kids at a soda fountain. Thomas watched the waterwheel’s progress through a mouthful of sandwich. “Still wobbles a tad, like a newborn colt,” he observed. “But it’s grinding. That’s more than I managed the last ten years.”

The mill’s first official customer arrived on a Tuesday; a woman in hiking boots and a sunhat as wide as a satellite dish. She peered into the grinding room with the cautious curiosity of someone inspecting a zoo exhibit. “Is this where the flour happens?” she asked, as if flour were a rare meteorological event.

Olivia, elbow-deep in adjusting the millstone’s leather wedges, looked up. “Depends on your definition of ‘happens.’ Sometimes it’s more of a suggestion than a guarantee…” She gestured to the wooden bin where a modest pile of golden flour gleamed. “But yes. This is it.”

The woman bought two pounds, paying with exact change from a zippered coin purse. “My grandmother used to bake with stone-ground flour,” she said, cradling the paper sack like it contained memories instead of wheat. “Said it tasted like patience.”

Stephen, who’d been pretending to fix the hopper while secretly watching the transaction, waited until the woman’s car had disappeared up the parkway before turning to Olivia. “Did we just become a tourist attraction, or are we a therapy session?”

The mill’s unofficial grand opening happened the following Saturday when a tour bus, an actual tour bus, pulled into the gravel lot beside the creek. Olivia was elbow-deep in grease, trying to coax the sifter into something resembling functionality, when the air brakes hissed. She looked up to see forty-odd retirees disembarking in coordinated pastels, their smartphones already raised like a flock of camera-wielding flamingos.

“Uh, Stephen?” she called toward the mill’s loft, where he’d been reinforcing the railing with Thomas’s patented rustic-but-won’t-kill-you technique. “We have an audience.”

The tour guide, a woman in a visor with the verve of a summer camp counsellor, herded the group toward the waterwheel with practiced gestures. “And here, ladies and gentlemen, is Virginia’s oldest functioning gristmill…”

Stephen leaned over the loft railing, flour dust puffing from his sleeves. “Functioning is a strong word,” he muttered, just loud enough for Olivia to hear.

The tour guide either didn’t hear Stephen or chose to ignore him, ploughing ahead with her script, “…painstakingly restored by local artisans using traditional techniques!”

Olivia wiped her greasy hands on her overalls and shot Stephen a look that clearly said ‘Don’t you dare.’ He didn’t. He just mimed zipping his lips and tossed a wood shaving at her head.

The retirees swarmed like politely curious praying mantises, peering at the millstones and gasping when Thomas, who’d materialized from nowhere, demonstrated how to wake the stones up by removing the leather wedges. “Like cracking open a book no one’s read in a hundred years,” one woman whispered to her friend, who nodded solemnly while filming the entire thing on her iPad.

By noon, they’d sold out of flour, all the chortleberry jam, and half the pecans Thomas had shelled that morning (‘Organic pecans!’ he’d announced, jacking up the price by two dollars a bag). The tour bus left in a cloud of gravel dust, and Olivia collapsed onto the mill’s front steps, clutching a wad of cash in her flour-streaked fist. “We just made more in three hours than we did all last month,” she said, dumbfounded.

Stephen sat beside her, picking at a wood splinter in his thumb. “Yeah, but last month, no one asked me to explain the ‘social significance of artisan milling in post-Civil War Appalachia.’” He imitated the tour guide’s chirpy voice perfectly. “I made up half that answer.”

The mill’s first review appeared in the Blue Ridge Traveller under the headline Flour Power: Mabry Mill’s Second Act. Olivia nearly spat out her coffee when she saw it; partly because of the awful pun, and partly at the photo of Stephen mid-sneeze. The article called their flour unpretentiously earthy and their jam aggressively flavourful, which Thomas insisted was code for “city folks can’t handle real fruit.”

By midsummer, the mill’s rhythm settled into something resembling routine. Mornings began with Stephen prying the waterwheel into motion with a crowbar and a vocabulary that would make a sailor gape, while Olivia measured out wheat from burlap sacks Thomas produced from his barn, like a flour-dusted Santa. Afternoons brought a steady trickle of visitors… hikers now detouring from the parkway, history buffs wielding dog-eared guidebooks, and the occasional influencer posing with artisanal flour bags like they’d discovered the holy grain.

One such influencer, a man in leather suspenders who introduced himself as Gristmill Guy (“Yes, that’s my brand!”), spent forty minutes filming Thomas shelling pecans before asking, “Do you think the mill represents a rejection of late-stage capitalism?” Thomas spat a shell into the grass. “Son, I represent a rejection of stupid questions.” The clip went viral.

The county inspector arrived on a Thursday, clipboard in hand and cynical scepticism etched into the lines around his mouth. He stood in the mill’s doorway, squinting at the waterwheel’s lopsided rotation like it was a personal insult. “You got permits for this?” he asked, tapping his pen against the clipboard.

Olivia, who’d been wrist-deep in flour, wiped her hands on her apron and shot Stephen a look that screamed “Play nice!”

“Permits for grinding wheat into flour?” she asked, sweet as molasses. “Is that a thing now?”

The inspector sighed, the kind of sigh reserved for people who’d clearly never heard of OSHA. He counted on his fingers. “Structural modifications. Waterway usage. Historic preservation compliance…” He said the last part like it was a felony.

Stephen, who’d been pretending to adjust the millstone’s alignment, straightened up. “We didn’t modify anything. Just un-buried it.” He gestured toward the wheel, which chose that moment to hiccup violently, sending a spray of creek water onto the inspector’s polished shoes.

The inspector stared at his wet shoes like they’d personally betrayed him. “This, he said, shaking one foot, and then the other, “is exactly why we have regulations.”

Thomas, who’d been supervising from the lawn chair with a jar of suspiciously murky iced tea, let out a snort. “Regulations didn’t stop your granddaddy from dynamiting trout in this very creek back in ‘58. County’s got selective memory…”

Olivia stepped forward, flour-dusted hands raised in surrender. “We can fill out whatever paperwork you need. We just wanted to…”

“..Make flour,” Stephen finished, tossing a handful of wheat kernels into the air like confetti. A good couple landed on the inspector’s clipboard.

The inspector blinked at the wheat, then flicked it off with a noise like a disgruntled goose. Right. Flour. He scribbled something on his clipboard.  “You’ve got thirty days to get this place up to code, or I’m shutting you down for ‘endangering historical infrastructure’.”

Thomas waited until the inspector’s car had disappeared down the gravel road, before spitting into the grass. “‘Historical infrastructure,’ my left foot. You either bribe him with hooch and jam, or actually learn building codes.”

Olivia wiped her floury hands on her jeans. “Option C: It’s time to be nice to Marjorie. Her cousin’s married to someone in the permits office.”

Stephen’s eyebrows shot up. “Marjorie’s got a cousin in the permits office? Hmmm…”

Thomas chuckled, cracking a pecan with his thumb. “Marjorie’s family tree’s got roots in every county department, from here to Roanoke. Her uncle was the one who looked the other way when I added the lean-to back in ‘78…”

Olivia said, “How do we go about it?”

“Better,” Thomas grinned, showing teeth like old piano keys. “You invite her to lunch.”

The lunch invitation was delivered via a jar of chortleberry jam left on Marjorie’s porch with a note scrawled on the lid in Olivia’s messy handwriting: “Trade you this for 30 minutes of your time, tomorrow, at noon.”

Marjorie showed up at the mill at noon sharp. She eyed the picnic table they’d set up by the creek, where Thomas was arranging salads and cold cuts with the precision of a bomb squad technician. Stephen, who’d spent the morning scrubbing mill grease from under his nails, resisted the urge to roll his eyes.

Marjorie took a seat with regal grace. “I hear you’ve managed to piss off Carl the Clipboard. Impressive. It usually takes people at least six months of flagrant violations to earn that distinction.”

Olivia kicked Stephen’s ankle under the table. It was their secret signal for ‘let me handle this’. She leaned forward. “Marjorie, hypothetically, if someone wanted to ‘un-piss-off’ Carl, where would they start?”

Marjorie took a slow bite of her carpaccio, chewing with the deliberation of a judge considering an appeal. “Hypothetically”, she said, dabbing juice off her chin with a napkin, “they’d start with the fact that Carl’s sister runs the historical society’s gift shop. Which, coincidentally, is currently selling ‘authentic artisanal pioneer jams’ imported from Oregon.” She smirked. “Carl hates Oregon.”

Thomas laughed. “So, we bribe him with jam that’s actually really local?”

“I have a better idea,” Marjorie flicked an imaginary crumb off the table. “You get the historical society to ask him to back off. Make this place their new pet project. They’ve been desperate for something to fuss over, since the quilt museum closed.” She pointed her fork at the mill. “And this is way cuter than a bunch of old blankets. In fact, as I said before, I would have found a buyer in no time…”

Stephen blinked at Marjorie. He would never understand this woman as long as he lived. “So let me get this straight; we seduce the historical society with jam and charm?” He gestured to the mill’s sagging porch, where Thomas’s porch glue had oozed into a stalactite. “Unless ‘charm’ is code for ‘structural liabilities,’ I’m not seeing the play here.”

Olivia kicked his ankle under the table again, much harder this time. “What Stephen means,” she said through a clenched smile, “is how do we apply the charm? Do we just… invite them over for tea and scones?”

Marjorie sighed, the kind of sigh reserved for people who’d clearly never navigated small-town politics. “No, you invite them to christen the place. Ribbon-cutting, speeches, the whole dog-and-pony show.” She waved her fork at the mill yet again. “Get the press in on it. Call it a ‘living history demonstration.’ Old people lose their minds over that kind of thing.”

Thomas, who’d been quietly shelling pecans into a coffee can, snorted. “She’s not wrong. Last year they threw a parade because someone restored an outhouse… go figure.”

The historical society arrived en masse on a Tuesday, descending upon the mill like a flock of pastel-clad birds; women in flowery dresses clutching notepads, men in suspenders squinting at the waterwheel as if it might pop quiz them on 19th-century engineering. Marjorie had orchestrated the entire affair with the precision of a general, positioning Olivia by the grinding stones (‘smile like you invented flour’) and Stephen at the hopper (‘try not to sneeze’). Thomas, by unanimous decree, was stationed as far from the dignitaries as possible, ostensibly to monitor creek levels but really because no one trusted him not to mention the dynamited trout.

The society’s President, a woman named Eleanor with a voice like a theremin, clasped her hands when the millstones groaned to life. “Oh, it’s authentic!”, she trilled, as if they might have hidden a cement blender inside the granite. One of her compatriots dabbed at his eyes with a handkerchief. “Just like my great-grandpappy’s mill,” he sniffed. “Except his exploded in ’23.”

