Silence...

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With each spoken word,
the music escalates,
in intesity and fervour.

The anticipation
of the climax,
the heart knows,
the mind dreads.

Eyes wander,
as if to escape.
but then realise,
they can't.

Words they are,
Just words.
He reassures himself.
As if he can.

He falls, crashes
without moving.
Fingers tighten around the arm rest,
as if to the music.

It gets too loud,
a pandemonium
yet,
he strains to hear...

..the Silence.




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Comments

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BD said…
Superb!
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LOVED the way you ended it!!
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Cяystal said…
Hey,
I loved the end as well!!

Intriguing one..really
Great blog,mate!!

CheeRz,
Aayushi
(hope to see you at my blog SOON :D)
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Pranay said…
To all.....Thanks a lot u guys...:). Appreciate it.
And to Aayushi- welcome to my blog...glad u liked it.
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Anonymous said…
Paralysis, is was came to mind while reading this.. he is paralyzed, by the silence.. he wants to see something but there is nothing to see... that is my mind running with the poem!! lol

Thanks for stopping by! hope to see you again
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Preeti said…
Ahem! Ur giving me a complex... :-/ :P
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crasiezt said…
Brilliant! Very very nice!
Thanks for the blogroll...gonna add you as well:-)
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Pranay said…
@cinder-single- That is almost exactly what it means...thank god, I ve been able to put it across..:)

@Preeti-hehehe...in what way??

@crasiezt-Oh thank you very much!!:) hope to c u again soon..
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Keshi said…
beautiful!

sometimes the sound of silence can be deafening tho...

Keshi.
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Pranay said…
Thnks Keshi...
Exactly...
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Julie Nygaard said…
incredible poem :)
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Pranay said…
@ julie- Thanks a lot...:)
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sid said…
I liked the end...n phew..i gotta come by this one again...was interestingly weaved!
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P said…
Silence is therapeutic
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Pranay said…
@ sid- Thanks dude...:)

@ priya- Not always...sometimes, it itself is the disease.
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neat.. sometimes silence rings ur ears...
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Pranay said…
Ego_ Thanks....right.
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simran said…
''the heart knows,
the mind dreads.

Eyes wander,
as if to escape.
but then realise,
they can't.'' ......

loved these lines ....
sumtimes words r not jus enuf ..

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