Title: A Rift the Size of Forever
Characters:Sam Winchester
Rating: PG
Word Count: 100
Spoilers: Season Four
Disclaimer: Unfortunately Supernatural does not belong to me.

Written for [livejournal.com profile] spn_drabble Prompt - Tear Apart



A Rift the Size of Forever



Heaven help me, I’m not who I used to be.

Darkness is taking hold, encompassing my soul, weaving its way through my mind. I can feel it, calling to me, whispering my name.

You used to be my light, a glimmer that kept the night at bay, like a sprinkling of stars across my sky, but you’re just a shadow now, not bright enough to guide me home.

The silence between us is deafening.

No words, no empty promises can heal us. It feels like nothing ever will.

It feels like my heart has been torn apart.

I miss you.

~

From: [identity profile] blueeyedliz.livejournal.com


Gahhhh such a beautifully written look inside Sam's head.

Sam's scene with Chuck in 4x18 made me tear up a little and this did the same.

I love this and I also love the awesome win of spotting one of your drabbles popping up my flist. \0/

From: [identity profile] gidgetgal9.livejournal.com


Oh wow this was so beautiful and so true for this season! :0)

From: [identity profile] devon99.livejournal.com


Thanks so much sweetie, both for your lovely comment and for reading. Nice to hear from you as always ♥

From: [identity profile] atsugari8.livejournal.com


oh sammy *squishes him* I believe this is a very good depiction of canon sam considering what's been happening in the show. A cry for help that no one hears, that's what this feels like to me.

Lovely as always honey :)


From: [identity profile] devon99.livejournal.com


Thanks so much sweetie:)

I think the boys have just lost their way a little. I'm trusting that it will all work out okay though, in the end ♥

From: [identity profile] softbluebuddy.livejournal.com


Absolutely love it. Especially this:

I miss you.

I can see it just like you wrote it. Lovely.

Thank you for sharing. You are wonderful.

From: [identity profile] xenachakram12.livejournal.com


Oh, man. *heartclinch*

This makes my heart hurt.

Know what else makes my heart hurt?? Not having talking to you in forever. I miss you. How are you? *hugs*

From: [identity profile] devon99.livejournal.com


Aww sweetie, thanks for reading and I've missed you too♥ It's lovely to see you back.

I'm well thanks, how are you? Good I hope.
*hugs back*

From: [identity profile] xenachakram12.livejournal.com


I'm good, thanks! I got a little... overwhelmed with fandom, so I took a break. Glad to be back, although I'm not sure I resolved anything. *shrugs* Whatevs. The show is rocking the shit, so I'm pleased! :-D

From: [identity profile] huntress69.livejournal.com


No words, no empty promises can heal us. It feels like nothing ever will.

I think there is something, but it is going to take a lot of time and hard work on both their parts. Thanks, again, for making me reach for the tissues.

From: [identity profile] devon99.livejournal.com


Thanks for reading. I think that they will eventually work through everything. I trust that Kripke will tear them apart then put them back together, well he damn well better!!

Its a cracking season so far.

From: [identity profile] paranoid-woman.livejournal.com


That was so freaking beautiful. The first line is so so strong and the development tears my heart apart until I'm dead by the end. Wonderful job.

From: [identity profile] devon99.livejournal.com


Aww, thanks sweetie for such a lovely comment. Glad you liked it ♥
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