Olivia, who’d spent the morning arranging flour dust into artfully rustic piles, handed out tiny muslin bags of inaugural grindings as party favours. Stephen, meanwhile, had been coached by Marjorie to drop phrases like ‘heritage preservation’ and ‘community stewardship’ at strategic intervals. He kept muttering them to himself so as not to forget them.

Carl the Clipboard lurked at the back of the crowd, arms crossed, until Eleanor seized his elbow and dragged him toward the grinding stones. “Carl, darling, you simply must taste this flour,” she commanded, thrusting a spoonful at him. “It’s like biting into history.”

Carl, who clearly hadn’t anticipated being force-fed nostalgia, chewed on the flour with the grimace of a man who’d just licked a chalkboard. “Tastes like… dirt,” he managed, wiping his tongue with a handkerchief.

Eleanor beamed as if he’d recited poetry. “Exactly! Terroir!” She turned to the crowd, arms spread. “This mill isn’t just grinding wheat. It’s pulverizing time itself!”

Stephen caught Olivia’s eye. She discreetly mimed “Shhh!”

By the time Eleanor finished her impromptu speech, on the lines of “Let this mill stand as a testament to Appalachian grit, both literal and metaphorical!”, Carl had retreated to inspect the porch railing with the intensity of a bomb squad technician. He poked at the brackets, and frowned. “These brackets aren’t up to code,” he said to no one in particular.

Thomas called over without turning his head. “Those brackets survived the Johnstown Flood. They’ll survive your clipboard.”

Carl’s frown deepened into crevasses that rivalled the mill’s weathered siding. He tapped his clipboard against the porch railing, once, twice, before sighing through his nose like a deflating tire. “Fine. But I want those brackets documented by a licensed contractor.” He jabbed a finger at Stephen. “You. Get me a notarised affidavit about their provenance. By Friday.”

Olivia intercepted before Stephen could respond with whatever words were brewing in his brain. “We’ll have it hand-delivered by Marjorie’s cousin,” she promised sweetly, nudging a plate of scones toward Carl. They were laced with enough chortleberry jam to stain teeth purple, a bribe disguised as hospitality. Carl eyed them like they might be laced with arsenic, but he took one anyway, and wolfed it down after the initial bite.

The historical society left in a cloud of talcum powder and self-congratulation, Eleanor’s final proclamation, “This mill shall be protected!” echoing over the creek’s murmur. Marjorie lingered behind, smirking. “Told you they’d bite,” she said. “Old people love two things besides nostalgia: feeling important, and free food.” She carefully wrapped a scone in a paper napkin and put it in her handbag. “Your problem now is keeping Carl off your backs long enough to totally fix the place.”

Stephen waited until Marjorie’s pickup had disappeared down the gravel road before collapsing onto the mill’s steps.  “We just committed ourselves to turning this place into a museum exhibit! Next thing you know, they’ll want us in overalls for ‘historical accuracy’, with employees in calico dress to welcome tourists and homeschooled children and random visitors…”

Soon, the mill was swarmed with visitors pressing dollar bills into Olivia’s hands for bags of flour that Stephen had secretly fortified with store-bought whole wheat. “For volume,” he’d whispered when she caught him blending the batches. “So that supply can keep up with demand…”

A man in a Civil War reenactor’s hat argued with Thomas about whether the waterwheel’s paddles were period appropriate, until Thomas pointed to the 1893 patent stamp still visible on the iron bracket and said, “Son, this wheel was turning before your granddaddy’s granddaddy knew what a millwheel was.” The reenactor left, muttering about revisionist milling.

The postman delivered the pamphlets on The Romantic Era of American Milling. Olivia slumped against the porch railing. “We just officially turned our livelihood into a theme park,” she groaned.

Thomas cracked pecans between his fingers as if there were no tomorrow, scattering shell fragments like shrapnel. He jerked his chin toward Marjorie, who was scribbling notes about merchandising opportunities.

He laughed. “Next thing you know, you’ll be selling ‘I Heart Millwright’ sticks of rock and thimbles!”

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Write the Story March 2026

Welcome to Write the Story!

Writers Unite! begins its eleventh year offering the “Write the Story!” Join us in continuing the “Write the Story” tradition!

Now for March 2026!

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The March 2026 Prompt!

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Here’s the plan:

  • You write a story of up to 10, 000 words + (minimum 500 words) or a poem (Minimum 50 words) based on and referring to the image provided, and post it on the author site you wish to promote. Don’t forget to give your story a title. (Note: You do not have to have a website/blog/FB author page to participate. Your FB profile or WordPress link is acceptable.)
  • Please edit these stories. WU! will no longer conduct minor editing on your story, so please send in edited work. WU! reserves the right to reject publishing the story if it is poorly written.
  • The story must have a title and author name, and the link to the site you wish to promote must be included.
  • Send the story and link to the site via Facebook Messenger to Deborah Ratliff or email to writersunite16@gmail.com. Put “Write the Story” in the first line of the message.
  • Please submit your story by the 25th day of the month.

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Laura DePace: Winterthorne

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Winterthorne

Laura DePace

Winterthorne stood alone at the edge of the park. The beautiful snow that had surrounded him was all trampled now, from the feet of all of the children who had built him. He missed the sparkly clean snow blanket, but he was happy that so many children had come out to make him.

Adults, too, of course; it seemed that children were never allowed to do anything alone these days. He didn’t mind the adults, as long as they didn’t ruin the fun for the kids.

What a day that had been! A foot of snow had fallen overnight, and for once, it was the right kind of snow for building a snowman. Too often the snow was dry and fluffy; pretty, but pretty useless as far as snow crafts were concerned.

Winterthorne, of course, was an expert on all things snow-related. He knew all kinds of snow, from the icy, hard stuff to the tiny all-day flakes, to the big fluffy ones that look so pretty. Snowman snow was a special breed of snow.

That day after the snow, the sun came out and made the whole world sparkle. It was the kind of magical winter day that you usually only see on television: the kind where all the people stream out of their houses to play in the wintry wonderland. So many people! It had been very cold lately, and the people had been staying locked inside their warm houses. The sun was bright, though, and the people said it “felt warm,” even though it wasn’t. The snow storm had swooped in on a Thursday night, and everyone knew ahead of time that everything would be closed on Friday: no school, shops didn’t open, and office workers were told they could work from home. For the kids, it was a wonderful gift of a long weekend. They were determined to make the most of it.

They streamed out of their houses and filled the park with their shrieks and their laughter. They threw snowballs at each other and made snow forts, with flags made from rags and dish towels. They flopped into the snow, sinking down several inches, to make snow angels, until the park was ringed with a heavenly host. Although there was no hill in the park for sledding, the bigger kids pulled their little brothers and sisters – and a few cats and dogs – on sleds, round and round. One big black dog of indeterminate breed was enticed into bearing the sled rope around his neck and willingly playing sled dog for his boy and girl.

Finally the snowman building began; Winterthorne’s favorite part of winter. The snow packed easily, forming beautiful balls that grew and grew as the children rolled them around. As the snowballs got bigger, older, stronger children were recruited to roll them ever larger. Eventually the moms and dads were called in to help with the biggest ones.

Then came the suspenseful moment of the stacking. Would the snowball stay together, as the body was lifted to be placed on the base? Would one stay balanced on top of the other long enough for the swarm of children to pack in the snow to stick them together? Would the snowballs stay round? Was the bottom one big enough, the middle one too big? Was the head the right size?

Winterthorne helped as much as he could with his own creation. He used his snow magic to pull himself together, held his frost-breath while they worked on balancing his parts, concentrated on standing tall while the children pushed and patted him.

Once the snowballs were completed and stacked and packed together, the search began for the accessories: sticks for arms, stones for eyes. What about the nose? Did someone have a carrot they could use? The first try was too big; it was all Winterthorne could do to keep it from going straight through his head and coming out the other side. But after a break or two, his carrot-nose was just the right size.

The mouth, now; that was always a challenge. A pine cone? A spruce twig? There was no coal to be found, so they tried collecting bits of bark. Finally one of the littlest builders came up with a stick. It wasn’t a smile, but the children agreed it would have to do.

Plenty of clothes were volunteered to dress him up. Several children pulled off their scarves and hats to wrap and crown him. So many wanted him to wear theirs, that the children set up a schedule: these for today, those for tomorrow.

Finally he was done. Perfect! Winterthorne stood tall and proud. The children joined hands and danced in a circle around him, singing songs and laughing.

Finally the children were called home for supper and baths and bedtime. Winterthorne stood alone, guarding the snowy park.

The next day, the children came out to visit him. They played around him, pretending that he was a policeman, or a band director, or a teacher, or a wizard. (He liked being a wizard best.) They changed his hat and his scarf, and stuck mittens on his stick arms. The first few days – Saturday and Sunday – he had lots of company. But on Monday the children were back in school, and their parents were back at work, and no one had time to play with him. He spent his days remembering the fun when the children made him. He waited – patiently, silently, peacefully – and the days went by.

But today. Today he felt a change in the air. Could it be that another storm was coming? Another storm that would bring him company? Maybe the children would make another snowman! Oh, he hoped so!

Was that a snowflake? And another?

One by one, then ten by ten, then in countless numbers – the snow drifted gently down. And Winterthorne smiled.

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D. A. Ratliff: Vanished

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Vanished

D. A. Ratliff

I had come to despise fog.

Fog on the bridge to Cavanah Point didn’t creep in on “little cat feet,” as Carl Sandberg wrote, but arrived with a vengeance, sweeping across the bay below and enveloping the bridge in a thick gray cloud. It was a day like this one when Jason disappeared into the dense mist.

Driving across the bridge as fog rushed at me, I struggled to breathe. On sunny days, I could make the drive to see my parents without my chest tightening. On foggy days, the words of the man who drove onto the bridge behind Jason echoed in my head. My brother’s car disappeared into the thick haze, and a few minutes later, the driver found his silver SUV rental stopped in the lane, the door open, and Jason gone. He had vanished. The police concluded he must have jumped from the bridge, but despite an extensive search, divers never found his body. As my tires rolled onto the asphalt on the peninsula side, I drew a deep breath and wondered when the pain would go away.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   

My parents’ house sat on a bluff on the peninsula’s ocean side, with a spectacular view of the Pacific. The warm late-afternoon sun filtered through the trees, casting dappled shadows across the patio at the rear of the house. My parents, my sister Geri, and her husband, Ben, sat around the unlit fire pit. My two nieces, Olivia and Alexandria, chased each other around the yard, while my parents’ Golden Retriever followed. Their muffled voices grew louder as I approached.

“Daniel.” My mother, Rosalee, rose from her chair and rushed to me, her hug like a vise. She was a beautiful and vibrant woman at fifty-nine, but all you had to do was look into her eyes to see the haunting pain that lingered. She had carried that look from the moment we heard Jason was missing. She tried to be happy for my dad, Geri, me, and her grandchildren, but she didn’t fool us for a moment.

