wireless: green bin / leaves inside (Stock: leaf me alone)
[personal profile] wireless
I have a problem with point of view. More literally, I have a problem with narrator point of view. It's one of the chief problems in actually getting any of my projects off of the ground. I am violently opposed to first person narration (not the reading of, just the writing of) and every project that I've attempted of any length with first person narration has been dead in the water within a few weeks. I tend to lean towards third person, past tense. A typical storytelling mode.

The biggest problem with Project Revelation is that it desperately wants to be first person narration. I could maybe have relented to this if it was consistent. But it's not. It's really not. I have two main narrating characters. Character A wants to be first person, present tense. Character B wants to be third person, past tense. The two do not go together.

Or do they? Val McDermid used first person diary entries along with third person, past tense narration in one of her novels and it worked for her. But these aren't diary entries, these are actual action scenes.

It doesn't help that Character A is dead.

Date: 2009-11-11 01:04 pm (UTC)
nightbird: Mucha illustration, young peasant holding scythe and grain (abstract functions)
From: [personal profile] nightbird
I don't know, you could make it be justified that that's how they experience the world -- in-the-moment character versus memory-focused character, you know? And use it to expose differences. This is me assuming the two are narrating the same timeline. If not, hells yes you could get away with it.

Date: 2009-11-11 02:27 pm (UTC)
beledibabe: (Default)
From: [personal profile] beledibabe
Interesting. I don't have a problem with stories told in alternating 1st and 3rd POV, as long as the section breaks are clear so I don't stumble from one section to the other and go "buzh?" The POV and tense choice can be so revealing of character! Work with it!

IMO, FWIW. ::g::

Date: 2009-11-11 06:33 pm (UTC)
saramily: (Default)
From: [personal profile] saramily
I say write it the way it wants to be written. At the very worst, it won't work and you'll have to revise those sections.

I have managed to get a LOT done on my current project by going "enh, well, if it doesn't work I can fix it later" and so for once, I will actually have things to fix as opposed to yet another abandoned project.
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