hwc: Takeru and Hikari from Digimon 02 (Digimon - Takari)
hunterwithcause ([personal profile] hwc) wrote in [community profile] digimon2010-07-19 10:42 pm

Beta for a fic

Hi!

I'm looking for a beta for a Digimon 02 one-shot. It's about 3200 words long and the rating is PG-13.


The fic is written in present tense, which is a first for me so I probably need extra help with the odd verb. Apart from that it should be a standard beta job - spelling, grammar, punctuation, characterization, flow and continuity. Nothing too bad, I hope.

The story is an outsider POV of an OFC who believes herself to be Kari's best friend but realises that she's not. The OFC is mentally slightly unbalanced, but nothing bad happens. It's mostly just possessive thoughts and jealousy, it really is a PG-13 fic.

As for pairings, there's a bit of one-sided Kari/OFC, a mention of one-sided Kari/Davis and Kari/TK.

Also, I should probably mention that I'm ESL, so I might have some odd or awkward phrasing/wording in there. And I'm using the original names, in case that's important.

I would be really grateful if someone would agree to beta read for me as I'm at the point where I don't see my mistakes anymore. A fresh pair of eyes would be really helpful.

If you want to check out my writing first, I've posted most of my fics here on dreamwidth. They are all in my journal. (Sorry, I haven't gotten around to making a masterlist, yet.)