“Mom, you look gorgeous as always.”

“What a smooth lawyer you are. Sit for a bit. Dinner’s in the crockpot.”

I hugged my sister, then sat down. Dad poured a glass of Pinot Grigio and handed it to me. “I hear congratulations are in order. You got a promotion?”

“I wouldn’t call it a promotion. The US Attorney, Charles Winters, received a directive to form a cold-case unit to address unsolved criminal cases and clear as many as possible. DC believes there are too many unsolved cases. The unit will review old case files for evidence missed or overlooked when the cases were active. There are three assistant attorneys in the unit and a storage room full of files. Clay Furman, who joined the office about a month ago, and I are doing the initial scans. The others will take the first files we find and begin reviewing the evidence. Not sure if the unit will be permanent, but for now, I’ll be poring through a lot of dusty records.”

I steered the conversation to Geri’s newest art show, and Ben announced that a foundation had awarded him a fellowship in trauma and acute care at the hospital where he was completing his emergency medicine residency. I could hear my parents’ unspoken groans. They insisted that Geri and her family live with them while Ben was in med school. Although it felt never-ending, I knew it was good for Mom and Dad. Jason’s disappearance left a huge void, but the children’s laughter helped ease the hurt.

As I entered the kitchen, the aroma of Mom’s pot roast wafted toward me. We sat at the kitchen table, as we always did on Sunday evenings. We savored the pot roast, salad, and crusty bread, then homemade ice cream sundaes. While Ben helped my parents clear the table, I wandered into the family room, memories flooding in. The Sunday evening meal was the standard of my childhood, and I could hear Jason, Geri, and me squabbling over the last of whatever toppings Mom had set out for the sundaes.

I stopped in front of the family photo wall, all my attention drawn to Jason’s law school graduation photo. Jason Clark, Esq., looked like Dad, while Geri and I looked like our mother. He had Dad’s square jaw, a straight Greek nose, and the same gray eyes. His face told his story, that of a strong, intelligent, inquisitive, and kind man. I fought back tears, as I always did. If I didn’t, I would give in to raging grief, which would do none of us any good.

“I miss him, too.” Geri stood beside me, linked her arm in mine, and rested her head on my shoulder. “There are times when Livi stands with her hand on her hip, head cocked, explaining things to Alex, and I see Jason. It hurts more than I ever imagined.”

I pulled my sister closer and rested my nose against the top of her head. “I don’t think the hurt will ever go away, but we owe it to Jason to live our lives. That’s what he would want us to do.” She answered, her yes more of a garbled sob, and I knew the loss would never heal.

~~~

Clay leaned back in his chair, resting his hands on his head. “Whose idea was this?”

I took a sip of my once-warm coffee and shook my head. “Our fearless leaders. I’m beginning to think they’re right. I know we’ve only been reviewing these files for a week, but there are more cases than I expected that don’t appear to have been properly investigated.”

“Yeah, I noticed.” He leaned forward. “Dan, you’ve only been in the US Attorney’s office for two years, and two years before that as a Federal Court Clerk. You’ll find that not all career prosecutors in the DOJ ooze competence. Most do, but some political hacks get in, and some grow complacent. The workload can be overwhelming, and it takes a toll.”

“Growing up, I thought the FBI was the pinnacle of law enforcement. I even considered applying, but I ultimately decided to apply to the DOJ.”

Clay chuckled. “You’ve got the prosecutor’s bug. I had it too, and I don’t regret it.”

“I think I did, but I don’t want to get complacent. Off I go to get us hot coffee, then back at it.”

~~~

Five days later, my world changed.

Winters summoned us to a two p.m. meeting to review the cases we had identified so far. Shannon Parks and Jose Mercado, new assistant U.S. attorneys in the unit, had reviewed the evidence in the five selected cases, and together we had developed a plan to reopen them. Winters seemed pleased and ordered the cases reopened. Shannon and Jose were preparing a packet for the FBI, while Clay and I resumed reviewing additional files.

We decided to finish the last two boxes on the credenza in the conference room before leaving for the day. I started with the box that had only a few files, while Clay opened the second. Around five-thirty, Clay came across a file that left me stunned.

“Dan.”

I gazed at him over the file I held as a shiver of fear coursed through me. Clay’s voice was chilling. “What?”

“Your brother’s name… Is it Jason Patterson Clark?”

“Yes, why?” My heart pounded against my ribs, and my skin flushed hot.

“His name is in this file.” He slid the thin file across the table. “Read it. Don’t comment. As soon as you’re done, let’s get a drink.”

I read through the file, skimpy as it was, with mounting panic. Confusion set in, and I looked at Clay, who nodded toward the door. “Let’s go get that drink.” He slipped the file back into the box and turned off the conference room light as we left.

He suggested we meet at the Dauphin Restaurant and Lounge, an upscale place near the bay. It was six-thirty, too early for the regular patrons, so we had the bar to ourselves. We sat in two armchairs in the far corner, facing the door. It felt quite cloak-and-dagger to me.

A far too perky cocktail server took our drink order, and once she was out of earshot, I needed answers. “Clay, what is going on? I know the FBI joined the search for my brother, but the Sheriff’s office had the lead. The FBI only sent a search team. Why is there a file on him?’

He swept his hand toward the bar, and I saw the server returning. “Wait until our drinks arrive.”

I gulped down a slug of Maker’s Mark, the bourbon warming my throat, then set the glass down with a thud. “Tell me what’s going on.”

“I recognized a name in that report. I worked in the Office of International Affairs, part of the DOJ’s Criminal Division, which monitors overseas operations and legal matters at the CIA, until I transferred here.”

“Are you implying the CIA is involved in Jason’s disappearance?”

Clay shook his head. “All I can say is that when Roger Farmington’s name is on a case file, I don’t know what else it could be. Farmington is a big deal in the CIA’s planning of covert missions. Last I heard before I left the OIA, he was working on operations in South America targeting drug cartels.”

“I don’t understand. Jason joined an international law firm right out of college and handled major cases overseas.”

“There are a lot of cover stories out there. That might have been one of them.” He downed the rest of his Manhattan and signaled for another round. “Tell me about Jason. What did he study in college, and how did he end up at that law firm?”

With a second round of drinks before us, I told him about Jason. “Jason was brilliant, and his teachers recognized a significant talent for computer science. There wasn’t anything he couldn’t program or build, whether hardware or software. His math scores were off the charts, and by fourteen he was taking college-level classes in anything related to computers. At eighteen, he entered college with enough credits for a BS in computer science. He only had to take the required general courses, and as soon as he had those out of the way, he went on to a master’s degree. We expected him to go straight to Silicon Valley, but he shocked us by saying he was going to law school. It was no surprise that he graduated Summa Cum Laude and at the top of his class.”

“Impressive credentials. You say he joined the firm in DC right after college?”

I could only nod. I felt overwhelmed by it all.

“Dan, there is something amiss here. I need you to trust me. Can you do that?”

Clay joined the US Attorney’s Office a month ago. I had worked with him on one straightforward case that we quickly cleared before Winters assigned us to the cold case unit. I liked him, thought he was ethical, and had to trust him. Something was amiss, as he said, and Jason was involved. Besides, I didn’t have anyone else to trust.

“Yes, I can do that.”

“I need you to keep the discovery of that file to yourself for now. Don’t talk to anyone, not even family or friends—only me. And we only talk about this outside the Federal building. If anyone asks you about this file, say you know nothing. Got it?”

“I do.”

“Good. You need to give me some time to look into a few things. It could be a day or a week, but I will get back to you as soon as I have any information.”

A sip of bourbon settled my nerves as I watched Clay’s taillights fade into the darkness. My thoughts spun like that Tasmanian Devil from the cartoons, and fear crept into my bones. What if Jason hadn’t committed suicide? What had my brother been involved in?

~~~

I decided I was a better actor than I had expected to be. How I managed to get through the next several days, acting as if nothing were going on, surprised me. The weekend was tough. I had a date on Friday night with a gal I met at the gym, but I canceled because I knew I wouldn’t be my witty self, not that I ever was. Olivia’s birthday was on Saturday, and since Ben had a shift at the ER, it was Uncle Dan to the rescue—morning at the zoo, afternoon at the nature museum, dinner, and cake at home. Did I enjoy the day? I did, but I felt uneasy around my family, hiding information about Jason. It was my sister who noticed my unease. She was the empath, always sensing when something troubled both Jason and me. After Olivia blew out the candles and Mom served cake, I retreated to the den with my slice. I wasn’t surprised that Geri followed me.

I smiled. “Great day. Olivia had fun.”

Geri plopped onto the couch beside me. “She did. I’m exhausted.”

“Not far behind you.”

“You’ve seemed preoccupied today. What’s going on?”

I sighed inwardly. My sister is far too observant. I didn’t like lying to her, but I did anyway. “We’re up to our necks in cold cases, more than we ever expected. We already have twelve to send to the FBI to reopen, and there are still many more to review. We’ve been burning the proverbial midnight oil.”

The look in her eyes told me she didn’t believe me, but she let it go for now. “Please rest tomorrow, will you?”

“Yes, ma’am, no plans. Home, pizza, and baseball.”

~~~

Nothing changed at the office until Wednesday. As we were leaving for the day, Clay stopped me in the parking garage. He kept his voice low and his words cryptic. “I’ll be out of the office for the rest of the week. I may contact you. If I do, follow my instructions.” He walked away without another word, leaving me more confused than ever.

The next two days were busy as the unit met with FBI agents to review the first two cases for possible reopening. We started with capital crimes and cases closest to the statute of limitations. I left the office on Friday feeling good about our work. As I pulled into my condo garage, Clay texted me.

You are booked on the 10:30 red-eye to DC. A car will be waiting. Follow the driver’s instructions. Your cover is that you are working on a DOJ project. You will return to SF on Sunday.

I stared at the garage wall, trying to make sense of what was happening. I don’t like being in the dark, and all this covert idiocy was making me angry. Patience has never been my strong suit, but I’ve learned to curb my urge to rush things. Not this time. This time it was about my brother, and I wanted answers.

~~~

The plane landed just before seven a.m. on a rainy, dreary morning. I found the driver holding a placard with my name, and I was surprised when he dropped me off at the Hay-Adams. He said he would return for me at noon and that I should not have lunch.

But I could have breakfast. I showered, ordered room service, and while I waited, I texted Mom to say I had arrived. I told her I would be in meetings all afternoon and that my phone would be off. After breakfast, I set an alarm for eleven and went to sleep.

The driver returned promptly at noon, and I expected we were going to the DOJ building. We were not. The car headed west on I Street, away from the Department of Justice.

“Where are we going?”

“To Langley, sir.”

Langley. The CIA. Maybe Clay was right. Jason was involved with the CIA.

My heart felt heavy in my chest as a chill ran through me. I dreaded what I might hear.

