Book review: Crucible
Apr. 8th, 2015 09:52 am
Crucible by Elizabeth McCoyMy rating: 4 of 5 stars
I really love Elizabeth McCoy's work. I've been following and recommending her for a couple years, and Crucible is the strongest of her books since Herb-Witch.
So there's a romance trope where either the heroine is captured by pirates and falls in love with the pirate captain, or is rescued with her virtue intact by a dashing and noble man. This is not that trope. For one thing, the princess is male. For another, he is more-or-less self-rescuing, but does end up in the company of some pretty awesome people and they have adventures. His virtue is sadly not intact, and that bothers him and affects him for the rest of the book. That seemed not-implausible to me.
His....traveling party, I guess, is composed of a girl he rescues, and a priest who rescues them both. Both the priest and the girl have some elements of his language, but neither is fluent, and it is frustrating for everyone (including this reader) that they are stuck at a pidgin level of communication that improves only slowly as they are together. In fact, this is one of the romance impediments. Instead of a "misunderstanding" based on people being dorks and not talking to each other, the characters literally misunderstand each other sometimes, because of language barriers. The thing that keeps this from sliding into the looming threat of Jar-Jar-Binksyness is that the internal thoughts of the speakers is clear and eloquent, so we know that they are thinking "like us", but they just cant communicate it fully.
This book is set on a different continent than the first three, and I think that's useful to make it a stand-alone. You could read this without needing any of the three books that came before it.
I'm going to be thinking on and chewing on this book for a while, I can tell. The prose is workmanlike but not notable, the plot, when reduced to its essentials reads like a roleplaying campaign, but the PEOPLE and the WORLDBUILDING are amazing and thought-provoking, and there are a lot of hints and branches that a curious reader can follow in contemplation.
Point for gender-nerds: If this book is not nominated for next year's Tiptree award, it will be a travesty, because it's the most interesting exploration of gender I've read in ages. It's a little hard to go into why without being spoilery, but suffice it to say that there are characters who change their assigned birth sex, and their assigned gender, and THEIR SOCIETAL GENDER, and all of this is happening in a faintly-renaissance world where gender ROLES are pretty firmly defined.
Read if: You have liked any of McCoy's previous books. You are longing for a book that would be hard to publish because of taboo subjects like menstruation and gender fluidity. You would love there to be a world where people try to take each other as presented.
Skip if: Off-screen rape is a hard stop for you. You can't handle reading broken "English" for an entire book.
Also read: Sherwood Smith's A Stranger to Command, for a lost prince and a magical girl that subvert all expectation.
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