To my fellow creatives, I sometimes struggle with screenwriting, so I get the help of Script Butcher to help revise my scripts. I can tell you for sure this guy is the best at what he does and is eye-opening when very constructive criticisms are made. I highly recommend his services.
Looking for quality script notes?
Script Butcher is a cut above the rest.
If you want to impress an agent, director, producer, or contest reader, your screenplay must be exceptional.
- Is your story visually striking?
- Are your characters engaging?
- Is there a powerful HOOK?
- Is your presentation polished?
- Is your structure solid?
- Does your story deliver on the promise of your premise?
- Is your dialogue memorable and premise specific?
- Does your theme resonate?
Your script needs to accomplish all this and much more in order to succeed.
My in-depth feedback and analysis will address these crucial elements and give you the tools needed to optimize your screenplay’s potential.
You will receive 8-20 pages of notes for TV Pilots and 8-30 pages for Features, with actionable advice based on your specific script needs.
Premium Cuts
Features*
$599
8-30 pages of overall analysis and actionable advice covering your presentation, characters, dialogue, structure, and theme.
*Scripts longer than 120 pages will be charged $5 for each additional page.
Custom
$10.00/per page
For projects such as shorts, podcast scripts or comic books/graphic novels, we can negotiate a rate based on page count.
One-hour TV Pilot
$450
8-20 pages of overall analysis and actionable advice covering your presentation, characters, dialogue, structure, and theme.
Half-hour TV Pilot
$350
8-20 pages of overall analysis and actionable advice covering your presentation, characters, dialogue, structure, and theme.
Along with every order you’ll receive a scanned copy of your script with extensive margin notes, proofreading, and suggested line edits written directly on every single page.
Please note: I’m typically booked months in advance. Turnaround times vary.
What Script Butcher’s customers say
Tamela D’Amico
Truly appreciate your thorough and awesome notes on our script. Thank you!
Paul Zeidman
You make some very good points and some strong & workable suggestions. Thanks for doing this. I really appreciate it.
Austin Kase
These are such excellent and thorough notes, and they’ve already sparked a bunch of ideas to make this script way better. Thank you so much for your time and expertise.
Mark Lombard
WOW! You are well worth the money. Thanks for all the help, Jimmy. So glad I contacted you.
William Seife
Thank you for the fantastic notes and advice! Jimmy over delivers yet again. Seriously thank you!
Natalie Melvin
Thank you for your thorough attention to the story and your invaluable notes. I love your clear sense of direction as a way to improve the script. No words to describe how much work you put into your feedback, and how invaluable it is. Overwhelmed with gratitude for your help.
Joey Scoma
Getting feedback from the Script Butcher was something I didn’t know I needed until I got it! Not only was he able to find blindspots in the story that I had missed, but I got a real sense that he understood the intent behind everything I was going for and was able to offer suggestions to unlock the story’s full potential. I can’t understate the value in receiving his unbiased and fresh perspective. He really knows his stuff.
Adam Cesare
Last week I had a quick phone consultation with Jimmy George. Can’t recommend his insights enough if you’re a screenwriter or’d like to be.
Dankwa Brooks
I’ve studied screenwriting academically since 1995 and I found this process extremely helpful and effective. Thanks again for your tremendous notes. Keep up the good work!
Patrick Boyer
Your comments are amazing. Thank you so much! You’re the real deal dude! Very much appreciated! You rule!!!
Jon Van Dyke
I just finished my first pass on your notes. I can’t tell you how impressed I am with your service.
Your skill and execution are second to none. Your notes are thought out, your suggestions concise and specific, your overall screenwriting knowledge is impressive to say the least…what makes for a good and interesting, dynamic story.
You are truly head and shoulders above any other coverage service I have ever used and ones I know other people have used. Others promise two or three pages of notes for hundreds of dollars. What you gave me back was a 103 page script with awesome, enlightening and intelligent thoughts, suggestions and advice on each and every page!
Plus a detailed breakdown of potential fixes and thoughts to ponder. BRILLIANT is the only word I can manage. Well, that and GRATEFUL.
Christopher Bickel
I cannot recommend the services of Jimmy” George, the Script Butcher,” highly enough. There’s a reason why this guy has a waiting list of screenwriters getting notes from him. He is thorough, insightful, and generous with sage advice on improving your work. This is an unsolicited recommendation from me to you: the guy is worth every penny.
Cody Beavers
I’ve utilized several well-known script feedback services and I can honestly say that Jimmy is the best. Yes, they can get your script back quicker, or within a 3 day turnaround, but the feedback will be generic and not well thought out. I appreciate that Jimmy takes his time to read your script several times before providing useful feedback. Also, he not only provides page notes, which are super helpful, but also overall story notes. No other reading service puts this level of effort into their services. I will be going back to Jimmy in the future.
Braxton Fannin
Thanks so much, Jimmy.
Austin and I have both read it over several times and we’re blown away. This is by far the best script consultation we’ve had. It addresses everything we wanted to know tangibly. Nothing abstract about these notes at all. Incredibly refreshing.
Thank you for going above and beyond with your dedication to understanding what we were going for genre-wise. I’ve never had a consultant do that before.
Our only regret is that we didn’t have you read our previous feature! Well done. This has given us an insane creative boost.
Matt Muchka
Thank you for the amazing notes! Genuinely some of the best, most detailed feedback I’ve ever gotten.
Thomas R. Tinneny
I have had the privilege of working with Script Butcher Jimmy George on a number of screenplays for the film and graphic novel medium. His passion and dedication to story is contagious in every instance that I worked with him. His constructive guidance on structure helps to make me a better writer by enhancing my vision for the story I want to tell.
Jamie Weisgerber
Your script notes certainly exceeded my expectations! Thank you so much. This is exactly the feedback I have been looking for.
Kristen Klebow
Best investment I’ve made on script notes. Thank you Jimmy! I’ll be back!
Ross Boyle
Thanks so much for all your help, insightful and thought-provoking as always! Really appreciate how in-depth and honest you are. My scripts wouldn’t be anywhere near what they are without your input! You’ve been a massive help! Can’t wait to start working on the next draft.