~~~

My pulse quickened as I entered the iconic CIA lobby. I don’t believe anyone could walk across the marble-inlaid CIA motif without feeling the specter of James Bond in the air.

Clay was waiting for me and escorted me through security. Once we were out of the guards’ hearing range, I stopped him. “Why here? What does the CIA have to do with Jason?”

“I promise, Dan, we’re going to tell you everything. Come with me.” He headed toward the elevators.

The outer office was well appointed, but no one was at the desk on Saturday afternoon. We entered a spacious inner office with a conference table set for lunch. A man sat at the head of the table, typing on a tablet. He rose as we entered.

Clay made the introductions. “Dan, this is Roger Farmington, Deputy Director of Operations for South and Central America. Roger, Daniel Clark, Assistant US Attorney, Northern California District.”

As we shook hands, Roger’s deep voice filled the room. “Please sit, Dan, if I may call you that.”

“Certainly, sir.”

“And I’m Roger. I know this is very last-minute, and I’m certain you have many questions. I ordered lunch for us. My granddaughter had a soccer game this morning, so there was no time to stop anywhere.”

He tapped his phone screen, and a steward appeared with a cart and lunch. I lost my appetite when I realized we were heading to Langley, but I  took a club sandwich and potato salad to be polite. Then I waited.

Roger took a bite of his sandwich before speaking again. “Dan, as a US Attorney, you hold a high-level security clearance, and I need to remind you of it before we continue.”

“I understand that anything I hear today is classified.”

“Good.” He continued eating, speaking between bites. “First, let me tell you that Clay works for the Office of International Affairs, which liaises with the CIA. On our request, DOJ sent him to the San Francisco district office. But before we explain his involvement, let me tell you about your brother.”

“Please.” I meant it more as a command than as a pleasantry.

“The CIA is constantly recruiting the best and the brightest we can find. Jason’s expertise in cybertechnology came to our attention while he was still in high school. We didn’t approach him until he had completed his bachelor’s degree and was in his master’s program, at age twenty. We invited him to join our cyber unit and also put him through law school. We like our employees to be well-versed in the law and experienced in the demands and pressures of law school. It’s great training. He agreed.”

“The international law firm was a cover?”

“Yes. However, Jason wasn’t a covert operative until a few years later. He did travel, but he worked out of field offices. He became a covert operative when we needed someone physically present at a target’s location. He volunteered to go and we gave him a crash course in covert skills. He performed the job exceptionally well and continued to operate as an agent, often in clandestine assignments.”

“You mean a spy?”

“Yes. The last operation he was on was deep undercover, and it took extensive preparation to set him up with a background that fit our needs. We’re investigating a cartel member, Hernando Restrepo, in Colombia, who wanted to diversify his operation because drug trade volume had dropped. He decided that cybercrime was the wave of the future. He put out word on the dark web seeking an IT expert. Jason was the perfect candidate. He contacted Restrepo and joined the cartel.”

“As he became more deeply involved in the operation, he noticed that much of the drug traffic was routed through Northern California, and that whenever federal drug crimes were committed, many of those cases were dismissed or pled out with no time served. He became suspicious, dug deeper, and a name surfaced. That name is why we asked for Clay’s assignment to the San Francisco office.”

The hair on the back of my neck bristled as realization crept in. “Charles Winters.”

Clay nodded. “Yes, Jason traced contacts between Winters and Restrepo and followed the money trail. Winters is growing quite wealthy from this arrangement.”

“I don’t understand.” I shrugged. “How did he cover this up internally? I never worked on a case he intervened in.”

“Exactly, Dan. I’ve been there for almost two months, and I think he was either assigning or moving cases to incompetent prosecutors, or he is paying them off. We are investigating three likely candidates, but because this is an ongoing operation, we need to keep it under wraps. I was very cryptic about my role when we met at the Dauphin, but I needed to maintain cover until we had more information.”

I had picked up a sandwich section, then dropped it. “Are you telling me that Winters might have been involved in Jason’s…” I couldn’t finish the sentence. Silence met my question as Roger and Clay exchanged glances. Roger answered.

“Jason became worried about you being in the office with Winters. Let me say this now. No one, absolutely no one, suspects you of any involvement. But unexpectedly, Winters came to Restrepo’s villa, and Restrepo introduced Jason to him. Jason convinced Restrepo that he needed to go to a company in Silicon Valley, where he had a buddy who would set him up with components for the super server he was building, but only accepted cash. Believing Jason could do no wrong, Restrepo approved and gave him access to all the cash he would need.”

I gazed at the rain pelting the window, speaking without addressing anyone. “Jason came to protect me.” I turned to Rodger. “What happened to my brother?”

Clay’s voice dropped as he answered me. “Do you have a photo of Jason in your office?”

“No.” But I realized he meant whether anyone had seen a photo of him. “Oh… When I got the call from Mom that Jason was coming home, Sandy Adams and I were working on motion briefs. I hadn’t seen him in nearly two years, and she noticed how happy I was. Sandy asked if I had a picture of him, and I did, on my phone. I pulled up the photo just as Winters walked up behind me.” I paused as it sank in. “I led him to my brother.”

“Did he ask you questions about Jason?”

“Yes. How long was he in town? He bet my parents were happy he was home. That kind of thing.”

‘When was this?”

“Two days before he disappeared.” As I spoke those words, my muscles twitched with anger as it welled up inside me.

Clay must have noticed. “Dan, please stay calm. We have some news.”

“What news? That the man I work for may have had my brother killed?”

Roger spoke. “We have no proof yet, but we think Jason may still be alive.”

His words left me speechless. I stared at him and finally managed to repeat his words. “Jason may be alive?”

“Yes. We also looked for Jason after he disappeared, but we had no luck. We spoke with the driver, Marvin Briscoe, who found Jason’s car abandoned. He was behind Jason, but not that close. As he approached the bridge, a car pulled out in front of him from a side road and stopped. He stopped to help the young female driver. She said her car had been acting up and that she was heading to an auto shop. She also said her father was right behind her. She asked if he would help push her car onto the shoulder. He did, then waited until her father arrived, less than a minute later. He continued onto the bridge and found Jason’s car abandoned.”

“How does that prove Jason is alive?”

“We pulled satellite imagery of the area, and it’s telling. The car that intercepted Briscoe parked alongside the ‘father’s’ car on the side road, while another car parked about a half mile from the bridge. We think that car was a lookout, directing the other cars to keep traffic from following Jason onto the bridge. Two cars had blocked Jason’s car on the bridge, and another car had parked along the road leading off the bridge. The two cars on the bridge took the longer road off the peninsula. We followed them until they were out of the satellite’s range.”

“What are you doing to find him?”

“Everything we can.”

“Something I don’t understand, Roger. How did the file with your name and Jason’s end up in a box of cold case files?”

“An excellent question, and one we would like to know. The pages in that file were copies of a few pages from the original file, which remains here. We suspect a mole, someone on Restrepo’s payroll. That would explain some of the obstacles we’ve encountered in our investigation of his cartel. Believe me, we are trying to identify who copied the documents. As for how it ended up in the box in your office…” Roger nodded toward Clay, who continued.

“We can rule out Winter planting it in the box. I don’t think the man is that foolish. The only conclusion is that someone deliberately placed it in the box to be found.”

I took a deep breath, trying to process what I had learned. I wanted to believe my brother was alive, but I was pragmatic. If Restrepo discovered Jason was CIA, he would likely have executed him. I couldn’t allow myself to believe he was alive, yet I clung to a tiny glimmer of hope. I had questions, and it was time to get answers.

“Gentlemen, you brought me here for a reason. I don’t think it was to enlighten me about Restrepo or to tell me you believe my brother is alive. I’d like to know what you want from me.”

The two men exchanged resigned looks. Roger bit his lower lip. “You are perceptive, but I wouldn’t expect less from Jason’s brother. Yes, there is something we need from you. We need you to find out who placed the file there for you to find. That person must know about Winters’ involvement with Restrepo and could help us build a stronger case against him.”

“I’m not my brother. I don’t know if I can be a spy.”

Roger chuckled. “I have a feeling you’re a better spy than you think. We don’t want you to take any chances, so be very careful around Winters. He may be wary of you because he doesn’t know what you know.”

Roger walked me through a crash course on Restrepo’s cartel and on what they knew about the cybercrime he was interested in. After he left, Clay asked me to review the personnel files of all employees in the San Francisco office, saying it would help me identify the person we were looking for.

Looking through my colleagues’ personal data, background checks, and financial records disturbed me. I felt uncomfortable in my own skin, as the role of a voyeur was never an aspiration. The good news was that there was no indication anyone in the office was receiving large sums of unaccounted-for money.

Around seven p.m., Clay said he had to get home to his family. I must have looked quizzical, because he chuckled. “My time in San Francisco isn’t permanent. My wife and kids are here in DC. I didn’t tell anyone because it wasn’t pertinent to my assignment there.” He rose. “I’ll drive you back to the hotel. Remember, all expenses are paid, so have a nice dinner at the hotel.”

“Why the Hay-Adams? That place is pricey.”

Clay grinned. “The CIA keeps rooms there.”

“Nice budget.”

