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Aug. 31st, 2026 09:18 amBut I want to be free and entirely my own, and whatever I give shall not bind me.
Bettina von Arnim (1785 – 1895), German writer, illustrator, and composer
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james_davis_nicoll has put up the list of 2026 Hugo Winners.
I never did get around to posting any of my reading; rather than do a comprehensive post, I'm going to do a brief commentary on the winners vs my feelings (either about the winner or the category); this is mostly for my records
* here, the unfinished was one I loathed.
In my quest for a grammar checker that doesn't flirt with generative AI, either in doing genAI analysis you don't want or feeding your words to their training data, I thought I'd try Ellipsus Plus and their "Writing Insights".
This morning, I fed it about 10k words worth of fic I'll be posting soon. Hoping to throw into it a couple of chapters of both my original novels later during the week before the trial ends, too. I guess first, my bad: it doesn't look like this is actually a grammar checker. More like a style checker? But word echoes, sentence lengths, etc are still very useful things I try to fix during my final "proofreading" phase ahead of posting fic or sending a doc to beta-readers, and I liked a lot of their tools.
Also, please allow me to emphasise again how customer-friendly and user-friendly Ellipsus is: you don't need a credit card to start the 7-day trial. Not only that, but they offer a "lifetime" one-time payment plan if you don't want a subscription. And not only-not only that!! If you pick the subscription option, it builds up toward a lifetime licence, so after a couple of years the subscription ends and you own it. I can't think of any other subscription-based service that offers that (or if they do, it sure isn't as obvious and clear as Ellipsus makes it!)
Now, what worked well for me, and what I'm still unfortunately missing. Note that this is obviously based on my personal grammar and prose weaknesses.
Turns out Insights is not actually advertised as a grammar checker, that was my misunderstanding. Whoops.
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I was building this list for myself as I tried it all out, then figured I might as well make a post out of it so I can refer back to it later? It's also a handy list of stuff to check as I continue on my quest for grammar checkers. What tools do you use for grammar? Any rec under the "no thanks AI actually" column? Or tips to remember the rules better in the first place? ;) Then again, some of my problems are rule issues, but just as often it's just distracted typos that happen regardless of knowledge...
( get rekt, idiot )
It's not often you can stand atop the smoking corpse of the boss you've just defeated.
I've earned these photos.
So... my sword dance that I only just made up, which I intended to debut to a friendly audience for critique at Christmas, with the aim of presenting the finished version at our new Shimmyfest next June? That sword dance? I am dancing it at a hafla for a bunch of strangers on 5th September.
What was I thinking?!
Actually, Elizabeth had suggested that in order to drum up attendance at SparkleFens, we should be present at the other local haflas, so that they felt it was only fair to come to ours. Accordingly, when I heard about this one I couldn't help but volunteer.
I think I'm ready. I keep forgetting the dance, but I always do that and have to improvise something until I hit a bit I remember again. So I might as well embrace that as my process.
My outfit is ... 98% ready. I had a dress rehearsal yesterday, and found that the outfit is no trouble to dance in. However there's a bit - when I raise my hands above my head - where the bra rides up, and the black mesh leotard rides down at the front and there is a small gap between them at the middle of the front. That doesn't look good at all.
Accordingly I bought a large red rose, a 20cm length of black stretch mesh, and a half metre length of black velvet from the local haberdashery, with the idea that I could either hide the gap behind the rose, add an extra panel of mesh to the leotard's neckline, or have a velvet drape under the bra.
Then I sewed an extra panel of mesh onto the neckline and added the rose to the bra. Now I need to put everything back on and see if that has sorted the problem, or if I need the velvet drape as well.
The rose is not really goth enough - the red is too bright - but it was the best match they had. I will rub some charcoal into it until it looks like a better fit, and just hope I won't have to go out in the rain.
I had to have my dress rehearsal without music, because when I got to the dance studio it turned out I had left my phone at home. But at least I learned some stuff about the outfit, and in fact dancing the dance without music was probably harder than doing it with.
General status:
Line editing: I had a few GYWO articles around improving prose in my dreamwidth memories, so I kinda tried to create a checklist from that and adjusting it to my needs as I edit the LeopardTree fic. Even without GYWO access, this Tumblr essay covers a lot and one could do worse than compressing it into a list! Making my own list of weak annoying words I abuse, too (grab, move, make...). So far so good, though it's nowhere as joyful as the structural edits were for the Soul Thief!! (Still chasing that editing high XD) I guess by forcing myself to actually rework my sentences or find synonyms rather than just go "Urgh! Grabbing again!" I'm hoping the stronger words will come to me more naturally over time, rather than remain stuck in my passive vocabulary. One can hope (and experiment ;)).
Cursed Witch feedback: I reread all the feedback and wrote a big thoughtdump post, which as I hoped took the thoughts of my mind to make space for other things. The conversations in the comments also turned out really helpful, I'm still turning a few replies in my head. Whatever happens next, though, I need to let it rest for longer.
BBTP smut: I finished the maid smut one-shot, but editing it is taking more time than expected, especially considering the upcoming September 1st deadline...! I haven't written or edited smut in a long time. I still hope to make it in time for
bbtp_challenge though!
Projects:
I really liked Cameron Reed's What We Are Seeking overall. It has a lot to recommend it. But while I unreservedly loved the first half, I found myself increasingly disappointed and frustrated with the turns the story was taking as I read through the second.
I should say that many of my thoughts here came from a) a conversation with Tumblr user moongoer, and b) another conversation with
skygiants and
brownbetty on Mastodon. Credit where credit is due!
( cut for spoilers. also for length. hilarious that I thought this would just be a few sentences )