“They can afford it. The CIA has more money than the Vatican.”

~~~~

I tossed the last file from the final box onto the conference table and leaned back in the soft leather chair. We uncovered twenty-six cases that required immediate review, seven of which dated to the past two years. Clay thinks the seven cases are ones Winters may have interfered with, and he is waiting to see the US Attorney’s response when we present them to him.

Nearly a month has passed since I was in DC, and I spent that time trying to find out who planted the file. I am not the kind of guy who goes with the crowd after work for a drink. However, not socializing after work kept me from getting to know my colleagues well, so I decided to join in.

Other than missing a few evenings at the gym, I didn’t learn much, but I did find out that some interesting people were working in the office. All employees’ financial dealings continued to be monitored, and thankfully, there was no change. If money wasn’t the motivation, then something else was, leaving revenge or ethics and morals as the reason.

I decided to focus on the people closest to Winters. When he transferred from the Sacramento office to San Francisco, he brought his executive assistant, Carol Lombardy; an administrative assistant, Sharon Cline; and a law clerk, Parker Watson, who is now an attorney on staff.

I had a private passcode to access employee data, and I reviewed what was on file for each employee. Again, no signs of unusual banking transactions, large purchases, or fancy trips, which was puzzling. Maybe I was following the wrong instincts, but I was running out of options. Someone had planted that file, and I had to find out who.

Friday night, I was invited to a colleague’s birthday party and decided to go, mainly because it was at my favorite Italian restaurant in San Francisco. I walked into Fior D’ Italia, my stomach yearning for the Lasagne Bolognese Al Forno. The party was in a private room, and though there were a few empty seats, I sat next to Sharon Cline, Winters’ administrative assistant. Perhaps I could learn something from her. About halfway through the meal, I realized I might have sent the wrong signal by sitting next to her. Sharon was known for stalking unmarried attorneys.

It was during dessert that she confirmed my suspicion. Sharon slid her hand onto my thigh. I fought not to overreact, but I smiled and lied. “A nice idea, Sharon, but I’m involved with someone.”

She sighed, gave me a sideways glance, and took a sip of wine. “Worth a try. I had a feeling you were taken. The hot ones always are.”

I felt uncomfortable being called hot, but I could live with it. “How long have you been working with Winters?”

“I started in Sacramento about three months before he was appointed US Attorney for this district. Carol was a friend of my mom’s and got me the job. I asked to come along, and I got to. Love it here.”

“Good. You do a great job.”

“Thanks.”

The party was winding down, and as we got up to leave, Sharon suggested we go for a drink. “Friends only. I’m not ready to go home yet.”

“A drink it is.”

We decided to go for the best and took an Uber to Top of the Mark, San Francisco’s most iconic bar. Sharon grinned as we sat at a window table. The Transamerica Pyramid, lit against the dark sky, loomed in the view. We ordered a drink and watched wispy fog swirl around the tall monuments to commerce.

“The fog is so beautiful.” Sharon turned toward me, her face paling. “Oh, I’m sorry. I forgot. Carol told me your brother disappeared in the fog on a bridge. I shouldn’t…”

“It’s all right. The fog up here is amazing, one of the things I love about this bar.”

She sipped the Cosmo she ordered, and I noticed her hands shake.

“Are you okay?”

“I forgot you’re a lawyer for a second. Perceptive is a lawyer’s middle name.”

“We’ve been called that, among other things. I don’t mean to pry, but you seem on edge.”

“I shouldn’t talk out of school. She ran her fingers through her hair. “But something’s wrong.”

I didn’t say anything. She needed to tell me in her own way.

“Carol has always been like a mother to me. I don’t think she always liked my behavior, but she has always been there for me. Over the past several months, something has changed.”

“Something personal?”

“No, I don’t think so. Everything seems fine there, but she has distanced herself from me at the office. Not as friendly, and her relationship with Chuck has changed. They were so tight they could finish each other’s sentences.” She scoffed. “The proverbial work wife, but that has changed. And then Chuck changed.”

“How?”

“You know, he got divorced a couple of years ago. Carol took it hard. She and Madeline were close, and after that, things changed. Chuck changed, too. He became more arrogant and less tolerant. Well, I was at the 49 Club a few weeks ago. It’s a trendy bar known for its back room, where private members are said to have access to drugs and, well, anything else they want. We only went because of the band and stayed for one set, but while I was there, Chuck and his Colombian paramour showed up and went into the private room. That’s not where the Chuck I used to know would go.”

A realization swept over me. The file had to come from Carol, but why? I imagined she knew something, and that something might involve Jason. “What do you think is wrong?”

Her shoulders slumped. “There’s a rift between them, but I don’t think Chuck realizes it. He’s so wrapped up in his own life that he’s not paying attention. To be honest, I don’t know.”

We finished our drinks, and Sharon decided to stay overnight in the city with a friend. I ordered an Uber for her and another for me back to the office to get my car. On the drive home, I decided it was time to talk to Carol.

~~~

I found Carol’s address in the personnel files and decided to show up without calling first. I needed the element of surprise. Her house was a pale blue Victorian in the Noe Valley community.

It was nine a.m., a reasonable hour, and I didn’t want to wait. I pressed the doorbell. Carol opened the door, her eyes widened, and she smiled, though her rigid jaw betrayed her nervousness.

“I was expecting you. Please come in.”

She led me down the hall to a bright, spacious kitchen and family room. She introduced her husband, Gavin, who had a plate of pancakes in front of him. He shook my hand and nodded at Carol. “Get this man a plate of pancakes.”

I started to protest, but the pancakes and bacon smelled too good. Carol fixed a plate for me, and Gavin handed me a cup of coffee. Carol sat across from me.

“I know why you’re here, and yes, I put the file in the cold case boxes.” She glanced at her husband. “Gavin knows everything. In fact, he convinced me I had to do something.”

I took a bite of the pancakes to keep my hands busy and to hide my nervousness.

“These pancakes are great.” I set my fork down. “Carol, what do you know about my brother?”

“Nothing more than what I saw in the file.” She exhaled. “Best to start at the beginning. Sharon and I transferred here with Chuck when he was named U.S. Attorney. The first three years were like those we had working with him in Sacramento. He cared about his family and his job. He was fair and honest, and I was proud to work for him. Then, two years ago, he went to Colombia on a Department of Justice trip to meet with Colombian prosecutors. He came back a different man.”

“How was he different?”

“Impatient, irritable, and no more small talk with people in the office. What had been an empathetic man became distant and uncaring. Within two months of his trip, he shocked everyone by divorcing Madeline. I became friends with Madeline, and I have never seen anyone so devastated. Her daughter came and took her to Tampa. She won’t talk to me now because I kept working for Chuck.”

“What do you think changed him?”

“That woman, that haughty woman who never speaks to anyone, is a member of a wealthy family in Colombia. Money doesn’t buy class.”

Gavin pressed her. “Tell Dan why you became suspicious of Chuck.”

“Oh, yes… Chuck, as you know, was usually hands-on only when the case was high profile or very serious. But he started getting involved in smaller cases, most of which were pled out almost immediately. I started seeing more of his directing cases against drug dealers on lower federal charges, including lesser money laundering charges such as structuring, illegal money transmission, and tax evasion involving illicit funds. I started looking closer. I found three different attorneys, not all in our office but in other regional offices, who were reducing charges and, in some cases, outright dismissing the cases. Dan, I know the law after all this time, twenty-eight years as a legal assistant. These were solid cases.”

“Do you think he was doing this at someone’s request?”

“I didn’t want to think so, but when he started dressing in more expensive clothes and is now wearing a platinum Rolex watch, I have to believe he’s getting money from somewhere.”

“When did you find the file containing my brother’s name?”

“About two weeks before the cold case unit began working, Chuck had attended a meeting with local law enforcement and left an important folder behind. He couldn’t remember which drawer he’d put it in. I rummaged through his desk and found an unlabeled file. I thought it might be the file I was looking for—it wasn’t. I couldn’t fathom why he had any information about your brother. My gut told me something was very wrong. I decided to copy the documents and put the original file back in his desk. I brought the file home and talked it over with Gavin. Given the changes in his demeanor, the cases he was interfering with, and now a file with your missing brother’s name, we knew I should do something. When the cold case unit started, I sneaked in early one morning before anyone else arrived and placed the file in the box, hoping you would find it.”

I took a sip of coffee, giving myself time to gather my thoughts. I couldn’t tell her what I knew, but I needed to ask how far she was willing to go to help us.

“Carol, what’s been happening hasn’t gone unnoticed. We need your help. Are you willing to speak with the FBI about what you know?”

She glanced at her husband, then at me. “Yes, I knew from the moment he divorced Madeline that he was involved in illegal activity. I recorded all the cases I reviewed. I have proof, at least, that he was directing those cases.”

“I know it isn’t easy being at work with this looming. Are you comfortable keeping things as they are until it’s resolved?”

“I have so far. I can do it.”

~~~

The next few days were a total grind for me. Focusing was difficult as my mind kept drifting to worries about Jason and whether he was alive. Not knowing and keeping it from my parents and Geri was taking a toll. Sleep was elusive, and my patience was wearing thin.

I had passed along everything I had learned from Carol to Clay, who, in turn, contacted the FBI at Roger’s direction. Carol and I exchanged pleasantries as we passed, but it was best not to seem to be having a conversation. I had no idea whether the FBI had questioned her. I sensed that when the FBI was ready to swoop in and arrest Winters, I would be as surprised as anyone.

Three weeks later, I was blindsided again. Around four p.m. on Friday, Clay texted me. Meet me at the Dauphin at six. I drew such a deep breath that jagged pain shot through my chest. He had to have information about Jason. I prayed it would be good, but I feared it would not be.

The minutes crept by like Sandberg’s cat’s-paw fog. When I was finally on my way, I fought back the bile rising in my throat. If I found out Jason was dead, it would feel like losing him all over again.

Clay was already there, along with a man I didn’t know. “Dan, this is Ben Smith. Let’s just say he works for the government.”

“Dan, good to meet you.”

I was impatient. “What’s going on?”

Clay gestured toward a chair. “Sit. I ordered a drink for you.”

I sat, afraid to pick up the drink because my hands were trembling. “Clay, just tell me.”

I hadn’t noticed the file lying on the table. Ben picked it up, removed a photo, then handed it to me. “Do you recognize this man?”

Adrenaline flooded my body. My focus, which had been lax, sharpened. My breathing grew ragged, and my heart pounded. “This is Jason.” I swallowed. “When was this taken?”

“Two days ago.”

I downed the bourbon in front of me, pushed back tears, and stayed as stoic as I could. Jason was gaunt, his head shaved, and pale. My heart was bursting with joy and broken at the same time. “Where is he?”

Ben answered. “Restrepo has a compound called Casa Rafela, about 10 miles north of Cartagena. It’s well protected when Restrepo is there, but he is currently at his villa in Marbella, Spain. There are only a few guards at the compound at the moment.”

I caught his gaze. “Are you telling me you plan to rescue him?”

Clay intervened. “Let’s not get ahead of ourselves. Let them gather the intel they need, then decide whether it’s safe to go in. The last thing we want is for him to get hurt now.”

“Dan, at least we know your brother is alive. I promise you we will get him out, but we need more intel. We decided to tell you so you could identify him, but it would be best if you didn’t tell anyone he’s alive yet.”

From their intense expressions, I had to believe these men were telling the truth. Not telling my parents and Geri was a heavy burden, but one I had to carry for now.

~~~

Sleep proved as elusive as it had been for weeks. Restless, I gave up at three a.m. and headed to the living room for a drink. I opened the balcony doors and plopped into a lounge chair, watching the city lights stretch toward the bay. The smooth bourbon did little to soothe me. My brother was alive, and I couldn’t help him. I needed to help him.

I closed my eyes, focusing on the sirens, so common in the city, trying to clear my mind, but with no luck. I had to do something. I sat up. I could do something. I could go to Cartagena.

I booked a flight for eleven p.m. Saturday night, then messaged the office to say I had an emergency and would return in a few days. Not a real issue, since I wasn’t actively working on current cases. I went to bed, but the image of Jason, so thin and pale, burned into my brain, making sleep elusive.

On Saturday, I ran a few quick errands to the bank for cash, bought a new carry-on, and headed home to pack. About halfway through, I realized I only needed a whip and Indiana Jones’ hat. I chuckled. I wasn’t a spy or an adventurer. I wasn’t sure what I was thinking, but I had to get to my brother. I debated seeing my parents before I left, but I knew I had to. Mom insisted I stay for dinner. Pizza was the girls’ choice, so Dad and I drove to pick up the order.

On the way back, he asked the question I didn’t want to answer. “You seem preoccupied. What’s going on? Is it about going back to D.C. again?”

“No, just a lot of work. We were surprised to find so many cases that had not been properly investigated.”

“What kind of cases? All kinds?”

“A bit, but a lot of drug cases. It seemed to be a pattern.” I might as well foreshadow what was coming. That seemed to satisfy him, and we talked about his latest pickleball match for the rest of the way home.

As I left for the airport, Geri walked with me to the car. “I get the feeling something is going on that you don’t want to tell us.” She hugged me. “Whatever you’re doing, I’m with you.”

She always knows.

~~~

A cross-country flight, customs at an overcrowded Miami airport, and another flight brought me to Cartagena at midday. I cashed in some frequent flier miles and reserved a room at the Hilton on the beach. A shower, some food, and a few hours’ sleep helped, and I headed downstairs to rent a car and have dinner. I sat by the water, wondering how foolish I was to think I could free Jason. I hadn’t thought about how to get him out of the country. I’d have to take him to the US Embassy.

I might be on a fool’s errand, but I wanted my brother home.

~~~

Thank goodness for GPS. My Spanish was rudimentary, and all I could do was follow the little blue line to my destination. I checked Street View, which offered a bit of information, but not much. Restrepo’s villa sat at the end of a long, steep drive. I drove past, then turned around, looking for a place to park off-road and hike to the compound.

I found a worn path on the south side of the compound. About halfway up the steep hill, I was grateful for my gym membership. By the time I reached the compound wall, I was winded, more than I expected to be. I also felt my rage building.

When I was a child, I had trouble keeping my temper. I let small things escalate and lose control. Jason taught me how to manage that urge and not give in to anger. I still fight to squash those feelings, but I refuse to give in to anger. That wouldn’t help Jason.

I stayed close to the wall, trying to avoid any cameras. I couldn’t see any from the path, but that didn’t mean they weren’t there. I walked along a long stretch of concrete wall before I found a gate. It was made of rough-hewn planks, and I could see through the gaps. I could make out a large structure a short distance away, though I had no idea what it was. I shifted left for a better angle when, out of nowhere, a hand roughly covered my mouth, and my right arm was pinned behind my back.

A deep voice whispered in my ear. “Clark, don’t panic. Ben sent us. I’m going to cover your mouth. Don’t make a sound, or they’ll hear us.”

Another man stood behind him, and together they hustled me toward a clump of trees and scrub brush. Then they let me go.

My heart pounded in my chest. “Who are you?”

“I’m Jackson, and this is Roman.”

Jackson looked like a high school baseball coach, but I knew looks could be deceiving. Roman had to have been an offensive lineman in a past life. “How did you know I was here?”

“Clay Furman asked Ben to keep an eye on your movements. We knew when you bought a plane ticket.”

“You were spying on me?”

Jackson laughed. “Yeah, that’s our job.”

“Is my brother in there?”

“Yes. We caught sight of him this morning. They let him outside for a few minutes each morning and afternoon. We are here to get him out. Other operatives surround the compound. With only four guards here, this is our best chance.”

“I’m coming with you.”

“No, you’re not. You wait here.” Jackson clicked on the radio in his tactical vest. “Report.”

One by one, low voices floated through the air, reporting they were ready. My senses heightened, and each breath I took roared in my ears. My brother was alive and inside that compound. They weren’t keeping me out.

Roman approached the gate with a miniature camera mounted on a flexible tube. He looked inside the compound and gave Jackson a thumbs-up. Jackson whispered “Go” into his mic, and Roman threw a grappling hook with a rope attached over the wall, then scurried up. He dropped to the other side, pulled the gate’s bolt, and swung it open. Jackson rushed in, his automatic weapon pointed skyward. I ran in behind him.

It took him a minute to realize I was there. He rolled his eyes, then motioned for me to follow. “Listen, you stick close to me, and if shooting starts, drop to the ground.”

I nodded. My fight-or-flight instinct was teetering toward flight, but I couldn’t. I had to go.

A muffled shot rang out from across the compound as one of Restrepo’s guards ran out of a door in front of us. Roman took him down with a rifle butt to the face, then quickly zip-tied his hands and feet. He ducked into the building, looked around, and called out clear. Jackson went inside, and I followed.

His radio crackled. “Jack, two guards down.”

“Good. One down here.”

My voice cracked as I spoke. “Do you know where he is?”

“Intel says the basement. The entrance is in the next building.” He radioed the others. “Keep watch. We’re going for the target.”

The next building had an internet receiver mounted on the roof, and heavy-duty power lines disappeared into it. Roman knocked the padlock off the door with his rifle, and we entered. The room was lined with computer monitors, and as I glanced around, my gaze fell on a screen that stopped my heart. A security camera. My brother was on the screen. I fought back sobs. Time for that later.

He wasn’t alone. A guard stood in the room. Roman turned to Jackson. “You’re up, Señor.”

Jackson opened a door to a staircase and descended out of sight, Roman following. I heard him knock on a door, then speak in Spanish. My high school Spanish was failing me, but I think he said something about food. I checked the security monitor and saw the guard walking out of camera range. A door creaked, someone shouted, then silence. I held my breath until Roman’s voice made me gasp.

“Get down here, Clark.”

I wasted no time. As I reached the door, I saw Jason, thin and pale, but he was smiling. When he saw me, he grinned. “Well, little brother, didn’t expect to see you here.” I couldn’t speak. I rushed to him and hugged him as hard as I could without hurting him. He pulled away first. “I have a feeling this is going to be an interesting story.”

He turned to Jackson. “Good to see you, man.”

“You, too, but we need to go.”

“Not yet.” Jason sat in front of a large monitor. “I back up this data continually. Let me finish this last file.” A minute later, he unplugged two external hard drives and held them up. “Everything you will ever want to know about Restrepo and his cartel. I also planted a virus in the system. I need to activate it.” He entered a code, and the screen began to distort. He turned toward Jackson. “Now we can go.”

Roman picked up the guard while Jackson took the hard drives from Jason. We headed for the gate we had entered through. The other guards had been taken outside the gate and down the hill. Roman dropped the guard he was carrying next to the others.

Jason laughed at the barely conscious guards, who had been carried to safety. “Shouldn’t have bothered with the virus?”

“No. The Colombian Air Force is going to take care of the computers.”

Jason stumbled, and I grabbed him around the waist. “Let’s go home.”

~~~

The next seventy-two hours were a blur. We were flown to Washington on a private jet, where Jason underwent a full medical exam, received treatment for minor issues, and began his debrief. Roger allowed me to contact my parents and Geri via Zoom to tell them Jason was alive. I am not sure who cried harder. Roger arranged for them to fly to DC to be with him.

It was quite the reunion, and I was reluctant to leave, but I wasn’t about to miss what came next.

I walked into the U.S. Attorney’s office on Thursday morning, a bit on edge, but I tried not to show it. I was pouring coffee in the break room when Carol walked in. From the resigned look in her eyes, I was certain she expected what was coming. Neither of us knew when.

The FBI arrived at ten a.m. that morning and arrested Charles Winters on drug trafficking, bribery, honest services fraud, conspiracy, obstruction of justice, and other related charges. Winters paled and refused to make eye contact with anyone in the office. At the same time, one attorney in our office and two others in field offices were arrested.

The shock lingered for days. An acting U.S. Attorney arrived from Washington and began restoring order in the office. Clay agreed to stay to continue locating cases that had been closed due to Winters’ intervention. When he returned from D.C., he told me that the Colombian woman Winters was involved with was a cousin of Restrepo’s, assigned to keep an eye on him until he became a liability. I asked about the mole at Langley. Clay said the mole had been caught and that was all he knew.

Jason came home for an extended visit, but the story was that the cartel had kidnapped him for his IT skills. He planned to return to his ‘law firm’ after he recovered.

Two months later, I was driving across the bridge as fog rolled in, and the heaviness in my heart had lifted. I was on my way to Friday night pizza and a movie with my family. What more could I ask for? I knew. I had felt restless since walking into CIA headquarters.

My phone buzzed, and my heart skipped at the caller ID. Langley. I pressed the green button.

“Roger, I thought you’d never call.”

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Tanja Cillia: The Snowman

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The Snowman

Tanja Cillia

He appeared on a night when the snow finally got it right.

Not the thin, apologetic flakes that vanish on contact, not the dry powder that squeaks beneath boots and refuses to cling to itself… but the heavy, breathing kind. Four inches at least. Wet. Willing. The sort of snow experts talk about with authority, the sort that knows how to hold a shape.

No one saw him being made.

One evening the park was empty except for the trees, their branches stitched with frost, and the amber streetlights humming softly to themselves. The next morning, there he was. A snowman standing just off the path, slightly crooked, twig arms spread as if he’d been interrupted mid-sentence. Coal buttons. Carrot nose. A round head tilted in thought. He looked less like a decoration and more like a decision.

People stopped.

They took pictures. They circled him, looking for footprints, for evidence of hands, gloves, a trail of intention. There was nothing. The snow around him was smooth, untouched, as though he had risen straight out of the ground.

“Who made you?” someone asked, half-joking, half-uneasy.

“I did,” the snowman said pleasantly.

Phones dropped. Someone laughed too loudly. Another person swore.

“I mean,” the snowman added, “the snow did most of the work.”

He could hear them, he explained. Sound travelled strangely through snow… muted but intimate, like a secret pressed into the ear of the world. He had been listening long before anyone noticed him. Listening to boots crunch, to distant traffic, to the soft complaints of winter.

Children approached first. They always did. They asked him questions that mattered.

“Do you melt?”

“Yes.”

“Are you cold?”

“No.”

“Do you know Santa?”

“I know of him,” the snowman said. “We move in similar seasons.”

Adults came closer once the fear loosened its grip. Someone whispered that there had to be a speaker inside him. A prank. An art installation. A radio buried in his belly.

“That would explain it,” a man said, relieved.

“Would it?” the snowman replied.

They argued quietly, as if he couldn’t hear. Someone tapped his side. Another knocked harder, listening for the hollow truth of machinery. The snowman stayed still, smiling with the patience of something that had nowhere else to be.

To pass the time, he told jokes.

“What do you get when you cross a vampire and a snowman?” he asked.

A pause.

“Frostbite.”

Groans. Laughter. Someone clapped despite themselves.

“What type of candle burns longer?” he continued. “None, they all burn shorter!”

By then, a small crowd had gathered. The air felt charged, brittle with disbelief. He went on.

“What do you get if Santa comes down your chimney when the fire is ablaze? Crisp Kringle.”

A woman shook her head, smiling despite herself.

“What is the difference between the Christmas alphabet and the ordinary alphabet?” the snowman asked, eyes bright. “The Christmas alphabet has No L (Noel).”

The jokes were bad. That was the point. They were comforting in their predictability, like traditions that survive not because they’re good, but because they’re familiar.

Still, the idea of a talking snowman made people restless.

“If there’s a radio,” someone said, “we’ll find it.”

They pushed.

Snow gives way easily when you don’t want it to stay. The snowman fell apart without protest; head rolling gently to one side, body collapsing into itself, arms dropping like discarded thoughts. Coal buttons disappeared into the white.

They dug. They searched. Gloves scraped through slush and silence.

There was nothing.

No wires. No speaker. No explanation waiting at the bottom. As the last shape of him softened, his voice came quieter now, closer to the ground.

“I didn’t have a radio inside me, and now you know it.”

By morning, the park looked ordinary again. Just snow. Just trees. Just the faint sense that something had listened, and spoken, was made to leave, and had chosen not to return.

The experts would say the conditions had changed.

But some people swore they still heard a whoosh in the air when the snow was right.

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 Calliope Njo: To Bridge the Gap

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To Bridge the Gap

 Calliope Njo

Why was it, every time I took this journey, it was foggy outside? Again, crossing the Chain Bridge. It was a necessary journey I had to make. Somewhere out there, either God or a high official, defined the word partner. I had to live up to that definition. This trip brought out memories of what started it all.

If I attended the academy, then it was possible I could find a place there. I was all for doing that. There was always a place to start and a chance to work up the ladder. Going to the academy wouldn’t guarantee that, but it offered a way to get more information than what I had before.

After ninety days, I graduated. Not with perfect scores, but I made it. The way this place worked was this. It wasn’t a huge country wide federal agency. We had four offices in total, with our goal being to investigate or offer assistance to whomever needed it. Hence the name The Office of Special Investigations.

I started off being a grade level one. That rank was the very bottom. Elsewhere it might mean something else, but here, it was the very bottom. The work was paperwork. If it had to do with paperwork, chances were, we had it somewhere. So what? It’s an office. What did you expect? I couldn’t remember how many people asked me that question. It was a lot.

Nathanael got me into this line of work. We sort of ran into each other at the train station when I first moved to Virginia, and he needed someone to play Mrs. Nathanael Charlamagne. I was it.

He was taller than I was with sunny-blonde hair, and a sort of summer blue eyes. His hair reached his shoulders, and it never looked like he shaved any. Of course there was the potbelly.

I stood up to his shoulders with brown hair and brown eyes. While both of us had the same skin color, we didn’t look like we matched any. I always imagined a married couple matching. Well, it had to be done so I tried to make the best of it.

When that was all said and done, he told me there was always a need for good people.

I took that challenge. I graduated. It was policy that everybody had a partner. Good, bad, or indifferent. I thought mine would be Nathanael. God, was I wrong. Instead I got somebody named Obade Carrow. Tall, bald, and black with a deep voice.

It’s not a problem if someone was a different race than I was. We lived in America. There was going to be a lot of different people. The only thing I was happy about was the fact he spoke. Everything else… well… maybe I better explain which might help tell why I hated that bridge. At least one of the reasons.

I cooked for him: breakfast, midday meal, and the last meal of the day. I had to get everything from across the bridge and that was not easy traffic. Of course, he learned the art of sleeping with his eyes open. One never knew if he was indeed awake. That left me to do the work.

As a grade level one, I couldn’t do the investigation. That would’ve been up to Obade, but since he slept all day and night, I had to. The consequences of not doing it would’ve been three days spent at home without pay. Well hey, that meant a vacation, and since I’m at such a low level, I couldn’t get into trouble. No. During those days, it was expected that a proper apology letter would be written by both agents, and then presented to the board. If they didn’t like it, it had to be rewritten until they did like it.

What did all of this mean? What did all of this lead up to? How Nathanael and I got together and that tragic time in our life.

He had Avery as his partner at the time. I remembered one conversation they had while I walked a few steps behind them. I remembered it word for word even though I had no idea what that conversation was about. I didn’t know if it happened or they were rehashing old memories.

“Morning was a whole mess,” Avery said. “Housing tried to pull a Bravo‑level sweep again. Same nonsense as last quarter.”

 “Bravo?,” Nathanael said. “That’s generous. Looked more like a Delta‑grade scramble. Nobody had their ducks in formation.”

“Figures,” Avery said. “Did you ever get that 1348 sorted?”

“Eventually,” Nathanael said. “Had to chase down a missing signature — classic ghost‑trail maneuver. Whoever filed it must’ve been asleep at zero‑six.”

On that conversation went. It spanned the whole way from the entry door and on down the hallway.

 One day, I was in the Agents’ Information Area and they walked in. They laughed and carried on with a conversation I couldn’t even guess. I shrugged my shoulders and went on to the Boardroom to update the Board of Directors about the latest file they gave me. OK. I didn’t do the updating. Obade did that.

Then that day happened. Avery pushed Nathanael into the supervisor’s office. I never knew what an evil smile looked like until I saw Nathanel’s as he closed the blinds. He looked right at me as he did that. I didn’t know what they were talking about, but between the thuds and the raised voices it had to be something big.

Avery stormed out of the office with tears in her eyes. We were never friends to begin with so it didn’t matter.

What mattered was Nathanael. He looked at me as he snapped his fingers one at a time with a single clap in the end. I learned later it was a habit he picked up when he got angry.

Of all the people in my life, the one person I regretted ever meeting was my ex-husband Glenn King. He had a small stash worth about three-quarters of a million dollars in the Cayman Islands.

He offered me the Cayman account to stay with him. He needed help taking care of his so-called inventory. I couldn’t do it. Those innocent bundles. I never had a quiet night’s sleep. I could never get passed the sound of pain as they expressed how they felt.

He was the reason I was nicknamed cyborg woman. If it wasn’t for the help the Domestic Violence Safety Train gave me, I wouldn’t be up and around at all. I would still be lying down somewhere. Not being able to talk, see, hear, or move at all. Wishing I was dead.

I kept tabs on Glenn. I knew where he was and what he was doing. If Nathanael wanted to go down with glory, I had the means to do that.

Oh no, he never said it. How could I tell? It was in the number of cases he turned down. He never told me why, only that it wasn’t in the best interest of the office that the case be solved by any of the agents. That gave me an idea.

I put together all of the information I had on Glenn, put it in a folder, marked it as official, and left it on Nathanael’s desk. That information included the Cayman account number, and that mysterious string of numbers with Luxembourg printed on it. I thought if he had that, he might be able to take down the most evil man in existance.

I remembered walking into his office as he opened the folder. The next thing I knew he was jumping up and down as if he was so excited, and he didn’t know how to expell all of that energy.

I made it into the boardroom to find out if there would be anything else. There was nothing else, because Obade died during the night of a heart attack. I put it in the back of my mind to look into later.

I walked into Nathanael’s office right on time. That was my assignment for the day. After a minute, I went to the coffee maker to make the coffee. Why they didn’t have a Keurig I never asked. About the same time I turned it on, Nathanel came in.

“OK. Look Rookie. I just got a big case. OK? I don’t need no ground level friggin’ idiots messing things up. What I need is a loft that looks modern and expensive. I need a car to fit. A wardrobe that would impress the friggin’ Mr. President. Let me know when you got those. You can get those right? Of course you can. Even a friggin’ idiot can do it.”

I didn’t say anything. I didn’t need to. I had everything he wanted so all I had to do was get it.

When I got home, I found the keys to that condo I had. I was going to sell it. I didn’t need it or want it anymore. I couldn’t even remember why I bought it. To me it looked like a warehouse with big windows. Tall windows with white walls and concrete flooring. The industrial look didn’t suit me.

I stored something else in a warehouse. I kept the great one covered to keep the dust off. I only drove it enough to keep it alive. There was that abandoned racetrack I could sneak onto, as long as I didn’t make a scene. Hard to do with a Koenigsegg CCXR Trevita, but I managed. Funny thing is, I won it in a poker game. The guy who lost it was about to be a dad. I still think about that sometimes.

Keys to the condo, the fob for the car, and the last thing — that was in the closet. I dated someone, once upon a time. Other than Glenn. They were about the same size, so it should’ve fit. In case it didn’t, I stuffed some money in an envelope and buried it in the suitcase with the clothes. I put the keys in my purse and went to bed hoping everything would be all right, though I already knew better.

I had to meet with the director of my level the next morning, so I tossed the keys in the top drawer and locked it. Put the suitcase behind his chair. I wasn’t hiding it; it was somewhere to put it. I left the address and the pictures of the condo and the car in the drawer too. Then I sent him a text: I got everything you needed. Good luck.

The board kept me busy with this file and that file getting every piece of nitty gritty they could find. I was never sure what their intention was, only that they were keeping me busy without cause.

I kept watch over Nathanael. I saw him change over time. Gone was the pot belly and messy hairstyle. In their place was a man with an athletic build, and short slicked-back hair. It made him look like a supermodel. He even grew a mustache and beard. Nothing hillbilly style, but taken care of so he looked clean and neat.

Then that day came. It was a day out of hell. Soldiers and master computers programmed to kill. Minirobots and RMC fighter jets armed with bullets and bombs. They weren’t toys. They were meant to kill.

A moment I would never forget. I somehow ended up in a hole with Nathanael next to me. I was never sure what happened to him, but whatever it was, scrambled his brain. Eyes wide open, looking everywhere around him, white knuckles, and his shaking legs. The words that came out of his mouth were too mumbled to understand. I didn’t have panic attacks so I couldn’t say that’s what happened. I could only hope at that point he would get better.

When everything finished, they had to shoot him with a tranquilizer to be able to get him into an ambulance. I rode along with him to County General. The receptionist had the phone in one hand, and greeted everybody with a clipboard in the other. I could swear I saw sparks fly when the printer printed.

The doctor came out, and scratched his bald head while he blew out a breath. Somewhere between all of his breaths, he mentioned that there wasn’t anybody on staff who could diagnosis Nathanael enough to give him treatment. So he was transferred ASAP to a mental clinic where they could offer a diagnosis.

The doctor gave me a card before he almost ran away. When I got back out to my car, I called the clinic. The woman on the other end, could only say he was admitted, and that maybe a proper diagnosis would be offered later that night.

According to the lady on the phone, Nathanael didn’t offer much cooperation between the screaming and the running. When he wore himself out, they were able to examine his mental status. I had to call back the following morning before I could speak to the doctor.

Perceptual manipulation was the diagnosis. Someone had distorted his sense of reality so much that he believed what he was doing was harmless. No intent, no awareness — only a manufactured belief that everything was fine.

That meant he needed serious psychological care, the kind of help the Office couldn’t — or wouldn’t — provide.

I had about a week before the paperwork caught up with him. One week to battle the Board. I spent that entire time fighting with them over medical insurance. Imagine that — insurance. Mine would cover Nathanael’s treatment. Theirs wouldn’t. All they had to do was drop him from their policy so I could put him under mine. It took a full week to get them to agree.

That’s where I was. It took two hours to cross the bridge, and get onto a dirt road that led to a mental facility. A facility for mental wellness and assistance, so read the sign.

I parked my car and locked it before I left. My purse was in my trunk so about the only thing I had on me were the keys. I signed in at the front desk and showed them my keys. The front desk clerk shook her head and put out a tray to put the keys in.

I walked down the hallway and read the white boards as I passed them. His room was at the end. Nathanael-9 AM- Dr. Skjoldbrannfjellhaugensdatter. Uhm yeah. He had Dr. S and his session should have finished since it was one o’clock.

I knocked on the door before I opened it. “Hi, Nathanael. It’s me. It’s Margaretta. Can I come in?”

He didn’t answser and I didn’t hear him walk towards me. I opened the door a little more to fit my head through. “Hi. There you are.”

He looked like a little kid with his hand by his chin half waving and the other sort of went up and down as he reached my face. The beard and mustache was still there and his hair grew a little more. “Hi. I’m Nathanael. You can come in if you want. I think you’re the first one.”

Gone was the overconfidant man who had strange conversations in the hallway. He held my cheek and rubbed it a couple times. He smiled after he did that. After the introduction, he didn’t say anything, only smiled.

We sort of stood there watching each other when a doctor stepped in. White hair, white beard and mustache, doctor’s jacket and white shirt, and those dark slacks. Every doctor I’ve ever met had that same outfit. I always thought that doctors took a class or something to get notes on the proper dress.

“Excuse me, Miss, may I have a word with you?” the doctor said.

“Sure,” I said. “I’ll meet you outside.” I watched him go. “It looks like the doctor wants to meet with me. The way the time is going right now, I’m going to leave right after that. OK? Don’t worry. I’ll be back.” I patted his cheek.

“You’re… you’re real? A grown up. Right?”

“Yup. All grown up and I promise I can drink.” Uh oh. I think I hit a nerve. It made him growl a bit. “OK. OK. I’m sorry.” I put my hand on his cheek. “Bad joke. I better go see what the doctor wants. I’ll let your grandfather know what’s going on as well.”

“All right. Thank you.” He started to stretch out his arms as if in a hug, but he put his arms down.

I went outside the room. “OK. Doc. What is it?”

“He’s stable, but he’s not progressing the way we hoped. He needs a more structured, longer-term environment. He will be moving to a Trauma Informed Residential Program. They’re calmer, quieter, and more humane than a hospital‑like facility. This won’t be a quick fix. The mind is a very complex thing, Ma’am. It will take time and nothing is ever perfect, but we can hope to achieve it. Should you have any questions, please wait until the transfer is final.”

After he turned around and walked away, I was left stunned. I heard every word he said, but I had no idea what he said. I knew with the drive back it would come to me. At that moment though, I wanted to go in, and pick up Nathanael, and throw him in my car. That wouldn’t help him at all. It could make things worse. I had to get back.

Monday morning, I got back to work. Of course, I worked in the Agent Area. Everybody could see everybody, but I had the feeling of being watched. It didn’t make sense to me, but it felt like everytime I moved somebody somewhere scrutinized that move. It felt like that all week. The work was basic paperwork. Get this file, get that file, be sure to deliver this to the director in Level Four sort of thing. I didn’t think anything about it.

It was Saturday, at last. A whole day to drive out and see Nathanael. I hoped the new facility was treating him better than the last one. At least heading that direction meant I didn’t have to cross the Chain Bridge — small mercies.

I was about to settle in for the long drive when I spotted two charcoal‑grey Toyota Corollas, identical right down to the darkened windows. Office cars. Of course. I wondered who they thought they were following today.

Maybe the Board was a little bored. Maybe they needed the field trip. Well… if they were going to tail me anyway, I could at least give them a scenic tour of D.C. Keep morale up. So I hit the highlights like the Lincoln Memorial, Washington Memorial, and of course we had to pass by the Smithsonian Museums. After making a turn to see the White House, they turned around and left. I guess they already saw it. Oh well.

I reached the facility at last. I left my purse in the trunk of my car and left my keys at the front desk after signing in. I found Nathanael’s room. On the right side, as opposed to the left in the last place, and in the middle. Nathanael Charlemagne was written on the white board.

I knocked on the door and poked my head in. “Hi, Nathanael. It’s me. It’s Margaretta.”

“Hi.” He walked to the door and pulled it open. As soon as I walked in he closed it. He wrapped his arms around me in a tight hug. Not so tight that I couldn’t breathe, but tight. “It’s been a while. What happened? Did you get lost or something?” He scrunched his eyebrows.

“Well, they don’t allow visitors when you first move in. There’s a waiting period. I’m here now. How are you doing?”

“Me? I’m OK. The doctors don’t seem too optomistic about how things are progressing. It just feels like mu head is too stuffed. Or something. They keep telling me there will be a time when all of it will be released and then the real healing will begin.” He gave me a peck on the cheek. H shrugged.

“It’s all right.” I rubbed his shoulder. “Things will come around at some point. They said it might help if there are things in your room to help make it homey. Did you want any books or magazines? I could bring in some art supplies like crayons and paper?”

He shook his head. “No. I just want—I want—” He picked up a pillow and threw it. I ducked as it headed in my direction.

As soon as he turned around I left his room. A medical team came in right after I left the room.

It wasn’t going to be easy. They’ll teach him how to deal with all of that stuff in his head. Maybe when I find Avery again, she can help. In the meanwhile, maybe some time and distance is what’s needed.

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Tanja Cilia: The Bridge

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The Bridge

Tanja Cilia

Getting across the bridge was my only hope, but they were closing in rapidly.

The taxi-driver was one of those garrulous ones who tells you what he would do if they were President, Pope, Prime Minister, or Dear Leader. 

I answered him in monosyllables, and laughed and sighed and grunted and exclaimed when he expected it of me. I didn’t even correct him when he showed off and mispronounced Wǔhàn Chángjiāng Dàqiáo differently, each time he said it. 

All the while, I kept looking at the side mirror, hoping my pursuers would get a puncture, or crash, or fall into the river. They had switched off the cherry lights and the sirens, so as not to draw attention to themselves, as soon as they passed The Wuchang Uprising Memorial. 

Anyone with an ick of sense would have recognised the vehicles for what they really were, nonetheless. Beat-up Ford Escorts that are more suited to stock car races than to Mafiosi chasing an informer are a tad out of place in China. They stood out like a sore thumb, but everyone assumed they were crazy tourists having fun. 

They didn’t actually know who they were looking for… the last time they saw me, I had hip-long, black, straight, hair with a fringe that covered my eyebrows, and perfect saubhaya makeup. I was wearing a distinctive oriental red silk dress with slits halfway up my thighs, and teetered on stilettos.

Now, I sported my own gamine blonde haircut, jeans, and a Barney the Dinosaur t-shirt I had picked off the floor in my son’s room, after I got the coded phone call that told me they were on to me. It smelled of Nutella, butter, and rancid sweat… but I didn’t care.

I wanted to put as much distance as possible between me and them, just in case one of the minor staff at the hotel was a spy who had seen me make a run for it.

They knew they would be powerless to act once I crossed Wuhan Yangtze River Bridge, and that is why they were heading that way. It was an educated guess. Not that they could be called educated, by any stretch of the imagination… but you know what I mean.

A traffic jam… just my luck.

Fifty yards?  Shall I make a dash for it? Or will the sight of someone running trigger their responses?  What if they have a sniper rifle with a telescopic sight? 

The thought lodged itself in my skull and refused to move, like a brainworm bad lyric you can’t stop humming. I imagined a red dot blooming on the back of my neck, just below the hairline, a delicate little flower of death. I hunched my shoulders instinctively, as if that might help, and the taxi-driver mistook it for impatience.

“Bridge always like this,” he said cheerfully, gesturing at the snarl of traffic ahead as if it were a beloved family trait. “Government say fix it. Government always say fix it. If I were Government, I would…”

I grunted agreement and stared out of the window. The Yangtze lay beneath us, broad and indifferent, carrying silt, history, and secrets eastward. Revolutions had begun here. Empires had bled here. It seemed absurd to imagine that my own small, ignominious end might take place on the same stretch of water, felled by men who couldn’t even be bothered to visit a barber.

The bridge, all steel and concrete confidence, was strung with cables like the ribs of some vast mechanical beast. Once across, jurisdiction would blur. Paperwork would burgeon, and phones would stop ringing, and the internet would be patchy at best. Favors would suddenly be owed instead of demanded. They knew it. I knew it. That was why this stretch felt longer than the whole journey before it.

The taxi jerked forward a few feet, then stopped again. I risked another glance in the mirror. The Escorts were still there, nosing forward impatiently, drivers hunched low, eyes hidden behind cheap sunglasses bought in bulk at some motorway service station half a world away. I looked away quickly, heart hammering.

I tried to slow my breathing, counting the seconds between the blinks of the indicator lights ahead of us. I told myself that panic was a luxury I couldn’t afford to show, that fear-breathing was noisy, and noise attracted attention. If I bolted now, I would really become a problem that needed solving. If I stayed still, I was just another tired foreigner stuck in traffic, wearing a ridiculous shirt that advertised a purple dinosaur.

The taxi-driver launched into another story; something about his cousin, a failed restaurant, and a misunderstanding involving the only authentic recipe for Peking Duck. I clung to the normality of his voice. Every word he spoke was a thread anchoring me to the ordinary world, the one where bridges were just bridges, not links to life, and traffic jams were just inconveniences, not threats.

The car rolled forward again. Slowly, inexorably, the midpoint of the bridge crept closer. I felt a curious lightness spread through me, not relief exactly, but resolve. Whatever happened next would happen quickly. There would be no more disguises, no more borrowed clothes, no more mirrors.

I straightened in my seat, wiped my hands on my jeans, and fixed my eyes on the far side of the bridge.

Almost there.

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Write the Story January 2026

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Now for January 2026!

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The January 2026 Prompt!

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Here’s the plan:

  • You write a story of up to 10, 000 words + (minimum 500 words) or a poem (Minimum 50 words) based on and referring to the image provided, and post it on the author site you wish to promote. Don’t forget to give your story a title. (Note: You do not have to have a website/blog/FB author page to participate. Your FB profile or WordPress link is acceptable.)
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  • The story must have a title and author name, and the link to the site you wish to promote must be included.
  • Send the story and link to the site via Facebook Messenger to Deborah Ratliff or email to writersunite16@gmail.com. Put “Write the Story” in the first line of the message.
  • Please submit your story by the 25th day of the month.

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